posuke (posuke) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I am working in an office in Tokyo. As I received the following email from main office, I called you from this telephone number yesterday. As the main office is interested in ordering this brand, I will send the document by email. What is the price you request? What volume are you going to order? If it is ordered within this month, I am going to send it from Tokyo in April. What other brand are you interested in? If possible, may I see you in Osaka next month? Or do you have a chance to come to Tokyo?

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I am working in the Tokyo office. As I received the following email from the main office, I called you from this telephone number yesterday. According to the main office, you are interested in ordering this brand. For your reference, I am attaching to this email relevant materials. ↵
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What would be the price range you are interested in? What would be the quantity you are looking at? If we receive your order within this month, your order is scheduled to ship from Tokyo in April. What other brands would you be interested in? If possible, may I see you in Osaka next month? Or do you have any plans to come to Tokyo?

元の翻訳
Hello, how are you?
I am so happy that you will come to Japan again.
Shall we climb a mountain without fail. This summer, I climbed the Mt Fuji 30 times.

We will climb the mountain on the day! I have the day vacant as it is next year.

What route I recommend you is Yoshida route, but Suhashi route is recommended too. I will be all right with either route.↵
Cabin will be bee at the 4th level to go up to the peak on the next day. The cabin I am a member is good.

I will write what you need to bring as follows.

I look forward to seeing you then.

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Hello, how have you been?
I am so happy that you will come to Japan again.
Let's go mountain climbing together. This summer, I climbed Mt Fuji 30 times.

Why don't we climb the mountain the day you come next year? My schedule is currently open as the target date is one year away.

My recommendation is via the Yoshida trail. The Subashiri trail is also recommendable. Whichever you like should be fine. I recommend staying at a mountain hut at the 8th station in order to reach the summit next day. The hut that I am member of would work.

The following is a list of necessary equipment:

I look forward to seeing you then.

元の翻訳
Thank you for purchasing the item this time.↵
We are really sorry but, we cannot deliver it on due time as with a shipping trouble.
Then, we refunded ¢10.
The item will be at your hand within 1-2 weeks.
If you would like to cancel it, we will issue you a fund.↵
Please contact us.
We apologize for this inconvenience.

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Thank you for your purchasing.↵
To our regret, it has turned out that we are unable to deliver the order on time due to shipping problems.
Under the circumstances, we have paid back $10 to you.
We will have the order delivered to you within 1-2 weeks.
However, If you would like to cancel your order, please contact us immediately so we that we can refund you the total amount.
We apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.

元の翻訳
Is it means that there is no stain or discoloration in the actual merchandise?

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Does it mean that there is no stain or discoloration in the actual merchandise?

元の翻訳
Do you mean that the actual product doesn't have any discoloration or smudge?

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Do you mean that the actual product doesn't have any stains or discoloration?

元の翻訳
I did as instructed, but the suitcase won't open. I will take care of the return postage costs, please refund me and return it.

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I followed the instructions, but the suitcase won't open. Please accept return and refund. I will pay the return shipping cost.

元の翻訳
I was contacted about this case XX amount of times. Please send to XX from now on.

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I contacted XX again regarding this matter. I have once again asked XX to proceed with the shipment.

元の翻訳
I have asked this through email yesterday already, but again, could you please give some informations about the following?

It seems like those two ASIN are in error.
The pages for the products are not opened correctly.
Two pages are combined into one.
I appreciate if you could modify it and properly separate them.

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I asked you about this by email yesterday, but could you please give me your ideas about the following for my future reference?

It seems that the two ASINs below have caused the error(s).
The product pages are not shown properly.
Two pages are combined into one page.
I appreciate if you could modify them so that each page show the right content.

元の翻訳
I sent you emails many times but I haven't received your reply yet.
Therefore, I would like to cancel once in this request.

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I sent you emails many times but I haven't received your reply yet.
Therefore, at this time I will cancel this request.

元の翻訳
I emailed you several times but I couldn't receive any of reply from you so that I need to cancel the request placed shortly for a moment.

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I emailed you several times, but I have not received any reply from you. At this time, I will cancel the request.

元の翻訳
I sure would like to go out with you though, as there were packages delivered yesterday and today, and the children are very tired. As I would like them to take some rest tomorrow, I feel sorry but we cannot go out. We look forward to seeing you on another day.

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I sure would like to go out with you though, our packages just having arrived yesterday and today, the children look very tired. As I would like them to take some rest tomorrow, I am sorry but we cannot go out. We look forward to seeing you on another day.

元の翻訳
Subject: To request for Web meeting at 13:00~15:00 on 30 March (Fri.)
Content:
To Mr Mark,

Although a real discussion will be after April, is it possible to have a Web meeting at 13:00~15:00 (Hong Kong time) on 30 March?↵
While asking about the documents sent, we would like to understand more of your company's business content.
As we are not good at English, we are going to accompany an interpreter.
We are sorry for the precise time, but please consider it.

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Subject: Re: Requesting a web meeting between 13:00 and 15:00 on March 30th (Fri.)
Content:
Dear Mark,

Can we have a web meeting between 13:00 and 15:00 (Hong Kong time) on March 30th before we have a substantive meeting probably after April?↵
We would like to learn more about your company's business by asking you questions about the documents that you provided us.
An English interpreter will also attend the meeting as we are not so familiar with English language.
Please forgive us for giving you the specific time and date for a proposed meeting. We look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
手紙を日本に送りたいのですが、なにも返事がないことがた時々あります。
どうにか解決できないでしょうか？

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手紙を日本に送りたいのですが、5月頃はしばらくの間返事を受け取ることができません。
どうすればよいでしょうか？

元の翻訳
280026,

どうぞここに添付したオリジナルのサンプルと訂正したスペックサンプルの両方の比較写真を貴方のご理解と再検討のためにご覧ください。

ー写真をご確認ください。
ースペックを変更するために、スツールの見栄えとデザインが変更されます。
ーこの輸出者が商品がよく見えないと思はないために。
ーそれゆえに、輸入者はスペックを以前同様にしてほしいと提案しています。
ーどうぞそれに従って商品がなされるようにアドバイスとレビューをよろしくお願いいたします。

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280026,

オリジナルのサンプルと仕様を変更したサンプルの両方の比較写真を添付しますので、検討とご確認をお願いします。

ー写真をご確認ください。
ー仕様変更によって、スツールの外観とデザインが変更されています。
ーそのため、輸出者は商品の見栄えがよくないと感じています。
ーそこで輸出者から、以前のままの仕様にしてほしいとの意見が出されています。
ー適切に生産を行えるよう、ご検討及びご助言をお願いします。

元の翻訳
ご連絡ありがとうございます。また、ご不便をおかけして申し訳ございません。ログイン時にメールアドレスがなぜ使えなくなったのか私ではわかりかねますので、IT担当者に貴殿のアドレスを見てもらいます。

何か分かり次第すぐにご連絡差し上げます。それまでにご希望の商品がございましたら私のメールにご注文いただければこちらでご注文をたまわります。

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ご連絡ありがとうございます。また、ご不便をおかけして申し訳ございません。ログイン時にメールアドレスがなぜ使えなくなったのか私ではわかりかねますので、IT担当者に貴殿のアドレスを見てもらいます。

何か分かり次第すぐにご連絡差し上げます。当面の間ご注文を希望される商品がございましたら、私にメールにてお知らせいただければ注文処理をさせていただきます。

元の翻訳
This product needs to be shipped to Japan in this month.
If the seller cancels the deal, I have to find and purchase one from another seller immediately.
Could you please confirm the date of shipment with the seller for me?
Thank you very much for your help.

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This product needs to be shipped to Japan within this month.
If the seller cancels the deal, I have to purchase one from another seller immediately.
Could you please confirm the date of shipment with the seller for me?
Thank you very much for your help.

元の翻訳
Thank you for making an inquiry.
I am not sure yet since the item has not been returned to Japan. But I checked by tracking information of USPS, and tracked to the point that the item was delivered to MPSA on February 25th. After that, I cannot track it.
I hate to ask you, but would you call the nearest MPSA or USPS, and tell that you have not received the item with tracking number?
If you still cannot find it after that, I will refund you since the same situation might highly happen again.↵
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Please purchase it again and designate a different address.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
Although the actual situation is unknown as the item has not been returned to Japan, according to the tracking information of USPS, it has been found that the item was delivered up to MPSA on February 25th. No further records are available.
Would you please call the nearest MPSA or USPS and tell them that you have not received the item with the tracking number ****?
If you still cannot find it, I will refund you, rather than resending it to avoid the same likely outcome. Please purchase it again and designate a different shipping address.

元の翻訳
Will the person pay in a lump?

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Will the person pay you in a lump sum?

元の翻訳
Will they pay you back your money at once?

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Will the other party pay you back in a lump sum?

元の翻訳
購入したナイキ・エア・フォース　1の送り状が要ります。イタリア税関が、自分が靴を受け取るためには必要としています。
宜しくお願いします。

Stefano

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購入したナイキ・エア・フォース1のインボイスが必要になりました。靴が配達されるために、イタリア税関 はインボイスを要求しています。
ご対応をお願いします。↵
宜しくお願いします。
ステファノ

元の翻訳
Yesterday, I went BAR with friends. It was spacious and beautiful inside and the staff members are very good with atmosphere. On the TV monitor, there were always sports, music and stock information. The best of all, alcohol was reasonable and good. I was content with the full of food in menu. I would like to go there again.

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Yesterday, I went to this bar with my friends. It was spacious and beautiful inside, and I really liked the atmosphere of the staff members. Sports, music, stock prices, etc. were streamed constantly on the television monitor. What I liked best was that alcoholic beverages were offered at very reasonable prices and they tasted good. I was also greatly satisfied with their extensive food menu. I would like to go there again.

元の翻訳
I am busy at work lately but it is very fulfilling.
Mr. S and I are planning to start our company together in Japan.
I will establish one in the US with his support as well.

I just refund the fee through PayPal some time ago.

Could you check it, please?

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I have been busy at work lately, but it is very fulfilling.
Mr. S and I are planning to start a company together in Japan.
I will establish another company in the US as well with his support.

I refunded the fee through PayPal a while ago.

Please confirm the payment.↵
Best regards,↵
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元の翻訳
Thank you for your support this time again.
Were you relaxed on New Year's Days?
I will make a payment to Taiwan once more time.
As it is a company that places an order once every three months,↵
I will leave the money to Willy as a payment in advance.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for your support this time again.
Did you have relaxing New Year holidays?
I will make a payment to Taiwan one more time.
I have decided to leave some money to Willy as an advance payment because I order from him at least once in every three months.
Many thanks!

元の翻訳
I did not find a problem when I checked how body of Nikon works before sending it.
But I will issue you a refund at 40 US dollars since I have caused you an inconvenience as you received the item behind schedule and focus was adjusted.
Would you agree with me?
If you agree, I will ask you to close the case, and refund you via PayPal thereafter.
I appreciate your consideration for it.

Finally I have a favor to ask you. May we ask you to give us positive feedback?

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I did not find any problems when I checked the performance of this item in a Nikon body before the delivery.
However, I am considering refunding you US$40 for focus adjustment as I have caused you an inconvenience due to the delayed delivery.
How does this sound to you?
If you have no objections, I will ask you to close the present case and then I will refund you via PayPal.
I appreciate your consideration of this proposal.

Finally, I have a favor to ask you. Could you please give us a positive feedback?