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I looked for the ticket by which I can leave Osaka on Wednesday, but its price is double of the normal price.

If possible, I would like to travel based on the following schedule.
As I search brand in this trip, I will pay for the ticket.

If you don't mind, I would like to talk about business in the hotel where you are staying in the eventing of the day I arrive.

On Tuesday I am going to make an appointment for the customer we already have when you have the time.

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I looked for the ticket by which leaves Osaka on Wednesday, but its price is double the normal price.

If possible, I would like to travel based on the following schedule.
As I will also look for new brand name products for myself in this trip, I will pay for the ticket.

If you don't mind, I would like to talk about the business at the hotel you will stay in the evening of the day I arrive.

On Tuesday I am going to make an appointment for the customer we already have when you have time.

元の翻訳
After the $4.30 refund, I will pay for sure.
Please let me know the details on how long it will take for the refund.

I love your products.
Please give us your kind regards as we wish to continue a long term business with you.
Thank you.

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When I receive the $4.30 refund, I will pay for sure.
Please let me know the details on how long it will take for the refund.

I love your products.
Please give us your kind regards as we wish to continue a long term business with you.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Your blog is amazing! I would like to collaborate with you!

I can provide the following items. Could you use them and give a review?
We've recently started up the company, so we can't afford to paying you a huge reward, however, we swear that we will give you 10 percent of sales if your blog-reader saw your posting and bought the item.

It would be glad that not only item reviews but also our videos and links to our EC site are posted in your blog as well.

I will send you items as soon as you could let us know your address.

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Your blog is amazing! I would like to collaborate with you!

I can provide the following items. Could you use them and give a review?
We've recently started up the company, so we can't afford to pay you a huge reward, however, we swear that we will give you 10 percent of sales if your blog-reader saw your posting and bought the item.

I would be glad if you could post our videos and links to our EC site on your blog as well as the item reviews.

I will send you items as soon as you let us know your address.

元の翻訳
Thanks for the message.
We are acknowledged.
Please return the item to the below address.

We will proceed to the refund process once your item is received at our end.

Thanks for the message.
We will ship the item immediately.
We are sorry for the delay.

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Thanks for the message.
We understand.
Please return the item to the below address.

We will proceed to the refund process once your item is received at our end.

Thanks for the message.
We will ship the item immediately.
We are sorry for the delay.

元の翻訳
サブリナディープ：ブッカケとギャングバングの女王

私は1978年9月11日に生まれで、2007年9月11日の私の29歳の誕生日のパーティーのお祝いの中でウェブカメラで生中継で連続で77人の男性にされたことがきっかけでポルノ女王として一躍火がついたのです。
今でもネット上での最大最長のギャングバングの生中継では世界記録です。
それからファンのみなさんとセックスを楽しむことを続けています。2009年2010年に私がブッカケとギャングバングの女王として開花したアメリカで最も人気のラジオ、ホワードステーンショーに招待さました。
ファンとデートもしますし、プライベートの電話番号も交換しますのでいつでも話したいときに話せるのです。

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サブリナディープ　ブッカケとギャングバングの女王

私は1978年9月11日に生まれ、2007年9月11日の私の29歳の誕生日のパーティーのお祝いの最中にウェブカメラで生中継で連続で77人の男性にされたことがきっかけでポルノ女王としての人気に一躍火がついたのです。
今でもネット上のギャングバングの生中継としては最大最長の世界記録です。
それからファンのみなさんとセックスを楽しむことを続けています。2009年2010年に私がブッカケとギャングバングの女王としてアメリカで最も人気のラジオ、ハワードスターンショーに招待さました。
ファンとデートもしますし、プライベートの電話番号も交換しますのでいつでも話したいときに話せるのです。

元の翻訳
As you can confirm in the photo there is a split on the surface of the right side of the box
Please check the photo properly. We desire only bidders that truly understand that the quality of the product has deteriorated over the years.
In relation to conditions we cannot accept returned goods.

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As you can confirm in the photo, there is a crack on the surface of the right side of the box
Please check the photo carefully. We ask bidders to understand that the product has deteriorated over the years before placing a bid.
We cannot accept returns for the condition of the item .

元の翻訳
There is the cracking on right side of box so as to confirm in the photo.
I would like you to bid after having confirmed the photo neatly and understood deterioration by lapse of time.
I can't receive return of item on conditions.

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There is a crack on the right side of the box as you can see in the photo.
I ask you to bid after having observed the photo carefully and understood deterioration by lapse of time.
I can't accept returns for the condition of the item.

元の翻訳
It is all right for me up to the point you could tell me, but do you obtain items from persons related to Lufthansa?, or from China?

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Please talk about it to the extent that you can, do you obtain items from persons related to Lufthansa, or from China?

元の翻訳
ご返信ありがとうございます。DHLでの配送がなされなかったとのこと、誠に申し訳ございません。請求書については、支払に進む際にメール中のリンクをクリックして頂きますと、前回と同様、 .... place the other のotherについて、文脈がわからずそこは訳せていません。）

5.　ハンモックを屋内に設置することはできますか？
もちろん可能です。当店のハンモックフックをご利用になるか、ラグフックをお近くの工具店でお買い求めください。壁にネジで設置する際は、必ずスタッドを使い両端を固定して下さい。

6.　ハンモックのお手入れの仕方を教えて下さい。
ハンモックは種類によってそれぞれが異なり、丁寧なお手入れが必要です。ほとんどのハンモックは中性洗剤による洗濯、自然乾燥が可能です。（従来型の乾燥機の使用はお控えください。）

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ご返信ありがとうございます。誠に申し訳ございませんが、DHLでの配送はしておりません。請求書を送りましたが、ご注文は前回のようにメール内のリンクをクリックして決済に進んでください。

5.　ハンモックを屋内に設置することはできますか？
もちろん可能です。当店のハンモックフックをご利用になるか、ラグフックをお近くの工具店でお買い求めください。壁にネジで設置する際は、必ずスタッドを使い両端を固定して下さい。

6.　ハンモックのお手入れの仕方を教えて下さい。
ハンモックは種類によってそれぞれが異なり、丁寧なお手入れが必要です。ほとんどのハンモックは中性洗剤による洗濯、自然乾燥が可能です。（従来型の乾燥機の使用はお控えください。）

元の翻訳
Hello.
The wrong product is listed in the invoice I have just received.
Could you please send an invoice for the “Volvo”?
The shipping address is in the US. Thank you for free shipping.

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Hello.
A wrong product is listed on the invoice I have just received.
Could you please send an invoice for the “Volvo”?
The shipping address is in the US. Thank you for free shipping.

元の翻訳
I'd like to purchase 40 x ○○ in June, so could you please assure stock?
Do you still have all colors in stock?

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I'd like to purchase 40 x ○○ in June, so could you please secure the stock?
Do you still have all colors in stock?