kensuke.mikuni (micken) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Nut[right handed type],center tone pot all replaced / back plate is locking.
Right handed player can use it with reversed guitar form like Jimi hendrix.

Sorry, the guitar asked by you have sold before right now.
But we can prepare the same model as the guitar from our stock.
so we would ask it for you.
Price is A $.
Sorry, we don't have call number, but can response with only e-mail.
I hope your understand.

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Nut[right handed type],center tone pot all replaced / back plate is locking.
Right handed player can use it with reversed guitar form like Jimi hendrix.

Sorry, the guitar asked by you has been sold right now.
But we can prepare the same model as the guitar from our stock.
So we would ask it for you.
Price is A $.
Sorry, we don't have a phone number, but can respond with only e-mail.
I hope you understand.

元の翻訳
The private cloud foundation structure automatizes infrastructural works and make possible easy access to cloud computer.

The reputation for each products is not so difference.

I got the first prior point in the selection as they did accurate answer for delivery SE and had so strong motivation for leading the proposal positively.

O could only coordinate SE that will correspond the actual delivery works at most.
They were given one more chance to re-try,but they could not response for the ask
because starting date to structure was coming to close.

To do the proposal at forward stance with prospect for rival's approaching and client's request.
To input the information directly to BU relative staff too, and ask a support.

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The private cloud foundation structure automatizes infrastructural works and make possible easy access to cloud computer.

The reputation for each products is not so difference.

I got the first prior point in the selection as they did accurate answer for delivery SE and had so strong motivation for leading the proposal positively.

O could only coordinate SE that will correspond the actual delivery works at most.
They were given one more chance to re-try, but they could not response for the ask
because starting date to structure was coming to close.

To do the proposal at forward stance with prospect for rival's approaching and client's request.
To input the information directly to BU relative staff too, and ask a support.

元の翻訳
You should not say backbiｔing and abuse.
Nobody are happy to hear them.
That is backfire to you.
You have to put it on your mind.

You should not have distinction by dependence on each people.
You should not change your behavior by staff.
Wrong behavior for relation ship with your staff are that you give a part of staffs privilege, or hardship, particular reputation.
You will lost a leader's belief.

Exclude a self-interest
You should put your interest to back-turn.
Unless you have mindset what you can do for around you, people don't follow you.

To have your indication
You should restrict the obscure behavior and no stance.
You should have decision rule and value sight like you.

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You should not say [doesn't go with the objects] backbiｔing and abuse.
Nobody are [S-v agreement] happy to hear them.
That will backfire on you.
You have to put it on your mind [awkward].

You should not have distinction by dependence on each people.
You should not change your behavior by staff.
Wrong behavior for relationship with your staff are [s-v agreement] that you give a part of staffs [grammar?] privilege, or hardship, particular reputation.
You will lost a leader's belief.

Exclude a self-interest
You should put your interest to back-turn.
Unless you have mindset what you can do for around you, people don't follow you.

To have your indication
You should restrict the obscure behavior and no stance.
You should have decision rule and value sight like you.

元の翻訳
MTV[KUMI KODA　Best Live Selection]

Check It out. This is live movie that edited "KODA KUMI LIVE TOUR 2014 ～Bon Voyage～"toured 51stages featuring her music album "Bon Voyage"released at last year with the other rare live movie.
You should be able to get interest with the dynamics as if you are real audience at the live holl from the movie showing the sophisticated vocalist performance,dance performance,marvelous staging direction ,exciting stage.

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MTV [KUMI KODA Best Live Selection]

Check It out. This is a live movie that edited [ungrammatical] "KODA KUMI LIVE TOUR 2014 ～Bon Voyage～"toured 51stages featuring her music album "Bon Voyage"released last year with the other rare live movie [unclear].
You should be able to get interest [unnatural] with the dynamics as if you are real audience at the live holl [spelling] from the movie showing the sophisticated vocalist performance, dance performance, marvelous staging direction, exciting stage.

元の翻訳
［Overwhelming real touchable console type］
This is console type item that childish body line is featured !
If you use it your body pillow cover and put it by your bed,Your tension will be pushed. it is adopting the flat bottom,
so you can use putting it.
Usable places are unlimited.
Featuring a big size protrusion with no dimension process and twice composition,In the addition the spec is full thick ↵
volume, insert touch is excellent!
It is set with 120ml hyaluronic acid and Ag mixture lotion.

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［Overwhelming real touchable console type］
This is a console type item that childish body line is featured [unclear]!
If you use it your body pillow cover and put it by your bed, your tension will be pushed [unclear]. It is adopting [tense confusion] the flat bottom,
so you can use putting it [unclear].
Usable places are unlimited.
Featuring a big size protrusion with no dimension process [unclear] and twice composition [unclear], in addition the spec is full thick volume, insert touch is excellent!
It comes with 120ml hyaluronic acid and Ag mixture lotion.

元の翻訳
Dear↵
↵
I have send order A to Ryan yesterday.↵
But sorry If you didn't deal with it, Please cancel it.
Right now I send you order B. I would add the part of order A to order B.

I understood the reason why delivering is being late.
Even if it delay, as possible I would take it within next week.

Also, Thank you for your helping margin cut 30€.
Today i will order one additional order.so could you take this margin cut too.
Right now, I'm waiting for below goods.
Please check the order.

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I sent order A to Ryan yesterday, but If you haven't processed it, please cancel it.
I have just sent you order B, which includes a part of order A.

I understood the reason why delivering is being late.
Even if it gets delayed, I would like to receive it next week.

Also, thank you for your waving a 30€ commission fee.
Today I will order one additional item, so could you take this margin cut too [awkward]?
Right now I'm waiting for the following goods.
Please check the order.

元の翻訳
Excuse me.
I don't know what you say.

I took this goods from the same business trader as me.
At this time, I have purchased this from them again.
I was teached how to sell at ebay by them.

But they and i don't take corporation in ebay business.

Of course, we don't share the ownership.

I don't know what accident you had before.
Please don't offend me.

If you don't stop, i may claim a police officer.

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Excuse me.
I don't know what you are talking about.

I took this goods from the same business trader as me.
At this time, I have purchased this from them again.
I was taught how to sell at ebay by them.

But they and I don't take corporation in ebay business.

Of course, we don't share the ownership.

I don't know what accident you had before.
Please don't offend me.

If you don't stop, I may claim a police officer.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your ask.
Cost free pattern can allow you to download if you push add to cart button, add it to cart, go from proceed to checkout button to forward.
We recommend you Paypal to settle the account.
That is ￥0, so the order is finished without bill to you.

Please refer the FAQ in below link about downloading the file.

修正後
Thanks for your inquiry.
Free patterns can be downloaded if you push add to cart button, add it to cart, go from proceed to checkout button to forward.
We recommend you Paypal to settle the payment.
That is ￥0, so the order is finished without billing to you.

Please refer the FAQ in below link about downloading the file.

元の翻訳
ただいま調査中ではありますが、こちらで調べたところ、あなたが発送手数料を設定していました。そのため、ASINが発送費を8.96ドルと判断していたようです。↵
私は社内のチームと確認したところ、その変更はあなたのアカウントで作られているようです。

さらに、こちらであなたのアカウントを確認し、あなたがユーザー許可認定をもっていることがわかりました。
ですからその変更は、この件のユーザーであるあなたから作れたものであるとおもいます。

この件について、問題を修正するために、それを取り消すためのファイルをアップロードしてください。
ASINの現状の発送手数料を取り消すには、手数料を設定するために作ったファイルを開き、ASINの取り消し更新コラムの中で取り消しを実行して、ファイルをアップロードしなおしてください。

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ただいま調査中ではありますが、こちらで調べたところ、あなたが発送手数料を設定していました。そのため、ASINが発送費を8.96ドルと判断していたようです。私が社内のチームに確認したところ、その変更はあなたのアカウントで行なわれたことが確認されました。

さらに、こちらであなたのアカウントを確認し、あなたがユーザー許可認定をもっていることがわかりました。
ですからその変更は、ユーザーであるあなたによって行なわれたものであると思われます。

この件について、問題を修正するために、それを取り消すためのファイルをアップロードしてください。
ASINの現状の発送手数料を取り消すには、手数料を設定するために作ったファイルを開き、ASINの取り消し更新コラムの中で取り消しを実行して、ファイルをアップロードしなおしてください。

元の翻訳
Your laggage has arrived at Australia at a first.↵
But according from information answered by japan post express,↵
Australia post has done delivering miss.
due to this,your laggage has been arrived at me again.(They misunderstood the delivery address)
You said although one month spending since it happened, it don't stil arrive at you.
I think that the delivering miss happened again after that has been delivered from Japan to Australia.
We can't persuite the laggage location in Australia nation.
So we don't know at the detail, I think that your laggage may be stored in Australia post office and tax center.

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Your laggage [spelling] arrived in Australia at first, but according to Japan Post, Australia post has done [tense confusion] delivering miss [awkward].
Because of this, your laggage [spelling] was returned to me (They misunderstood the delivery address).
You said although one month spending since it happened, it don't stil [spelling] arrive at you.
I think that the delivering miss happened again after that has been delivered from Japan to Australia.
We can't persuite the laggage [spelling] location in Australia nation.
So we don't know at the detail, I think that your laggage [spelling] may be stored in Australia post office and tax center.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your mail.
I could use it in the borders meeting just the time limit before.

Like following opinion came out in the meeting.

・For introducing A, specialized native have to be assigned necessarily.
Also experienced one who have teached management education will be needed.
If the labor resources are only at this status, it will be weak.
・B will be started likely fast. C will be understood at easy.

To discuss about partner companies and labor resources in our inner meeting, Please give me a while time.
↵
Before that,Could you localize only B at first time?
Could you be easy if i take communication with sales correspondents since after this?

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Thanks for your mail.
I could use it in the borders meeting just in time.

The following opinions were brought up in the meeting:

・To introduce A, a specialized native has to be assigned.
Also, an experienced person who has a background of management education will be needed.
If the labor resources are only at this status, it will be rather difficult.
・B can be introduced early. C is easy to understand.

We would like to discuss about the partner companies and labor resources in our internal meeting, so please give us some time.
Also, could you localize B first?
↵
Would it be easy if I communicate with a sales person in charge from now on?

元の翻訳
Please let me ask.
Our company business is direct selling supply goods to young consumers with
proposing movie productive style.
We took an attention to product A and
B from your product line up.
At the same,we have a plan that we import to sell them focusing to each targets.
As far as i see japanese dealer's web site,that seem not to work.
So please let me know if we can stock them from your company by some pieces.

If it's available, let me hear the trade rules such as how about the lot and etc.

regards

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Please let me ask.
Our company business is directly selling supply goods to young consumers with
proposing movie productive style.
We took an attention to product A and
B from your product line up.
At the same,we have a plan that we import to sell them focusing to each targets.
As far as I see Japanese dealer's web site,that seem not to work.
So please let me know if we can stock them from your company by some pieces.

If it's available, let me hear the trade rules such as how about the lot and etc.

Regards

元の翻訳
はじめに先日の発送での混乱と今日対応するはずのお客様が支払いたい300ドルのクレジットについて、今から国際輸送を引き受けられる会社を調べて、確認し、ご連絡する対応が遅れたことをおわびします。
もしもこの発送を我々が費用をもちすぐに行う必要があれば、お伝えください。
(今から対応できる別な会社を使う場合、↵
初めて使うため、支障があったら、代理業社に確認しなければなりません。

修正後
はじめに先日の発送での混乱と今日対応するはずのお客様が支払いたい300ドルのクレジットについて、今から国際輸送を引き受けられる会社を調べて、確認し、ご連絡する対応が遅れたことをおわびします。
もしもこの発送を我々が費用をもちすぐに行う必要があれば、お伝えください。
（今から対応できる別な会社を使う場合、初めて使うため、支障があったら、代理業社に確認しなければなりません。）

元の翻訳
私はあなたからの知らせをもとに重さが待ちがっていたことで超過払いがあることを知っています。私はあなたにいくつか支払方法をお伝えします。それを選んでいただければ、私たちはすぐに送る準備をして、対応できます。それを使えば、費用をもっと抑えられるかもしれません。
私が話さなければならない300ドルの支払いをあなたが受け取っているなら、彼らは空港に飛行機の手配をしたはずです。また私が添付して、目立つようにしておいた見積で決めています。
もしあなたがそれと違う金額を知らされていたら、私は再度かれらに、その金額で私が送っていた戸口から戸口への配送ではない費用を請求するかどうかをたずねようとおもいます。

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私はあなたからの知らせをもとに重さが間違っていたことで超過払いがあることを知っています。私はあなたにいくつか支払方法をお伝えします。それを選んでいただければ、私たちはすぐに送る準備をして、対応できます。それを使えば、費用をもっと抑えられるかもしれません。
私が話さなければならない300ドルの支払いをあなたが受け取っているなら、彼らは空港に飛行機の手配をしたはずです。また私が添付して、目立つようにしておいた見積りで決めています。
もしあなたがそれと違う金額を知らされていたら、私は再度彼らに、その金額で私が送っていた戸口から戸口への配送ではない費用を請求するかどうかをたずねようとおもいます。

元の翻訳
あなたの迅速な対応に感謝します。あなたが送っているのは、写真にあるスルーネックタイプで、ボディが堅く、2つピックアップのついたプレシジョンベースのセットだと思っていました。
私は、イーベイの買い物かごに黒い艶のあるものを入れていたので、確かめればよかった。
金曜日に再度買い直します。
このベースの台引き手数料59.87ドルの見積書をあなたにおくります。
それをペイパルに払い戻さしてもらえますか？
イーベイの取り置き期間が約5日くらいしかないので、もしこれらのベースが写真のものと同じなら黒のものがほしいです。
だからもし白がなければ、それを取っておいていただけますか？↵

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あなたの迅速な対応に感謝します。あなたがこれから発送するものが、写真にあるスルーネックタイプで、ボディが堅く、2つピックアップのついたプレシジョンベースのセットだといいのですが。
私もイーベイの買い物かごに黒い艶のあるものを入れたので、確認したいのです。
金曜日に手元にある黒の方を返送します。
このベースの代引き手数料59.87の請求書をあなたにおくります。
それを送料と一緒にペイパルに払い戻してもらえますか？
もしこれらのベースが写真のものと同じなら黒のものがほしいですが、イーベイの期間があと約5日しかありません。
だからもし白がなければ、それを取っておいていただけますか？

元の翻訳
I'm pleasure that my goods satisfied you.
I don't ｃｌａｉｍ additional cost for this our service.
Also somehow i want to see the knife made by you.
So if it is ｆｉｎｉｓｈｅd, I wish you would send me the picture and making story.

The trade with you will be canceled automatically one week after.
I confirmed the delivery status for post office. according from that.
The goods delayed will arrive you soon.
Please wait 4,5days after.

I know that the custom check in your country is not easy.
So i wrote to present $10 for you in delivery voucher.

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I'm pleased that my goods satisfied you.
I don't claim additional cost for this our service.
Also somehow I want to see the knife made by you.
So if it is finished, I wish you would send me the picture and making story.

The trade with you will be canceled automatically one week after.
I confirmed the delivery status for post office. according from that.
The goods delayed will arrive you soon.
Please wait 4,5days after.

I know that the custom check in your country is not easy.
So I wrote to present $10 for you in delivery voucher.

元の翻訳
セイコー　ＳＫＸは、その値段では、とてもいい時計です。改良費をかけなくても、シーマスターやサブマリナーくらいいい品質です。
早くおくってください。

日本からアメリカ東海岸のワシントンＤＣまでどのくらいかかりますか？14日くらいですか？また価格は日本の税金がかからず199ドル以内の168ドルか確かめてください。

すごいなぁ！
日本郵便のウェブサイトは遷移がわかりづらいけど、こちらに送ったと告げています。
こちらに届いたら、確実にその対応に5ツ星をつけようとおもいます。私は、売る側としても、イーベイのヘビーユーザーです。今週アメリカのメイシーデパートでその時計が340ＵＳドルで売られてました。それは税率9.75％の消費税を含めない値段でです。（ほとんどところは４２５ドルです。）
約370ＵＳドル
50%以上お得です！
イーベイに感謝します！

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セイコー　ＳＫＸは、その値段では、とてもいい時計です。シーマスターやサブマリナーくらいいい品質で、それらの点検（チューンアップ）費用より安いくらいで買えます。
早くおくってください。

日本からアメリカ東海岸のワシントンＤＣまでどのくらいかかりますか？14日くらいですか？また（インボイス＝請求書に記載する）価格は日本からの関税がかからないよう、（基準値の）199ドル以内の168ドルで申告するよう、よろしくお願いします。

すばらしい！
日本郵便のウェブサイトは遷移がわかりづらいけど、発送されたと表示しています。
こちらに届いたら、確実にその対応に5ツ星をつけようとおもいます。私は、売る側としても、イーベイのヘビーユーザーです。今週アメリカのメイシーデパートでその時計が340ＵＳドルで売られてました。それは税率9.75％の消費税を含めない値段でです。（通常４２５ドルです。）
約370ＵＳドル
50%以上お得です！
イーベイに感謝します！

元の翻訳
Geet to you.
Thank you very much for your this shopping in my store.
Sorry that you could not get this shipping,dispite you ordered me it kindly.
I don't like to give a displeasure to you anymore.
So i would return your paymant.
A notice to you from ebay will came to you later.
If you agree with it,cancel would be done.
So you don't have to be care about it.
Thank you for your kind at this time.
When you have an interesting for Japanese products again,↵
Please call me anytime.
I wish you.

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Geet [not a word] to you.
Thank you very much for your this shopping [word order?] in my store.
Sorry that you could not get this shipping [?], dispite [spelling] you ordered me it [wrong usage] kindly.
I don't like to give a displeasure to you anymore [awkward].
So i would return your paymant [spelling].
A notice to you from eBay will came [tense confusion] to you later [awkward].
If you agree with it, cancel would be done [usage].
So you don't have to be care [parts of speech] about it.
Thank you for your kind [noun?] at this time.
When you have an interesting [parts of speech] for Japanese products again, please call [usage] me anytime.
I wish you [what?].

元の翻訳
We appologise that we displayed your products at USI even though they are not allowed to exibite with our careless.

Subjected products　includindg them were canceled to exibit at all.

If there are a lacking something, Please tell me about them.

I will do best.

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We appologise [spelling] that we displayed your products at USI even though they are not allowed to exibite [spelling] with our careless [parts of speech confusion].

Subjected products includindg [spelling] them were canceled to exibit [spelling] at all.

If there are a lacking something [usage], please tell me about them.

I will do best.

元の翻訳
Sorry, product spending 60days are so late.
Sending date to customer is beggining of Dec
It need to arrive at customer up to Nov. 28th.

The number of towel is 1000 pieces. The monogram text is jaxson and GROHE.

Customers are asking us to look the product sample before their purchace.
If the time is not tight, please send us the sample.

and then, could you send me picture datas printed on the pamphlet with Flette and the others?
If the dates are notthing, could you send scan datas from the pamphlet?

I wish to get the cover page and the content pages.

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Sorry, product spending 60 days are so late.
Sending date to customer is beggining [spelling] of Dec
It need to arrive at customer up to Nov. 28th.

The number of towel is 1000 pieces. The monogram text is jaxson and GROHE.

Customers are asking us to look the product sample before their purchace [spelling].
If the time is not tight, please send us the sample.

and then, could you send me picture datas [spelling] printed on the pamphlet with Flette [spelling] and the others?
If the dates are notthing [spelling], could you send scan data from the pamphlet?

I wish to get the cover page and the content pages.