Chris Teo (meridan) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
It was about to disappear silently right in front of you. I thought that it would be rude not to tell my important friends the reason so I am now writing the last e-mail. At the age of 18, I got uterine cancer and I became unable to born children. Then, I gave up love and relationships. And now I discovered that I have breast cancer. I thought that it would be so much easier if I became a man. The day you clear the instances was the date of the announcement. By erasing everything that day, I wanted to erase my existence. I cried because it's a cruel life, but I have not thought about committing suicide and I'm not thinking about it even now.

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I was about to disappear silently right in front of you. I thought that it would be rude not to tell my important friends the reason so I am now writing the last e-mail. At the age of 18, I got uterine cancer and I became unable to have children. Then, I gave up love and relationships since then. And now I discovered that I have breast cancer. I thought that it would be so much easier if I became a man. The day I deleted my Instagram account was the date of the announcement. By erasing everything that day, I wanted to erase my existence. I cried because it's such a cruel life, but I have not thought about committing suicide and I'm not thinking about it even now.

元の翻訳
Date of birth: July 8, 1993
Height: 187 cm
Blood Type: O
Birthplace: Saitama Prefecture


Young nenber of SOLIDEMO being 20 years old.
He was challenged to a large number of auditions. In the summer of his second year of high-school he passed the audition for "MEN'S NON-NO" of Shuensha and became an exclusive model from March 2010.

His favorite word is "suit"

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Date of birth: July 8, 1993
Height: 187 cm
Blood Type: O
Birthplace: Saitama Prefecture


Innocent 20 year old of SOLIDEMO. ↵
He is challenging a number of auditions.
He passed the audition for "MEN'S NON-NO" of Shuensha In the summer of his second year of senior high-school and became an exclusive model from March 2010.

His favorite word is "suit"

元の翻訳
Sub-Leader

Date of Birth: July 19, 1988
Height: 181 cm
Blood type: O
Hometown: Fukuoka Prefecture


Sub-Leader of SOLIDEMO.
He enrolled as a regular student in Avex Artist Academy, and started his music lessons.
His singing skills were highly appreciated, and he became a member of the male cappella group "abs school" which appeared in the popular part "Hamonepu" of the show called "Gogogo with all the streight!" (Fuji TV) in 2009.
He was experience as a solo musician in TAKE, and as an actor in stage dramas.

His favorite word is "unflagging"

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Sub-Leader

Date of Birth: July 19, 1988
Height: 181 cm
Blood type: O
Hometown: Fukuoka Prefecture


Sub-Leader of SOLIDEMO.
He enrolled as a regular student in Avex Artist Academy, and started his music lessons.
His singing skills were highly appreciated, and he became a member of the male a cappella group "abs school" which appeared in the popular part "Hamonepu" of the show called "Gogogo with all the streight!" (Fuji TV) in 2009.
He was experience as a solo musician in TAKE, and as an actor in stage plays and TV dramas.

His favorite word is "unflagging"

元の翻訳
December 29th - 31st, for three days, the distribution of the limited edition album containing the countdown and live set list held in Holy land, Yoyogi and First Gymnasium, will start at once on iTunes, Rekochoku, · mora · mu-mo and other delivery websites.

check each site for details ♪

※This is not a live sound source. It will be the sound from the original album.

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December 29th - 31st, for three days, the distribution of the limited edition album containing the countdown and live set list held in Mecca, Yoyogi and First Gymnasium, will start at once on iTunes, Rekochoku, · mora · mu-mo and other delivery websites.

check each site for details ♪

※This is not a live sound source. It will be the sound from the original album.

元の翻訳
※After the event, the organizers do not take any responsibility regarding the last trains to home. Please make you you check it and attend the event.

[Benefits 2]
We will offer you an original post card (1) together with the the album released on March 12th, 『Mirrorball Flare + Royal Mirrorball Discotheque』, which will be available for purchase.

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※After the event, the organizers do not take any responsibility regarding the last trains to home. Please make sure the time of the train by yourself before attending the event.

[Benefits 2]
We will offer you an original post card if you the the album released on March 12th, "Mirrorball Flare + Royal Mirrorball Discotheque". Please note that the number of the postcards are limited.

元の翻訳
ＩTA4359
早いお返事をありがとう。
注文番号はこちらです：
171-6413576-5284359
発送はどこで追跡できるか教えてくれますか？
できればダイレクトリンクを送ってくれますか？ありがとうございます。

ITA0712
こんにちは、すみませんが、おっしゃっていることがわかりません。
英語で書いてくれますか？

書いていた通り、ディジタルカメラを注文しました "1 di Panasonic Lumix DMC-TZ40 Fotocamera digitale 18.9 megapixel [ASIN: K]"
「電池」について、言いたいことはよくわかりません。
もうカメラを送りましたか？

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ＩTA4359
早急なお返事をありがとうございます。
注文番号はこちらです：
171-6413576-5284359
発送はどちらで追跡できるのか教えてもらえませんか？
できればダイレクトリンクを送って頂けますでしょうか？ありがとうございます。

ITA0712
こんにちは、すみませんが、おっしゃっていることがわかりません。
英語で書いて頂けますか？

あなたが書いていらっしゃった通り、ディジタルカメラを注文しました "1 di Panasonic Lumix DMC-TZ40 Fotocamera digitale 18.9 megapixel [ASIN: K]"
「電池」について、何をおっしゃられたいのかがよくわかりません。
もうカメラは送って頂いたんですよね？

元の翻訳
評価IGI1139
まだ配達を待っています。彼らが提供するトラッキング番号は宅配便に認識されません。 彼らからのメールは丁寧いですが結局は役に立ちません

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評価IGI1139
まだ配送を待っています。提供されたトラッキング番号は、配送業者に認識されていません。 彼らからのメールは丁寧ですが、はっきり言って役に立ちません。

元の翻訳
This guitar does not have korina wood veneer pasted on it.
Including the neck and the body, it has three pieces. It is not Korina wood.
It weights about 3.5 kg.
Because the guitar is new, it does not have scratches or dents on the body.

I am currently sending my queries to MOON. I have asked them about the issue that you're having with your bass.
Because now it is weekend in Japan, I will inform you new week, as soon as I get an answer from MOON.

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This guitar does not have Korina wood veneer pasted on it.
Including the neck and the body, it has three pieces. It is not a 1-piece Korina wood.
It weights about 3.5 kg.
Because the guitar is brand new, it does not have any scratches or dents on the body.

I am currently sending your queries to MOON. I have asked them about the issue that you're having with your bass.
Because now it is the weekend in Japan, I will contact you as soon as I get an answer from MOON in the week.

元の翻訳
※The confirmation e-mail at l-tike.com and Loppi will be sent to the newly registered members the next evening after the day of registration.


Should you have any other questions, please contact us at the follwing address:
support@daichi-miura.jp

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※The confirmation e-mail at l-ticke.com and Loppi will be sent to newly registered members the next evening after the day of registration.


Should you have any questions, please contact us at the following address:
support@daichi-miura.jp

元の翻訳
View scene
Preview of the potential destinations
News on the local conditions
Exotic festivals, food, and clothing
Hometown and place of memories
Expression of today's favorite places
Seasonal events such as skiing and cherry-blossom viewing

Posts scene
Encountering incidents and decisive moment
Photography that appeals to the world
PR in tourism for special products and attractions
Reports on the most delicious foods
Sharing of exciting moments
Messages to the world

We have been providing a highly convenient application for smartphone to a large number of people
The total number of downloads until now exceeds 2.4 million while building a unique position in this field

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Viewing scene
Preview of the potential destinations
Conditions of the local area of news
Exotic food, clothing, housing, and festivals
Current situations of hometown and places of memories
Today's scenes of favorite places
Seasonal events such as skiing and cherry-blossom viewing

Posted scene
Captured images of incidents and decisive moments
Photography that appeals to the world
PR in tourism for special products and sights
Reports on delicious foods
Sharing emotional moments
Messages to the world

We have been providing a highly convenient application for smartphones to a large number of people
The total number of downloads so far exceeds 2.4 million while establishing a unique position in this field

元の翻訳
#habit 2

I have some questions about the product.

RBZ PROTO (2.0 STYLE)
What kind of head is 2.0 STYLE?
Is it different from the RBZ PROTO HEAD that you are selling on ebay?

It may be still early to ask that, but can you please inform me in case you know how long will take for the next order to arrive? I may need to increase the number of items ordered.

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#habit 2

I have some questions about the following product.

RBZ PROTO (2.0 STYLE)
What kind of head is 2.0 STYLE?
Is it different from the RBZ PROTO HEAD that you are selling on ebay?

It may be still early to ask that, but can you please inform me whether know how long it will take for the next order to arrive? I may need to increase the number of items ordered.

元の翻訳
Unfortunately, I am not able to go to Las Vegas in April.
Please let me know if you come to Japan. I will come anywhere to meet you.
Send my greetings to Jonathan, too!

The items from the previous order had arrived, but there was one A item missing.

I think you have an exclusive Tilt Brake for B, is it right? I'd like to order 3 of them.
Please let me know what the wholesale prices for B and C are.

Please send at least 6 manuals each for D, E and F.
They are insufficient and they sometimes tear.

From this time, I want you to insert the invoice in an accessible place, for the dispatch.

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Unfortunately, I am not able to go to Las Vegas in April.
Please let me know if you come to Japan. I will go anywhere to meet you.
Send my greetings to Jonathan, too!

The items from the previous order arrived, but there was one A missing.

I think you have an exclusive Tilt Brake for B, is it right? I'd like to order 3 of them.
Please let me know what the wholesale prices for B and C are.

Please send at least 6 manuals each for D, E, and F.
They are insufficient and some of them are torn.

In the future, I want you to insert the invoice in an accessible place, for the dispatch.

元の翻訳
Copyright

Hello,
Thank you for contacting me.
I do not sell false products.
Did your company verify this fact?
I would be really sad to hear that your sent me this without a close look at the facts.

I have noticed recently that our rival store is making these kind of groundless claims and damage the accounts of our sellers.
This makes me very sad.

I hope to hear from the seller/buyer who made the claim.
It is fair in this way.
Therefore, I will firmly support this.

I wish you luck!

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Copyright

Hello,
Thank you for contacting me.
I do not sell counterfeit products.
Did your company verify this fact?
I would be really sad to hear if you contacted me without a close look at the facts.

I have noticed recently that our rival store is making these kinds of groundless accusations to damage the accounts of sellers.
This makes me very sad.

I hope to hear from the seller/buyer who made the accusations
It is fair in this way.
Then, I will handle this appropriately.

I wish you luck!

元の翻訳
Thank you for informing me about the possible date and time for the meeting.
After having discussed with Tanaka, the answer is 3/10.
We are thinking of performing the MTG at Cambridge, if possible.
This is because I would like to take a look at the office and the development environment of your company.

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Thank you for informing me about the possible date and time for the meeting.
After discussing with Tanaka, I will answer to you on March 10th.
We are thinking of holding the meeting at Cambridge, if possible.
This is because I would like to take a look at the office and the development environment of your company.