翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/04/16 18:29:07

meridan
meridan 50 Hello! I'm a big fan of Japanese cul...
日本語

生年月日:1993年7月8日
身長: 187cm
血液型:O
出身地:埼玉県


SOLIDEMOの天真爛漫な20才。
数多くのオーディションに挑戦し、
高校2年の夏に応募した集英社「MEN’S NON-NO」のオーディションに
合格し、2010年3月から専属モデルとなる。

好きな言葉は"スーツ"

英語

Date of birth: July 8, 1993
Height: 187 cm
Blood Type: O
Birthplace: Saitama Prefecture


Young nenber of SOLIDEMO being 20 years old.
He was challenged to a large number of auditions. In the summer of his second year of high-school he passed the audition for "MEN'S NON-NO" of Shuensha and became an exclusive model from March 2010.

His favorite word is "suit"

レビュー ( 1 )

lebron_2014 52 I am a part time translator during ni...
lebron_2014はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/04/16 22:13:10

元の翻訳
Date of birth: July 8, 1993
Height: 187 cm
Blood Type: O
Birthplace: Saitama Prefecture


Young nenber of SOLIDEMO being 20 years old.
He was challenged to a large number of auditions. In the summer of his second year of high-school he passed the audition for "MEN'S NON-NO" of Shuensha and became an exclusive model from March 2010.

His favorite word is "suit"

修正後
Date of birth: July 8, 1993
Height: 187 cm
Blood Type: O
Birthplace: Saitama Prefecture


Innocent 20 year old of SOLIDEMO.
He is challenging a number of auditions.
He passed the audition for "MEN'S NON-NO" of Shuensha In the summer of his second year of senior high-school and became an exclusive model from March 2010.

His favorite word is "suit"

Doing an active voice seems to make i more uniform.

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