Akiko Kawagoe (i3san) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
ご購入に満足していただけず残念です。オークションで示している通り、購入者様が商品を受け取ってから14日以内であれば返品を受け付けおり、あなた様もその期間内であれば大丈夫です。lpにお気軽にメールをください。喜んで返品にかかる送料と商品を返品いたします。いつ商品を返送するかをおしらせください。また、こちら側でも荷物の追跡ができるよう、追跡番号も教えてください。ご不便をおかけしましたことをお詫び申し上げます。

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ご購入に満足していただけず残念です。オークションで示している通り、購入者様が商品を受け取ってから14日以内であれば返品を受け付けおり、あなた様もその期間内であれば大丈夫です。lpをお気軽に返品願います。喜んで返品にかかる送料と商品の代金をお支払いいたします。いつ商品を返送するかをおしらせください。また、こちら側でも荷物の追跡ができるよう、追跡番号も教えてください。ご不便をおかけしましたことをお詫び申し上げます。

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I'm sorry for the inconvenience.
Would you please tell me what's the problem in detail?

Then, I will contact the shop from where I purchased it.

Are there any problems on the exterior? Are there any dents or damages?

You are able to ask me to refund a part of the price, but you are also be able to return the product and receive a full refund.

Please tell me which you would prefer.

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I'm sorry for the inconvenience.
Would you please tell me what the problem is in detail?

Then, I will contact the shop where I purchased it from.

Are there any problems on the exterior? Are there any dents or damages?

You are able to ask me to refund a part of the price, but you are also be able to return the product and receive a full refund.

Please tell me which you would prefer.

元の翻訳
We have business with the company AAA in England, they sent us packages by "Airmail International Signed For Small Packet". The price is from about 12.49 GBP to 16.66 GBP. After arriving in Japan, you can check the tracking service. It takes about 10 days to arrive the package. It's a secured way of shipping. Please consider it.

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We have a business with the company AAA in England and they send us packages by "Airmail International Signed For Small Packet" of Royal Mail. The price is about from 12.49 GBP to 16.66 GBP. After arriving in Japan, you can use the tracking service. It takes about 10 days to receive the package. It's a secured way of shipping. Please consider it.

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Best entertainment!
I could enjoy the musical, but I couldn't get some sense of humor of the details since I am not good at English. Regarding the Thriller, there was no need to worry about such thing! I knew all of the Michael Jackson's songs and performers were all professionals. Boys were cute. 2 and half minutes passed by like a flash. I recommend you to see it.

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Best entertainment!
I could enjoy the musical, but I couldn't get some sense of humor in details since I am not good at English. Regarding the Thriller, there was no need to worry about such thing! I knew all of the Michael Jackson's songs and performers were all professionals. Boys were cute. 2 and a half minutes passed by like a flash. I recommend you to see it.

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It was wonderful.
I wasn't that interested in musicals but I went to see it because my friends who love musical recommended me to go. Nice atmosphere, staging and story were more than expected and I shed tears in the end... I become a musical fan now and want to see it again!!
Next time I go to London, I definitely go to see the musical!

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It was wonderful.
I wasn't that interested in musicals but I went to see it because my friends who love musical recommended me to go. Nice atmosphere, staging and story were more than expected and I shed tears in the end... I become a musical fan now and want to see it again!!
Next time I go to London, I will definitely go to see a musical!

元の翻訳
英語を話す誰かが私の妻に電話をかけてきた。ＸＸＸのテレサがオリジナルを送ります。どこに送ればいいですか？彼女がオリジナルを持っています。飛行機で送るところです。
成田空港の事務所はこちらの時間の今晩８時に開きます。彼女は電話をかけてどこに送ればいいかを聞きます。ＸＸＸに電話して、ＸＸＸのオリジナルの２ページをとりにきてください。私はオリジナルのフォームと手紙を自分で持っています。厚生労働省の成田空港検疫所にこちらの時間の７時に電話をかけるつもりです。書類を送るのに一番早い方法は空港から送るということです。飛行機は１５年２月６日に出発し、１５年２月７日に到着します。何か分かればお知らせします。

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英語を話せる誰かに私の妻テレサまで電話をかけてもらえますか。ＸＸＸです。彼女がオリジナルを送ります。どこに送ればいいですか？彼女がオリジナルを持っています。飛行機で送るところです。
成田空港の事務所はこちらの時間の今晩８時に開きます。彼女は電話をかけてどこに送ればいいかを聞きます。ＸＸＸに電話して、ＸＸＸのオリジナルの２ページをとりにきてください。私はオリジナルのフォームと手紙を自分で持っています。厚生労働省の成田空港検疫所にこちらの時間の７時に電話をかけるつもりです。書類を送るのに一番早い方法は空港から送るということです。飛行機は１５年２月６日に出発し、１５年２月７日に到着します。何か分かればお知らせします。

元の翻訳
* AAA mascot key ring (total 7 types + α) 700 yen
* Thank you letter set 1,500 yen
* ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!"T-shirt(Pink/S/M/L) 4,800 yen per each
* ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!"T-shirt(Blue/S/M/L)4,800 yen per each

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* AAA mascot key ring (total 7 types and more) 700 yen
* Thank you letter set 1,500 yen
* ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!"T-shirt(Pink/S/M/L) 4,800 yen each
* ONE PIECE × AAA "Wake up!"T-shirt(Blue/S/M/L) 4,800 yen each

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* Denim shirt (size S) 5,000 yen
* Denim shirt (size L) 5,000 yen
* Wire turban 1,500 yen
* Coin necklace　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　3,000 yen
* Miniature key ring 2,500 yen

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* Denim shirt (size S) 5,000 yen
* Denim shirt (size L) 5,000 yen
* Wire turban 1,500 yen
* Coin necklace　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　3,000 yen
* Miniature backpack key ring 2,500 yen

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* Masking tape 1,028 yen
* Blanket 3,600 yen
* AAA panda orchestra key ring 700 yen
* 2way scrunchy (total 7 types + α) 600 yen
* sticky note 1,000 yen

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* Masking tape 1,028 yen
* Blanket 3,600 yen
* AAA panda orchestra key ring 700 yen
* 2way scrunchy (total 7 types + α) 600 yen
* Sticky note 1,000 yen

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It was more than I expected.
I used it because I thought that it might be useful for traveling. Actually, it was so good that I went round passing by my destination.
Because the sun is so strong in summer in Spain, so I recommend you to have a seat under the roof of the second floor of the bus. I enjoyed very much because I could visiti main places in Madrid with a nice breeze!

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It was more than I expected.
I used it because I thought that it might be useful for traveling. Actually, it was so good that I went another round passing by my destination.
Because the sun is so strong in summer in Spain, so I recommend you to have a seat under the roof of the second floor of the bus. I enjoyed very much because I could visiti main places in Madrid with a nice breeze!

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Just Wonderful.
I joined this tour without any knoledge about Montserrat, so I was impressed by the wonderful scenary and vigorous rocky hill. We had enough free time, so we could go sightseeing at our own pace. The guide explained kindly with a smile. I repeatedely talk with my husband that we were happy to join this tour.

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Just Wonderful.
I joined this tour without any knoledge about Montserrat, so I was impressed by the wonderful scenary and vigorous rocky hill. We had plenty of free time, so we could go sightseeing at our own pace. The guide explained kindly with a smile. I repeatedely talk with my husband that we were happy to join this tour.

元の翻訳
今日あなたに電話をかけましたが、うまくいきませんでした。いつかければよいか、また正しい電話番号をお知らせください。

2日以内にこのメールに返信してください。そうすればあなたのレターはオープンケースに入れることができます。もし2日以内にあなたから連絡がなければ、我々はこれ以上何もする必要がないと見なして、ステータスを「解決済」にします。

ご協力よろしくお願いします。早急にお返事くださることを願います。

良い一日をお過ごしください。

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今日あなたに電話をかけましたが、うまくいきませんでした。いつかければよいか、また正しい電話番号をお知らせください。

2日以内にこのメールに返信してください。そうすればあなたのレターは「未解決案件」に分類されます。もし2日以内にあなたから連絡がなければ、我々はこれ以上何もする必要がないと見なして、ステータスを「解決済」にします。

ご協力よろしくお願いします。早急にお返事くださることを願います。

良い一日をお過ごしください。

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I won't add my order anymore, so it would be great if you could send me the product I orderd, which is the offer of $26 reduction as soon as possible. I don't need any option, either. Please just send the product without any additional charges. I'll be very happy if you could send me the sticker as a free gift, too! Thank you for your cooperation in advance!

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I won't add my order anymore, so it would be great if you could send me the product I ordered, which is the offer of $26 reduction as soon as possible. I don't need any option, either. Please just send the product without any additional charges. I would be very happy if you could send me the sticker as a free gift, too. Thank you for your cooperation in advance!

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OK, I will give it away to you on $210. I want to ask you one question: do you have a paypal account? I can accept your payment by only paypal becuase pay pal is safe for both buyers and sellers. You can rest assured that paypal will protect you in case of trouble.

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OK, I will give it away to you for $210. I want to ask you one question: do you have a PayPal account? I can accept your payment by only PayPal because PayPal is safe for both buyers and sellers. You can rest assured that PayPal will protect you in case of trouble.