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ルイヴィトン？それとも偽物？WeChat、相次ぐ偽ブランドアカウントに頭を抱える

WeChatは友達とメッセージのやり取りをする為だけのものではない。今や中国では200万人のブロガー・有名人・メディア各社、そして小さな企業から有名ブランドまでWeChatを利用し、ユーザーに情報提供している。しかしその一方で、相次ぐ偽ブランドアカウントの登場にWeChatは頭を抱えているのだ。↵
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本物のブランドアカウントに友達申請する際、中国のほぼ全ての大手ストアに張ってあるQRコードをスキャンするのが一番安全であるが、今でもアプリ内でブランドアカウントを検索するユーザーも少なくない。実はこれが大きな落とし穴なのである。

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ルイヴィトン？ それとも偽物？ 相次ぐ偽ブランドアカウントに頭を抱えるWeChat

WeChatの利用法は友達とのメッセージのやり取りにとどまらない。中国ではブロガー・有名人・メディア各社、そして小さな企業から有名ブランドまで200万以上のユーザーがWeChatを利用して、他者にアプローチしている。問題なのは、WeChatを大いに悩ませる偽ブランドアカウントの存在だ。↵
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WeChatユーザーがブランドの公式アカウントを追加するもっとも確実な方法は、中国の大手販売店のほぼすべてで目にするQRコードを利用することだが、アプリ内でユーザーが特定のブランドアカウントを検索するケースも少なくない。実はこれが大きな落とし穴なのである。

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"Shin Domoto Kyodai"

■Fuji TV"Shin Domoto Kyodai"
Date : June 29, 2014 (Sun)
Airtime : 23:15-23:45
Official Website : www.fujitv.co.jp/DOMOTO
Guests：Sayaka Kanda / May J.

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"Shin Domoto Kyodai"

■Fuji TV"Shin Domoto Kyodai"
Date : Sunday, June 29, 2014
Airtime : 23:15-23:45
Official Website : www.fujitv.co.jp/DOMOTO
Guests：Sayaka Kanda / May J.

元の翻訳
I'm interested in this item.
1. Paypal warrants only within 45 days from the day of my payment
Would it be possible that I accept assurances from ebay or Paypal in case of trouble?
2. Would it be possible to cancel the ordered item during the period between the order date and shipping date?

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I'm interested in this item.
1. PayPal's guarantee is only limited to the period within 45 days from the payment date.
Would it be possible that I can get guarantee from ebay or Paypal in case of trouble?
2. Would it be possible to cancel my order during the period between the order date and shipping date?

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it7150

再入荷するまで注文は受け付けないのですか？
私はイタリア人でスペイン人ではありません。英語で書いて下さい。

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it7150

再入荷するまで注文を保留したままにするなんて、ありえないのでは？
私はイタリア人でスペイン人ではありません。英語で書いて下さい。

元の翻訳
it7150

再入荷するまで注文は受け付けないのですか？
私はイタリア人でスペイン人ではありません。英語で書いて下さい。

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it7150

再入荷するまで絶対に注文は受け付けないのですか？
私はイタリア人でスペイン人ではありません。英語で書いて下さい。

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Date : August 17 (Sun), 2014
Doors Open : 15:00 / Event Starts 16:00
Place : Yoyogi National Gymnasium 1st Gymnasium (Tokyo)
Artists : Thelma Aoyama (JPN) / Che'Nelle (US) / Chotokkyu (JPN) / DA PUMP (JPN) / May J. (JPN) / Daichi Miura (JPN) / Rei Yasuda (JPN) and more...

* In Alphabetical Order

Price for Tickets
All Reserved Seats / ¥7,500 (Including tax)

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Date : August 17, 2014 (Sun)
Doors Open : 15:00 / Event Starts 16:00
Place : Yoyogi National Gymnasium 1st Gymnasium (Tokyo)
Artists : Thelma Aoyama (JPN) / Che'Nelle (US) / Chotokkyu (JPN) / DA PUMP (JPN) / May J. (JPN) / Daichi Miura (JPN) / Rei Yasuda (JPN) and more...

* In Alphabetical Order

Ticket Price
All Reserved Seats / ¥7,500 (Including tax)

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<Performers>
Saburo Kitajima / Hiroshi Itsuki / Saori Yuki / Aki Yashiro / Masao Sen / Yoshimi Tendo / Fuyumi Sakamoto / Ayako Fuji / Rimi Natsukawa / Kiyoshi Hikawa / Kaientai and more…

Second Part
"Sorry for such an unaccustomed live show SP (tentative title)"
<Performers>
TOKIO / V6 / AKB Group / Nogizaka 46 / Morning Musume OG / Morning Musume '14 / Tomomi Kahara / Golden Bomber / Yo Hitoto / May J and more…

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<Performers>
Saburo Kitajima / Hiroshi Itsuki / Saori Yuki / Aki Yashiro / Masao Sen / Yoshimi Tendo / Fuyumi Sakamoto / Ayako Fuji / Rimi Natsukawa / Kiyoshi Hikawa / Kaientai and more…

Second Part
"Sorry for such an unaccustomed live show SP (tentative title)"
<Performers>
TOKIO / V6 / AKB48 Group / Nogizaka 46 / Morning Musume OG / Morning Musume '14 / Tomomi Kahara / Golden Bomber / Yo Hitoto / May J and more…

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Reasons why the problem occcured
・Delay in the shipment

Measures for preventing the recurrence
・Make a daily schedule for responce to all the buyers.
・Shorten a lead-time of shipment
・Inventory management
・Communication with the buyers
・Policy's prohibition
・Prohibited contents and/or items with limits

Appeal
I shall be committed to my work based on the sales plan to satisfy all the buyers.
I sincerely hope a restoration of your sale rights.
Finally I sincerely wish for A's prosperity from Japan .

Good luck

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Reasons why the problem occurred
・Delay in the shipment

Measures for preventing the recurrence
・Make a daily schedule for response to all the buyers.
・Shorten a lead-time of shipment
・Inventory management
・Communication with the buyers
・Policy violation （原文がちょっと？？ですね。再発防止策なのに、ポリシーの違反とありますね。）
・Prohibited contents and/or restricted items.

Appeal
I shall be committed to my work based on the sales plan to satisfy all the buyers.
I sincerely hope a restoration of your sale rights.
Finally I sincerely wish for A's prosperity from Japan .

Good luck

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I've contacted the credit card company, but it knows the billing amount in Japanse Yen only.
Would to be possible you check a amount of the payment?
The product ordered on Amazon could have arrived at your address, but it's not displayed on the WEB.
The tracking number is AAA

Please check it.

Best regards

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I've contacted the credit card company, but they can only tell the billing amount in Japanese Yen.
Would it be possible for you to check the amount of the payment?
The product you have ordered from Amazon should have arrived at your address by now, but it's not displayed on the WEB.
The tracking number is AAA

Please check it.

Best regards

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もう一つeBayアカウントを所有してますか？弊社と販売するのは初めてですか？

eBayでどのような商品を販売する予定ですか？ 新品それとも中古品ですか？

eBayに何個商品を出品する予定ですか？

販売予定の商品はどこから仕入れますか？

販売予定の商品は平均でおいくらでしょうか？

入金完了した後、どのくらいの速さで商品を出荷しますか？

どの配送方法を利用予定しますか？ 配送追跡システムを導入予定ですか？

PayPal経由で入金を行いますか？ もしそうでないなら、入金の際はどこをご利用予定ですか？

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もう一つeBayアカウントを所有してますか？弊社と販売するのは初めてですか？

eBayでどのような商品を販売する予定ですか？ 新品それとも中古品ですか？

eBayに何個商品を出品する予定ですか？

販売予定の商品はどこから仕入れますか？

販売予定の商品は平均でおいくらでしょうか？

入金完了した後、どのくらいの速さで商品を出荷しますか？

どの配送方法を利用予定しますか？ 配送追跡システムを導入予定ですか？

PayPal経由で入金を行いますか？ もしそうでないなら、入金の際はどこをご利用予定ですか？

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Commission for fill-in form.

△ Corporation

Thank you always for your cooperation.↵
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This is ■ from ◯ Corporation.
Could you please fill in Excel's UPS forms attached.

The number of box is two.

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Subject : Request of issuing UPS shipping documents

Dear a person in charge at △ Corporation

I would like you to fill in the UPS shipping documents that I have attached in Excel format and return it to me. Please do so for two boxes.
Thank you very much for you usual support.

Sincerely yours,↵
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■ ↵
◯ Corporation

元の翻訳
May J, born of Japan, Iran, Turkey, Russia, Spain, and England's decent, is a multilingual artist. She's been learning dancing, piano and opera since her childhood, and can write lyrics, compose, and sing while playing the piano.
She's received strong support from wide range of ages by her possitive message as well as her powerful and clear voice.
She made her debut on July 12 2006, with a mini album "ALL MY GIRLS".

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May J, born of Japan, Iran, Turkey, Russia, Spain, and England's descent, is a multilingual artist. She's been learning dancing, piano and opera since her childhood, and can write lyrics, compose, and sing while playing the piano.
She's received strong support from wide range of ages by her possitive message as well as her powerful and clear voice.
She made her debut on July 12 2006, with a mini album "ALL MY GIRLS".

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Before WW2 in Japan, firewoods played a central role in energy source for long, and people in rural areas used to provide mostly for themselves. By comparison, price in firewoods as fuel were low as there were a plenty of the self-energy source. If the reason why Japanese household relatively utilized the energy in great abundance was price effect, then we can't say that the prewar Japanese families didn't spend source-saving lives. Furthermore the companies could use rare modern energy, such as electricity & gas, without competition against the household budget, as the household used a traditional energy of firewoods and woodcoals.

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Before WW2 in Japan, firewoods played a central role in energy source for long, and people in rural areas used to provide mostly for themselves. By comparison, price in firewoods as fuel was low as there was a plenty of the self-energy source. If the reason why Japanese household relatively utilized the energy in great abundance was price effect, then we can't say that the prewar Japanese families didn't spend source-saving lives. Furthermore the companies could use rare modern energy, such as electricity & gas, without competition against the household budget, as the household used a traditional energy of firewoods and woodcoals.