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元の翻訳
Thank you for contacting me.
I am relieved and happy to know that you received the car safely.
If you take good care of it, you can probably still use it for a long time.
Thank you very much for doing business with us.
We look forward to seeing you again.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I am relieved and happy to know that you received the car safely.
If you take good care of it, you can still use it for a long time.
Thank you very much for doing business with us.
We look forward to seeing you again.

元の翻訳
これらはバッグに関しての一般的な情報であり表示義務を満たす方法のため、あなたも関心をお持ちかもしれません。

こちらを確認してください。

(1)家庭用品品質表示法
牛革、馬革、豚革、羊革、やぎ革を使用しているバッグは、雑貨工業品品質表示規定に基づき、どの種類の革を使用しているか、手入れ方法、保存方法、表示したものの名前、住所または電話番号を表示する必要がある。

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バッグに関する一般情報と表示に必要な方法ですから、関心もお持ちかもしれません。

こちらを確認してください。

(1)家庭用品品質表示法
牛革、馬革、豚革、羊革、またはやぎ革を使用している「かばん」は、雑貨工業品品質表示規定に基づき、皮革の種類、手入れ方法、および保存方法、表示者の名前、住所または電話番号を表示する必要がある。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
We are sorry but there was a mistake on the price settings. The correct price is $3,000. We fixed the Amazon listing price as well. Thanks for your understanding.

Thank you for your message.
It is said that there is no difference on performance among those watches that have different suffixes like JF, DR, ER, etc., but those have slightly different colors.
Regarding PRW-6000Y-1JF, we cannot answer the difference because we didn't have a chance to investigate it. Sorry about that.

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Thank you for your message.
We are sorry but there was a mistake on the price setting. The correct price is $3,000. We fixed the Amazon listing price as well. Thanks for your understanding.

Thank you for your message.
It is said that there is no difference on performance among those watches that have different suffixes like JF, DR, ER, etc., but those have slightly different colors.
Regarding PRW-6000Y-1JF, we cannot answer the difference because we didn't have a chance to investigate it. Sorry about that.

元の翻訳
Please negotiate an offer on the [make offer] section of the product page.

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Please negotiate the price by clicking the [make offer] button of the product page.

元の翻訳
注意 貴方の情報は現在 有効です。さらに情報が必要な場合はこちらからご連絡します。

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注意： お客様の情報は、確認中です。さらに情報が必要な場合はこちらからご連絡します。

元の翻訳
警告：貴方の情報は、現在、有効です。追加の情報が必要な場合、ご連絡します。

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ご注意：あなたの情報は、現在、確認中です。他の情報が必要な場合、ご連絡します。

元の翻訳
エ
御注意。お客様の情報は現在認証作業中です。追加情報が必要とされる場合はこちらよりおってご連絡差し上げます。

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エ
ご注意。お客様の情報は確認中です。他に情報が必要な場合は折り返しご連絡差し上げます。

元の翻訳
[Whenever Online Guangdong]

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[Whenever Guangdong]

元の翻訳
As I informed you yesterday, if do not cancel and agree to our terms, we will send you the pre-release of this item on the release date, August 28th.
It should take 8 to 14 business days for it to arrive.

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As I informed you yesterday, if you do not cancel but agree to our terms, we will send you the prerelease item on the release date, August 28th.
It should take 8 to 14 business days for arrival.

元の翻訳
Thank you for using the function of AAA that I had asked long time ago.
I found a point that I was concernd about.
The case in index page should be as folllows.

Also the case in hashtag page should be as follows.

As I am not a native speaker of English, I apologize↵
if I cannot get my message across you well.

My indication itself might be wrong, so please use it as reference.
I corrected it by myself, and it is reporting.

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Thank you for implementing the function of AAA that I had asked long before.
I found two points about which I was concernd.
The case of the index page should be as folllows.

Also the case of the hashtag page should be as follows.

As I am not a native speaker of English, I apologize if I cannot get my message across you well.

My indication itself might be wrong, so please use it as reference.
I corrected them by myself, and I just want to report ny concern.

元の翻訳
サーバは一時的に利用できません。時間をおいてやり直してください。
\r\nを検索中…
都市を追加しますか
新しい都市
GEOロケーションを利用する
GEOボタン
未ライセンスバージョン
\niTunes appStore\n\nからライセンスバージョンをダウンロードするか\nsupport@author.comに連絡してください。
今すぐダウンロード
ロケーションサービスが無効です。

ダウンロード中…

フレーム
\nレーダーマップを初期化…
-120分
-90分
-60分
-30分
現在
最終更新: 未更新
解凍中…
不明なエラー
内部エラー
support@author.com に連絡してください。
レーダー情報
レーダー情報は最新です。
レーダー\n品質
低
中
高

気温
距離
速度
m/s
気圧
トル

接続が中断されました
サーバから情報を取得できません。接続の設定を確認してください。

衛星オブション
グローバル衛星 (**** NOTE: if this word overflows, then you can use “Global衛星” instead.)
動画の自動再生

-2時間
-4時間
-6時間

修正後
サーバは一時的に利用できません。時間をおいてやり直してください。
検索中…\r\n
都市を追加しますか
新しい都市
GEOロケーションを利用する
GEOボタン
未ライセンスバージョン
\niTunes appStore\n\nからライセンスバージョンをダウンロードするか\nsupport@author.comに連絡してください。
今すぐダウンロード
ロケーションサービスが無効です。

ダウンロード中…

フレーム
レーダーマップを初期化…\n
-120分
-90分
-60分
-30分
現在
最終更新: 未更新
解凍中…
不明なエラー
内部エラー
support@author.com に連絡してください。
レーダー情報
レーダー情報は最新です。
レーダー\n品質
低
中
高

気温
距離
速度
m/s
気圧
トル

接続が中断されました
サーバから情報を取得できません。接続の設定を確認してください。

衛星オブション
グローバル衛星 (**** NOTE: if this word overflows, then you can use “Global衛星” instead.)
動画の自動再生

-2時間
-4時間
-6時間

元の翻訳
I would like to revise the Group page html (i.e. replacing H4 tag to H1). Kindly advise if the following html is the correct one for the replacement?
I am having trouble with this, because nothing happened after changed the source and uploaded the FTP.
Additionaly, the deletion of abc.html itself via FTP did not get recognized as an error (I also deleted cache as I thought the problem was about the cache, but the result was the same).
Sorry to ask you for a primary question as such. If any of you know the cause, kindly advise.

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I would like to revise the Group page html (i.e. replacing H4 tag to H1). Kindly advise if the following html is the correct one for the replacement?
I am having trouble with this, because nothing happened after changing the source and uploaded the FTP.
Additionaly, the deletion of abc.html itself via FTP did not get recognized as an error (I also deleted the cache as I thought the problem was about it, but the result was the same).
Sorry to ask you for a primary question as such. If any of you know the cause, kindly advise.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your message.
This item has been shipped by SAL.
It will arrive in about two weeks. Haven't you receive it yet?
We will make sure too.

Thank you very much for your message.
This item has already been shipped.
We checked the tracking number but it doesn't appear.
We will contact post office in case there is something wrong on our side.

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Thank you very much for your message.
This item has been shipped by SAL.
It will arrive in about two weeks. Haven't you received it yet?
We will make sure too.

Thank you very much for your message.
This item has already been shipped.
We checked the tracking number but it doesn't appear.
We will contact the post office in case there is something wrong on our side.

元の翻訳
もしまだでしたら、電話で販売者に連絡するのも一手でしょう。このような状況ではそうするのが一番です。eBayのカスタマーサポートに売り手の電話番号をリクエストすることができます。販売者の連絡先を要求する場合は、あなたの連絡先も相手側に伝わります。そうするにはあなたの承認が必要となります。よって、この件についてお返事を下さい。

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もしまだでしたら、電話で販売者に連絡するのも一手でしょう。このような状況を打開するのにはそうするのが一番です。eBayのカスタマーサポートに売り手の電話番号をリクエストすることができます。販売者の連絡先を要求する場合は、あなたの連絡先も相手側に伝わります。そうするにはあなたの承認が必要となります。よって、この件についてお返事を下さい。

元の翻訳
The process of the refund of the product will be started in a few days after it gets delivered to us and we confirm it.

The policy of the refund is written about in the following, so please check it.
If the item hasn't been opened yet or damaged, the total refund of it will be done, but if it has been opened or damaged, the refund will be done by 50%.
If the product has been returned to us according to your personal reason, we can not make a refund of the shipping charge you've paid.
Also, you will be in charge of the carriage for the shipment.
We can not make a refund of the item in cases like it having been lost on the way to be shipped back to us.
We recommend you add transportation insurance to the shipping system if you return an expensive product to us.

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The refound procedure will be started within a few days just after we confirm the arrival of the product.

The policy of the refund is written about in the following, so please check it.
If the item hasn't been opened yet or damaged, the total refund of it will be done, but if it has been opened or damaged, the refund will be done by 50%.
If the product has been returned to us according to your personal reason, we can not make a refund of the shipping charge you've paid.
Also, you will be in charge of the carriage for the shipment.
We can not make a refund of the item in cases like it having been lost on the way to be shipped back to us.
We recommend you add transportation insurance to the shipping system if you return an expensive product to us.

元の翻訳
it7150

再入荷するまで注文は受け付けないのですか？
私はイタリア人でスペイン人ではありません。英語で書いて下さい。

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it7150

再入荷するまで注文を保留したままにするなんて、ありえないのでは？
私はイタリア人でスペイン人ではありません。英語で書いて下さい。

元の翻訳
When will you send the order this time, order number 001 and 002?
The shipment of the number 001 and 002 has not been done yet, right?
I will look forward hearing from you.

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When will you place the order this time and issue the order numbers 001 and 002?
I think you have not sent the order form designated as No. 001 yet, don't you?
I will look forward to receiving your reply.↵