翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

私は注文した商品Ａが欲しいです。
商品Ａと間違えて商品Ｂを送らないように注意してください。
もしもあなたが商品Ａの在庫を持っていない場合は、この注文をキャンセルします。
私はあなたが商品Ａを送ってくれることを期待しています。
宜しくお願い致します。

英語

I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

レビュー ( 2 )

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/04 10:48:54

元の翻訳
I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have A in stock, I would like to cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

tearzはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/09/04 11:06:03

元の翻訳
I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

修正後
I want A that I ordered.
Please be sure not to ship B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have the inventory of A, I will cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

need とwantの違いを意識なさってみるとよろしいかと思います。

[sujiko]

ご指摘ありがとうございます。