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元の翻訳
ソーシャルアプリが増えるほど、テキストが減る。ーフィリピンのクリスマスのデータ使用量が173%急増

Philippine telco Globe Telecomは、契約者の今回のクリスマスにおけるデータ使用量が前年比173%増加したと発表した。

Newsbytesによるとこの数字は携帯電話、タブレット、コンピュータのアクセスを含んでいる。一方、音声通話とＳＭＳは行き詰っているー前者は前年比15%の増加、後者はたった1%の増加であった。

フィリピンがテキストにおける世界中心であるとかつては知られていた一方で、現在SMS使用は減少している。この傾向は、2012年後半にNational Telecommunications Commission (NTC)によって最初に観測された。

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ソーシャルアプリが増えるほど、携帯メールが減る。ーフィリピンのクリスマスのデータ使用量が173%急増

Philippine telco Globe Telecomは、契約者の今回のクリスマスにおけるデータ使用量が前年比173%増加したと発表した。

Newsbytesによるとこの数字は携帯電話、タブレット、コンピュータのアクセスを含んでいる。一方、音声通話とＳＭＳは行き詰っているー前者は前年比15%の増加、後者はたった1%の増加であった。

フィリピンが携帯メールにおける世界中心であるとかつては知られていた一方で、現在SMS使用は減少している。この傾向は、2012年後半にNational Telecommunications Commission (NTC)によって最初に観測された。

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This is an inquiry about the product I ordered on October 29.

I wore this product about ten times over the past two months and a half since I bought it.
Today, I also wore it and spent a day and after getting home, I realized that a part of elbow ripped when I took my coat off. I don't think it is scratched by something because of my own carelessness, because I was wearing the coat entire day. (I guess that it ripped when stretching my elbow. The product is just my size, for your information.)

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This is an inquiry about the product I ordered on October 29.

I wore this product about ten times over the past two months and a half since I bought it.
Today, I wore it again as I normally do, and spent a day and after getting home, I realized that the elbow part was ripped when I took my coat off. I don't think it was snagged by something because of my own carelessness, because I was wearing the coat entire day. (I guess that it ripped when stretching my elbow. The product is just my size, for your information.)

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When you purchase high-priced goods, you can avoid paying tax for the custom by dividing your payment into two times. For a 3200$ good, the first payment will be 20$ and the second 3180$. When you ship it to the UK, "20$-product" will be on the invoice and you can show it at the customs .

If you have further questions, please visit my website, which you can find with a keyword, "SUZU", and contact me. I will be able to give you more detailed answers.

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The proper sharpness of the razor depends on each custmor.

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When you purchase high-priced goods, you can avoid paying tax for the custom by dividing your payment into two times. For a 3200$ good, the first payment will be 20$ and the second 3180$. When you ship it to the UK, "20$-product" will be on the invoice and you can show it at the customs .

If you have further questions, please visit my website, where you can find with a keyword, "SUZU", and contact me. I will be able to give you more detailed answers.

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The proper sharpness of the razor depends on each customer.

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Old rusty razor perhaps is easy to find,
but even in Japan only a portion of collectors are in possession of razors in new condition.

And yet, the razor you wish to buy
is big-sized so the rarity makes it expensive to purchase,

The shipping to UK applies invoice to entries of 10$,
so the customs is no big deal.

If you do the search on SUZU it has my site there, so please look over there too.

The razor I sold to you due to the New Year sale
is off-price. The profit is barely there

I will return $15 to you, so would you accept it?

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Old rusty razor perhaps is easy to find,
but even in Japan only a portion of collectors are in possession of razors in new condition.

And yet, the razor you wish to buy
is big-sized so the rarity makes it expensive to purchase,

The shipping to UK applies invoice to entries of 10$,
so the customs is no big deal.

If you do the search on SUZU it has my site there, so please look over there too.

The razor I sold to you due to the New Year sale
is off-price. The profit is barely there

Will you forgive me if I refunded $15 to you?

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Maybe you could find some old and rusty razor, but for the new ones, there are only a few collectors having it even in Japan.

And the size of the razor u want is big and rare so that the price is high.

The price will be written as $10 on invoice for shipping to UK so that there are no worries about tariff.

Please check out my website by searching SUZU online.

The price I am offering u for the razor is on New Year sale. There is almost no interest.

Is it acceptable if I return $15 to you.

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Maybe you could find some old and rusty razor, but for the ones in brand-new conditions, there are only a few collectors own them even in Japan.

And the size of the razor you want to purchase is big that it makes it so rare.

The price will be written as $10 on invoice for shipping to UK so that there are no worries about tariff.

Please check out my website by searching SUZU online.

The price I am offering you for the razor is on New Year sale. There is almost no interest.

Is it acceptable if I return $15 to you.

元の翻訳
A chisel for craftsmen and professionals, ebony finish, an inscription by the maker present, registered trade mark
Originally it was a set of ten but only six will be on sale as seen
These six will be enough to cover the general work
Width of the blades (size may not be exact)

Comic market 85 Limited edition on sale
A large cloth and A3 size original bag designed with"Akemi Homura, devil version" recently released by Jyunichirou Taniguchi
Very rare product any fan would want

19 figures including some unopened boxes
However, some boxes show some wear and tear from aging
Please check the condition as the images are attached

They are old blades. Some scratches and rusting are seen
Sharpen and polish before use

There is a trace of a sticker on the back

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A chisel for craftsmen and professionals, handle made from ebony,with an inscription by the maker, registered trade mark
Originally it was a set of ten but only six will be on sale as seen
These six will be enough to cover the general work
Width of the blades (size may not be exact)

Comic market 85 Limited edition on sale
A large cloth and A3 size original bag designed with"Akemi Homura, devil version" recently released by Jyunichirou Taniguchi
Very rare product any fan would want

19 figures including some unopened boxes
However, some boxes show some wear and tear from aging
Please check the condition as the images are attached

They are old blades. Some scratches and rusting are seen
Sharpen and polish before use

There is a trace of a sticker on the back

元の翻訳
The razor you planned to buy is bigger than the razor of the same brand,
the blase is very rare because it is made ​​longer.

I think that it is less than five Japanese who have a razor of this type probably, the value will go up more and more in the future.

Because there is a razor that is trading at $ 6000 in Japan, I'm considering the price you gave and the cost of purchase, I will sell it at $ 3000. I think its price is not so high if you really want this razor.
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You can be successful biding without problems from Canada.
What products do you plan to purchase?

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The razor you planned to buy is bigger than the razor of the same brand,
and the blade is very rare because it is made ​​longer.

I think that it is less than five Japanese who have a razor of this type probably, the value will go up more and more in the future.

Because there is a razor that is trading at $ 6000 in Japan, I'm considering the price you gave and the cost of purchase, I will sell it at $ 3000. I think its price is not so high if you really want this razor.
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You can be successful biding without problems from Canada.
What products do you plan to purchase?

元の翻訳
少々お待ちください。少なくとも月曜日までにご用意できるとおもいます。よろしければ、準備が整いしだいご連絡いたします。

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少々お待ちください。遅くとも月曜日までにご用意できるとおもいます。よろしければ、準備が整いしだいご連絡いたします。

元の翻訳
The pen tip of this pen has a peculiar shape that seems as if the pen tip of a normal fountain pen was bent looking upward with pliers, it achieves a fine writing if someone writes slightly rising the pen tip and it achieves a thick writing if someone writes by laying it down. It may be perplexing until understanding the change of the handwriting according to the angle. In order to make the best use of this peculiarity, no only for taking note of characters, it is getting great popularity for example to draw illustrations. When it comes to write letters i think that any product can be considerably divided according to people's preferences but, within the ones of the brand Sailor there are many fans of long-selling products. There is a type in deep blue with bending angle of 40 degrees and a type in emerald green with angle of 55 degrees.

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The pen tip of this pen has a peculiar shape that seems as if the pen tip of a normal fountain pen was bent looking upward with pliers, it achieves a fine writing if someone writes slightly rising the pen tip and it achieves a thick writing if someone writes by laying it down. It may be perplexing until understanding the change of the handwriting according to the angle. In order to make the best use of this peculiarity, not only for writing, it is getting great popularity, for example, for drawing. When it comes to writing, I think people either like this model or they don't, at the same time, this Sailor pen is a long-selling model with many fans. There is a type in deep blue with bending angle of 40 degrees and a type in emerald green with angle of 55 degrees.

元の翻訳
医療費が毎年上がっているから、多くの人がすでにより健康的なライフスタイルを積極的にとっているとIbañezは説明する。これは「誰もこの時代にこの歳で病気になどなれないからだ」と彼は付け加える。

健康の広がり

ゆるやかなローンチのために、それは今月末までを狙っているのだが、MetroPlateは主な食品提供者としてヘルシーフードの仕出し屋であるRice Labsとパートナーシップを結んだ。

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医療費が毎年上がっているから、多くの人がすでにより健康的なライフスタイルを積極的にとっているとIbañezは説明する。これは「誰もこの時代に病気になどなれないからだ」と彼は付け加える。

健康の広がり

ゆるやかなローンチのために、それは今月末までを狙っているのだが、MetroPlateは主な食品提供者としてヘルシーフードの仕出し屋であるRice Labsとパートナーシップを結んだ。

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Sorry I've sent you so many e-mails.
Do you want to input your user name as a result of consideration when you create a group?
For example, to input abc in the entry field is logical when a group called abc creates a username?
The group can't input the same user name because maybe it has already used this user name for its URL.
And it's not ideal for SEO to change the URL when we change our username.
I think it is better for URL to become a serial number automatically.
I am sorry if my interpretation is mistaken.

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Sorry for sending you so many e-mails.
When you think of it thoroughly, don't you want to input your user name upon creation of a group?
For example, when a group called abc creates a user name, shouldn't abc be displayed in the input field?
Perhaps, the group can't input the same user name as it has already used this user name for its URL.
And it's not ideal in light of SEO perspective, when the URL is changed whenever user name is changed.
I think it is better for URL to be an automatically assigned serial number.
I am sorry if I am talking about something which is difficult for you to understand.

元の翻訳
Being printed double-side with different colour and patterns on each side, this wrapper look nice when you use it folding back.
You can use it freely as a wrapper to wrap something, a bandanna or a scarf!

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Double-sided prints with different colours and patterns on each side makes this wrapper look nice when you use it folding back.
You can use it freely as a furoshiki wrapper to wrap something, or a bandanna or a scarf!

元の翻訳
これは何を意味するのだろうか？

オンラインや電子決済を認めることによって、支払いを合理化し、受付に出来る納税者の行列をなくすことに繋がる。

マカティ市政府は良い例を生み出している。9000名を超える雇用者の給与支払いを未だ現金で行っているために、全てのオフィスの作業を中断させねばならないのだ。

ATMやクレジットカード、幾つかのクリックで済まされるモバイル決済が、支払いを簡潔化することは明らかである。そして、人々にとって安全でもある。加えて、それは贈収賄のような不正な現金取引を戒めることにも一役買っている。

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これは何を意味するのだろうか？

オンラインや電子決済を認めることによって、支払いを合理化し、受付に来る納税者の行列をなくすことに繋がる。

マカティ市政府は良い例を生み出している。9000名を超える従業員の給与支払いを未だ現金で行っているために、全てのオフィスの作業を中断させねばならないのだ。

ATMやクレジットカード、幾つかのクリックで済まされるモバイル決済が、支払いを簡潔化することは明らかである。そして、人々にとって安全でもある。加えて、それは贈収賄のような不正な現金取引を戒めることにも一役買っている。

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Well,thank you for coming today.
Firstly,I would like to introduce myself.
For those of A office, we have witnessed for the proceedings preparation.

First of all, I would like an overview of the first phase.
On the activities of the first phase, I will explain from Mr. B first.
Next, the details of spending, I will explain from the C's.
It should be noted that the first phase originally was scheduled for one year, but due to the delay of D acquisition, the Company has a 14-month first phase.

Would you like question?

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Well, thank you for coming today.
Firstly, I would like to introduce all participants.
For those from A office, we have asked them to attend this meeting to create meeting minutes.

First of all, I would like to provide an overview of the first phase.
Mr. B will first describe the activities from the first phase.
Next, Mr. C will provide the details of spending.
It should be noted that the first phase originally was scheduled for one year, but due to the delay of D acquisition, the Company has a 14-month first phase.

Do you have any question on the first phase just being described so far?

元の翻訳
When ｌaboratory data values were compared with a normal group that has no risk factor for arteriosclerosis,
lower laboratory data values were evident for young aged patents where as data values were higher for elderly patients, showing that etiology is not single. In other words, there is a possibility that other acquired risk factors such as arteriosclerosis, hypertension, hyperlipidemia can be involved in an outbreak of this disease in a relatively young age. Another explanation given for the etiology is differences in the skeleton. Certainly, there is a possibility that anatomical differences have a contribution when considering the difference of the prevalence of this disease in Asia and Europe

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When laboratory data values were compared with a normal group that has no risk factor for arteriosclerosis,
lower laboratory data values were evident for young aged patents where as data values were higher for elderly patients, showing that etiology is not single. In other words, there is a possibility that other acquired risk factors such as arteriosclerosis, hypertension, hyperlipidemia can be involved in an outbreak of this disease in a relatively young age. Another explanation given for the etiology is differences in the skeleton. Certainly, there is a possibility that anatomical differences have a contribution when considering the difference of the prevalence of this disease in Asia and Europe

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According to the autopsy, since curing lesions of the aorta progresses before brain and coronary artery,
and these test values reflect the degree of arteriosclerosis of the aorta, it seems that changes in the curable lesions of brain and coronary artery may have occurred earlier. And if the cause of disease A lies in atherosclerotic changes in intracranial blood vessels, arteriosclerosis of the large blood vessels should have progressed to some extent already. Incidence hypertension and hyperlipidemia also increase with aging and accordingly values of this test go up as well, but careful discussion is required to determine if this has a direct relation with the cause of the disease.

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According to the autopsy, since sclerotic lesions of the aorta progresses before brain and coronary artery,
and these test values reflect the degree of arteriosclerosis of the aorta, it seems that changes in the sclerotic lesions of brain and coronary artery may have occurred earlier. And if the cause of disease A lies in atherosclerotic changes in intracranial blood vessels, arteriosclerosis of the large blood vessels should have progressed to some extent already. Incidence hypertension and hyperlipidemia also increase with aging and accordingly values of this test go up as well, but careful discussion is required to determine if this has a direct relation with the cause of the disease.