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日本語

動脈硬化の危険因子がない健常群と検査値を比較した際に、若年者では患者群の検査値が低く、高齢になるにつれ値が高くなるという結果は、etiologyが単一ではないことを示唆している。すなわち、比較的若い年齢における本疾患の発症には、動脈硬化・高脂血症・高血圧など後天的な危険因子以外の要因が関わっていると考えられる。その他の病因論としては、骨格の違いを挙げる説もある。確かに、アジアと欧米における本疾患の罹患率の違いを考えると、解剖学的な違いが一因となっている可能性はある。

英語

When ｌaboratory data values were compared with a normal group that has no risk factor for arteriosclerosis,
lower laboratory data values were evident for young aged patents where as data values were higher for elderly patients, showing that etiology is not single. In other words, there is a possibility that other acquired risk factors such as arteriosclerosis, hypertension, hyperlipidemia can be involved in an outbreak of this disease in a relatively young age. Another explanation given for the etiology is differences in the skeleton. Certainly, there is a possibility that anatomical differences have a contribution when considering the difference of the prevalence of this disease in Asia and Europe

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元の翻訳
When ｌaboratory data values were compared with a normal group that has no risk factor for arteriosclerosis,
lower laboratory data values were evident for young aged patents where as data values were higher for elderly patients, showing that etiology is not single. In other words, there is a possibility that other acquired risk factors such as arteriosclerosis, hypertension, hyperlipidemia can be involved in an outbreak of this disease in a relatively young age. Another explanation given for the etiology is differences in the skeleton. Certainly, there is a possibility that anatomical differences have a contribution when considering the difference of the prevalence of this disease in Asia and Europe

修正後
When laboratory data values were compared with a normal group that has no risk factor for arteriosclerosis,
lower laboratory data values were evident for young aged patents where as data values were higher for elderly patients, showing that etiology is not single. In other words, there is a possibility that other acquired risk factors such as arteriosclerosis, hypertension, hyperlipidemia can be involved in an outbreak of this disease in a relatively young age. Another explanation given for the etiology is differences in the skeleton. Certainly, there is a possibility that anatomical differences have a contribution when considering the difference of the prevalence of this disease in Asia and Europe