Ceputra Salim (blub91) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Hello,
We had made a mistake in the pricing display of our products.
We sincerely apologize for this.

Please allow us to cancel with regard to the item.
We will process refunds immediately pertaining to this cancellation.

I understand.
We have immediately deleted the item.
Thank you for your mail.

Hello
We had made a mistake in the pricing display of our products.
We sincerely apologize for this.

I believe that the delivery for the items is completing soon.
Thank you for your kind patience.

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Hello,
We listed this item with a pricing error.
We sincerely apologize for this.

Please allow us to cancel your order for the item.
We will process refund immediately due to its cancellation.

I understand.
We have immediately deleted the item.
Thank you for your mail.

Hello,
We listed this item with a pricing error.
We sincerely apologize for this.

I believe that we have already finished the delivery of the item.
Thank you for your patience.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your contact.
I have checked on the contents.
My apologies for the inconvenience caused.
We have already removed the listing of all your company products.
We will also not be exhibiting goods in the future.
Thank you.

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Thank you for contacting us.
We have checked the contents.
Our apologies for the inconvenience caused.
We have already removed the listing of all your company's products.
We will also not be listing your products in the future.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Why is it there have been no replies despite successive emails sent?

Although both of our companies have been doing several business transactions till now,

why did you suddenly stop replying?

Please kindly answer me.

Isn't it your fault that there has been a mistake made on the size?

Please provide a prompt reply within 2 hours.

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Why are there no replies despite successive emails I have sent to you?

My company has been doing several business transactions with you for a long time.

Why is that you didn't reply to me promptly?

Please kindly answer me about the questions.

Isn't it your responsibility for the size mistake?

Please give me a prompt reply within 2 hours.

元の翻訳
I do not understand why is my UPD ID has been cancelled. I currently do not own other IDs.
Could you please advise on how I can ship the items now?
Also, could you charge the shipping fees to my credit card from now on?
Once that is done, are you able to deliver the products today?

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I do not understand why my UPD ID has been cancelled. I do not have any other IDs.
Could you please advise on how I can ship the items now?
Also, could you charge the shipping fees to my credit card as always?
Once that is done, are you able to deliver the products today?

元の翻訳
For the products from other companies, the respective manufacturing plants have received certifications from relevant authorities in Japan.

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For the products from other companies, the manufacturing plants have received authorization within Japan.

元の翻訳
It is a bento (lunch box) from Kumasan.
It's cute, isn't it?

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It is a bear bento~
It's cute, isn't it?

元の翻訳
I heard that a '/' is going to be inserted between PENTA TP5 for TourIssue.
Also, I heard that TourIssue has 332 dimples despite the typical ones sold commercially having around 350-360 dimples.
Is it really true for the two points above?

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I heard that a '/' is going to be inserted between PENTA and TP5 for TourIssue.
Also, I heard that TourIssue has 332 dimples despite the typical ones sold commercially having around 350-360 dimples.
Is it really true for the two points above?

元の翻訳
Currently, prices are the same for all colors including red, white and black. Although the red color was initially priced at 350 dollars, we have lowered it to 340 dollars after realizing that the product is now also priced at 480 AUD. As such, both red and black colors are now a bargain.

Also, the stand for the shaver is not sold separately. Both the shaver and the stand is sold as a single set. As I am confirming the whether it is possible to sell to different manufacturers, I will give you a reply immediately once I have the answer.

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Currently, prices are the same for all colors: red, white and black. Although the red was initially priced at $350, we have lowered it to $340 after realizing that it is now also priced at AU$480. As such, both red and black are now a bargain.

The stand for the shaver is also not sold separately. The shaver and stand are sold as a single set. Please wait a little while for me to confirm whether it is possible to sell to different manufacturers.

元の翻訳
I am nixon300itogo who recently purchased ＜商品名＞ from you on eBay.
First, please allow me to thank you for the prompt and polite response!
I am selling the product currently as one of the authorized agent in Japan.
As such, I am considering to purchase on a regular basis from you in the future.

As transactions on eBay incur a transaction fee, would it be possible for me to purchase directly from you?
I can provide payment through Paypal.

I would really like to work together with you!

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I am nixon300itogo who recently purchased ＜商品名＞ from you on eBay.
First, please allow me to thank you for the prompt and polite response!
I am selling the product currently as one of the authorized agents in Japan.
As such, I am considering purchasing from you on a regular basis in the future.

As transactions on eBay incur a transaction fee, would it be possible for me to purchase directly from you?
I can provide payment through Paypal.

I would really like to work together with you!

元の翻訳
As I have already offered a discount of more than $60, kindly excuse the repayment of $20.

First, please submit a positive rating on the eBay website.

Upon confirmation of your review, I will refund your amount of $20 through Paypal.

As this type of razor is also very rare even in Japan, it is extremely difficult to obtain this model.
It is made by SONY.

As you are one of our valued customers, I would really want to offer you more discount. However, as the number of watches may be quite significant compared to other products, I would have to sell the product at the current price. Nonetheless, please make a bid as I can offer you a special waiver of all shipping charges.

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As I have already offered a discount of more than $60, kindly excuse the repayment of $20.

First, please submit a positive rating on the eBay website.

Upon confirmation of your review, I will refund your amount of $20 through Paypal.

As this type of razor is also very rare even in Japan, it is extremely difficult to obtain this model.
It is made by SONY.

As you are one of our valued customers, I would really like to offer you more of a discount. However, as the number of watches may be quite significant compared to other products, I have to sell the product at the current price. Nonetheless, please make a bid as I can offer you a special waiver on all shipping charges.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.
We have set a delivery period by taking into consideration the tariff issue, problems concerning the lithium-ion batteries as well as the delivery price.
Hence, as the delivery schedule has been fixed, we would be unable to process the deliver for your case.
Should we do that, we would unfortunately be making a loss.
As such, we regret to inform you that we have to cancel the job.

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Thank you for your email.
We have set a delivery period by taking into consideration the tariff issue, problems concerning the lithium-ion batteries as well as the delivery price.
Hence, as the delivery schedule has been fixed, we would be unable to process the deliver for your case.
Should we do that, we would unfortunately be making a loss.
As such, we regret to inform you that we have to cancel the order.

元の翻訳
This product would surely sell well in Japan.
Although we do currently engage in online business currently, it may be a waste if this product is only sold online.
For that purpose, we would like to promote the sale of this product in retail shops, instead of just through the online portal alone.

Would you be able to grant us the rights to sell this item as the sole import agent?
In Japan, it is definitely necessary to launch an appropriate promotion to ensure that the product can have continuous sales for a long period of time.

Should you have any interests in our campaign, we are able to send you a sales proposal.
Awaiting your kind reply.
Thank you.

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This product would surely sell well in Japan.
Although we do currently engage in online business, it may be a waste if this product is only sold online.
For that purpose, we would like to promote the sale of this product in retail shops instead of just through the online portal alone.

Would you be able to grant us the rights to sell this item as the sole import agent?
In Japan, it is definitely necessary to launch an appropriate promotion to ensure that the product can have continuous sales for a long period of time.

Should you have any interests in our campaign, we are able to send you a sales proposal.
Awaiting your kind reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for sending me the item which I ordered the other day.
However, there is actually a possibility that the good would be stopped at the custom clearance.
Should that happen, the proof of purchase might be necessary.
As such, would you mind sending me an email pertaining to the specifications of my order request (with the price listed on it) as soon as possible? My order number is 12345. For the monetary value of the product, kindly identify clearly between the price of product and the shipping fee.
Apologize for the inconvenience that this may cause you.
Thank you in advance.

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Thank you for sending me the item which I ordered the other day.
However, there is actually a possibility that the good would be stopped at the custom clearance.
Should that happen, the proof of purchase might be necessary.
As such, would you mind sending me an email pertaining to the specifications of my order request (with the price listed on it) as soon as possible? My order number is 12345. For the monetary value of the product, kindly identify clearly between the price of product and the shipping fee.
I apologize for the inconvenience that this may cause you.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
The goods that were initially stopped by the custom clearance have finally arrived. Thank you for your kind cooperation.

By the way, the shipping fee seems to be gradually increasing recently. Do you know why is this so?
For example. below:

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The package that encountered a problem with the customs clearance has safely arrived. Thank you for your cooperation.

By the way, the shipping fee seems to be gradually increasing recently. Do you know the reason behind this?
The example is found below.

元の翻訳
Fu,

Thank you for contacting me.
First, I would like to apologize for causing you unnecessary inconvenience.
I am sincerely sorry for this.
It is a shame that such that a thing may happen occasionally in the midst of delivery from Japan to France.
I am requesting a claim from the company in charge.
Nonetheless, It would take some time for the investigation request to the delivery company to be completed.
I sincerely hope that I would not causing you undue trouble in the future.

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Fu,

Thank you for contacting me.
First, I would like to apologize for causing you unnecessary inconvenience.
I am sincerely sorry for this.
It is a shame that such a thing may happen occasionally in the midst of delivery from Japan to France.
I am requesting a claim from the company in charge.
Nonetheless, It would take some time for the investigation request to the delivery company to be completed.
I sincerely hope that I would not cause you any trouble in the future.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry!
I am sorry but unfortunately, this product is only in Japanese.

Apologize for the delay delivery.
I am shipping out the product soon.
As i am shipping the product to your place through EMS service, I am sure that the delivery process would be very swift.
We thank you for your patience.
Once again, thank you very much!!!

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Thank you for your inquiry!
I am sorry but unfortunately, this product is only in Japanese.

Plus, I apologize for the delay of the delivery.
I am shipping out the product soon.
As I am planning to ship the product to your place through EMS service, I am sure that the delivery process will be very swift.
We thank you for your patience.
Once again, thank you very much!!!