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日本語

今回は金額が高額になるので、支払いを銀行振り込みにしようと考えています。
銀行振込に対応していますか。
銀行振込にした場合、ペイパルの手数料分ぐらいのディスカウントは可能でしょうか。
ご検討の程、宜しくお願いします。

英語

At this time, the amount will be high, so that I think I had better pay it via bank transfer.
Is your system to be accepted for the bank transfer?
If so, would you make a discount , which is approximately for the transaction fee for PayPal ?
I very much appreciate your consideration .

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aspenxはこの翻訳結果を"★★"と評価しました 2019/12/25 01:53:16

元の翻訳
At this time, the amount will be high, so that I think I had better pay it via bank transfer.
Is your system to be accepted for the bank transfer?
If so, would you make a discount , which is approximately for the transaction fee for PayPal ?
I very much appreciate your consideration .

修正後
This time, the amount is high, so I think I had better pay it via bank transfer.
Can your system to be accept bank transfer?
If so, could you give me a discount , for approximately the transaction fee through PayPal ?
I very much appreciate your consideration .

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Thank you so much for valuable review and correction.

[aspenx]

I'm sorry, I made a mistake in my review.

大変失礼いたしました。
本文の「Can your system to be accept bank transfer?」の添削ですが
「Can your system accept bank transfer?」のほうが正しいです。
「to be」は結構です。

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aspenx様、承知致しました。ありがとうございます。