翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

今年はライブに行けそうですか？あなたにはぜひ見に行って欲しいな。早くライブの日程知りたいね！あなたが運転免許取得できるよう、そして今年こそ彼らのライブに行けるよう祈ってるよ！
もしかしたらあなたに誰かがもうプレゼントしているかもしれないけど、これいる？もし良ければあなたに送りたいなと思って。何か送って欲しいお菓子とかある？
気長に待っててね。
日本ツアーのみ行きます。
私はそういったゲームはあまり好きじゃないの。
あなたの絵可愛い！すごく上手だね！

英語

Do you think you can make it to the concert this year?
I really would like you to go. I can't wait for the dates to come out!
I am crossing fingers for you to get driver's license and you can go to their concert this year!
Someone might have gave you already but I though you might like this? If you do, I am happy to send this to you. Is there any treats that you want?
Please wait patiently.
I will only go to Japan tour.
I don't like that kind of game.
I love your drawings! You are a good painter!

レビュー ( 1 )

yyokobaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2016/01/13 11:38:48

元の翻訳
Do you think you can make it to the concert this year?
I really would like you to go. I can't wait for the dates to come out!
I am crossing fingers for you to get driver's license and you can go to their concert this year!
Someone might have gave you already but I though you might like this? If you do, I am happy to send this to you. Is there any treats that you want?
Please wait patiently.
I will only go to Japan tour.
I don't like that kind of game.
I love your drawings! You are a good painter!

修正後
Do you think you can make it to the concert this year?
I really would like you to go. I can't wait for the dates to come out!
I am crossing fingers for you to get driver's license and you can go to their concert this year!
Someone might have given you already but I thought you might like this? If you do, I am happy to send this to you. Are there any treats that you want?
Please wait patiently.
I will only go to Japan tour.
I don't like that kind of game.
I love your drawings! You are a good painter!