山脇　ちか (wakky) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
首脳会談の中のTPPの話し合いは、発足当初からのメンバーのブルネイ、チリ、ニュージーランド、シンガポールにとっては頭が痛いに違いない。争点となっているのは、新たに参加したオーストラリアを含め、関税撤廃順守というルールの緩和の要請に対する加盟国の意見だ。後から加盟したアメリカがリーダー役を引き受けて最近まで関税の撤廃を中核に据えていたのだが、最近ではTAFTAが焦点となって来ているのは当初からの加盟国にとっては理解に苦しむことである。交渉の手続きが変わって、問題に上がっている製品に対して例外が認められなければ、TTPが早期に妥結することは考えにくいだろう。

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首脳会談の中のTPPの話し合いは、発足当初からのメンバーのブルネイ、チリ、ニュージーランド、シンガポールにとっては頭が痛いに違いない。争点となっているのは、関税の完全撤廃を順守するというルールの緩和の要請に対する、新たに参加したオーストラリアなどを含めた加盟国の意見だ。後から加盟したアメリカがリーダー役を引き受けてつい最近まで関税の撤廃を中核に据えていたのだが、最近ではTAFTAが焦点となって来ているのは当初からの加盟国にとっては理解に苦しむことである。交渉の手続きが変わって、問題に上がっている製品に対して例外が認められなければ、TTPが早期に妥結することは考えにくいだろう。

元の翻訳
Thank you for using our service. We confirmed mold growing on the product. We deeply apologize to you for the inconvenience. Please kindly return the product to us. As you have mentioned, we will refund for the product plus US$10 of shipping charge. Please understand that we can only give you the refund after receiving it.
ebay will guarantee of refund if you send back the product with a tracking number.
In case you cannot receive refund, you can inform ebay, and you will surely be given refund. Thank you very much.

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Thank you for using our service. We confirmed mold growing on the product. We deeply apologize to you for the inconvenience. Please kindly return the product to us. As you have mentioned, we will refund for the product plus US$10 of shipping charge. Please understand that we can only give you the refund after receiving it.
eBay will guarantee a refund if you send back the product with a tracking number.
In case you cannot receive a refund, you can inform eBay, and you will surely be given a refund. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
楽天市場で INVICTAを売りに出されているのを拝見しました。
INVICTAは現在どの販売店から購入されているか教えていただけますか。

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小売り価格から65%オフ
各ブランドの各デザイン10個以上、合計50個以上をお買い上げの場合62.5%オフ

最低注文数量は各ブランドの各デザイン5個以上、合計30個+郵送料

5個以下の数量が表示されているアイテムはすべて売り切れなのですね。
表示価格は、小切手または振り込みの価格とする
クレジットカードは高額商品の場合OK
ということでよろしいですか？

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こんにちは。
楽天市場で INVICTAの腕時計を売りに出されているのを拝見しました。
御社では INVICTAの腕時計は現在どの販売業者から購入されているか教えていただけますか。

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小売り価格から65%オフ
各ブランドの各デザイン10個以上、合計50個以上をお買い上げの場合62.5%オフ

最低注文数量は各ブランドの各デザイン5個以上、合計30個+郵送料

5個以下の数量が表示されているアイテムはすべて売り切れだと考えてください。
表示価格は、小切手または振り込みの価格とする
クレジットカードは高額商品の場合OK
ということでよろしいですか？

元の翻訳
Good day!
Thank you very much for choosing our shop.
We are sorry that we kept you waiting.
Now we are ready to ship out the goods you have ordered.
We would like to use SAL delivery service with a tracking number as scheduled unless you wish to cancel this order.

We would appreciate if you could give us confirmation on this order.
We will ship out the goods immediately after your confirmation.

The estimated transit time is 2-4 weeks. Still this is subject to be changed as it is an international shipment.

Thank you for waiting for the goods.
The item is very popular in Japan. We are confident that it is up to your expectation.

Thank you very much.

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Hello!
Thank you very much for choosing our shop.
We are sorry that we kept you waiting.
Now we are ready to ship out the goods you have ordered.
We would like to use SAL delivery service with a tracking number as scheduled unless you wish to cancel this order.

We would appreciate if you could give us confirmation on this order.
We will ship out the goods immediately after your confirmation.

The estimated delivery time is 2-4 weeks. Still this is subject to be changed as it is an international shipment.

Thank you for waiting for the goods.
The item is very popular in Japan. We are confident that it is up to your expectation.

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
CareerBuilder が今年の8月から9月の1か月に亘って行った調査は、 複数の業界と規模の従業員3,103人と管理職や人事担当者2,203を対象としています。
病欠を取った中で最も多かった職種は、専門職やサービス業(35％)、次に営業 (34％)、ITや介護関係といった職種では病欠を取った人は最も少なかったようです。
さて、もうごちゃごちゃ言うのはここまでにして、2014年の信じられない欠勤の理由にあがったものをはどうだったのでしょうか。そこに挙げられているものを見ると、どうも理由がばかげているほど真実味があるという考えが前提となっているようです。つまり、こういう話をでっちあげる人はほかにはいないということです。そうでしょう？

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CareerBuilder が今年の8月から9月の1か月に亘って行った調査は、 複数の業界と規模の従業員3,103人と管理職や人事担当者2,203人を対象としています。
病欠を取った中で最も多かった職種は、専門職やサービス業(35％)、次に営業 (34％)でした。ITや介護関係といった職種では病欠を取った人は最も少なかったようです。
さて、もうごちゃごちゃ言うのはここまでにして、2014年の信じられない欠勤の理由にあがったものをはどうだったのでしょうか。そこに挙げられているものを見ると、どうも理由がばかげているほど真実味があるという考えが前提となっているようです。つまり、こういう話をでっちあげる人は他にはいないということです。そうでしょう？

元の翻訳
CareerBuilder によると、アメリカの就業者の4人に1人(24%)が、ソーシャルメディアから仮病で休んだことが上司にばれている。雇用主の5人に1人(22%)が仮病を使って休んだ従業員を首にしている。中には部下の病欠を不審に思って、その人の家の前を通ってチェックをするという管理者までいる。イギリスでは3人に1人が仮病で欠勤し、年間90億ポンドも会社が損失を出している。
PwC の調査では、今年使った仮病を使った理由として最も多かったのが、二日酔い(32%)、スポーツ観戦のため(8％)、仕事に嫌気がさした (26％)、職探しの面接 (26％)、そして月曜日だから (11％)だった。
10人に1人が天気が良かったから休みを取ったと認めた。

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CareerBuilder によると、アメリカの就業者の4人に1人(24%)が、ソーシャルメディアから仮病で休んだことが上司にばれている。雇用主の5人に1人(22%)が仮病を使って休んだ従業員を首にしている。中には部下の病欠を不審に思って、その人の家の前を通ってチェックをするという管理者までいる。イギリスでは3人に1人が仮病で欠勤し、年間90億ポンドも会社が損失を出している。
PwC の調査では、今年最も良く使われた仮病の理由は、二日酔い(32%)、スポーツ観戦のため(8％)、仕事に嫌気がさした (26％)、職探しの面接 (26％)、そして月曜日だから (11％)だった。
10人に1人が天気が良かったから休みを取ったと認めた。

元の翻訳
会社を休む言い訳を上司に何と伝えるか考える時に次の理由はとても有効なものとは私は思いません：
「高速道路を運転中に入れ歯が外れて車の窓から飛び出した」
「誰かか家のドアと窓を接着剤で留めてしまったので家から出られなかった」
「七面鳥に入っていた化学物質のせいで眠くなり、当直に出損なった」
毎年CareerBuilder.comとハリスポールがアメリカの就業者が使う「信じられない病欠の言い訳」をまとめますが、
上記は2013年版の一部です。
2014年はもっと現実的なものだろうとお思いでしょうか？まったく愕然とされるのを覚悟してください。

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会社を休む言い訳を上司に何と伝えるか考える時に以下の理由はとても有効なものとは私は思いません。
「高速道路を運転中に入れ歯が外れて車の窓から飛び出した」
「誰かか家のドアと窓を接着剤で留めてしまったので家から出られなかった」
「七面鳥に入っていた化学物質のせいで眠くなり、自分の勤務時間に出損なった」
毎年CareerBuilder.comとハリスポールがアメリカの就業者が使う「信じられない病欠の言い訳」をまとめますが、
上記は2013年版の一部です。
2014年はもっと現実的なものだろうとお思いでしょうか？まったく愕然とされるのを覚悟してください。

元の翻訳
Unfortunately, 60 days of production lead time is too long.
As our customer needs the product early December, we need to send the product to Yamato by November 11th.

Quantity request is as follows:
Towel: 1000 pieces
Monogram letter: jaxson and GROHE

Our customer wants to see a few samples before they place an order.
If you can meet the delivery date mentioned above, please reply to us as soon as possible.

Could you also send us the image which is placed on your pamphlet together with Frette?
If you do not have the data, please scan the pamphlet. We want the front page and inner page.

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Unfortunately, 60 days of production lead time is too long.
As our customer needs the product early December, we need to send the product to Yamato by November 28th.

Request is as follows:
Towel: 1000 pieces
Monogram letter: jaxson and GROHE

Our customer wants to see a few samples before they place an order.
If you can meet the delivery date mentioned above, please reply to us as soon as possible.

Could you also send us the image which is placed on your pamphlet together with Frette?
If you do not have the data, please scan the pamphlet. We want the front page and inner page.

元の翻訳
I gave you my e-mail address before.
Did you not find it in the s-mail which I sent through Amazon?
I am sorry that you have difficulty finding my e-mail after a few trial.
I know well that you are very busy.
However, I wish to communicate with you before transaction as the amount of purchase is large.
Please advise your telephone number so that we can talk with you through our interpreter.
I apologize to you for the trouble caused to you.
I look forward to your reply.

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I gave you my e-mail address before.
Did you not find it in the mail which I sent through Amazon?
I am sorry that you have had difficulty receiving my e-mail even after a few tries.
I know well that you are very busy.
However, I wish to speak with you before the transaction, as the amount of the purchase is large.
Please give me your telephone number so that we can talk with you through our interpreter.
I apologize for any trouble caused to you.
I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Please arrange to deliver the courier to the address. You do not have to make a phone call as there is always somebody there.
If you need to make a call, please dial the representative number and tell that you are going to deliver a courier to me.

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Please arrange to deliver the courier to the address [illogical]. You do not have to make a phone call as there is always somebody there.
If you need to make a call, please dial the representative number and tell that you are going to deliver a courier [wrong word] to me.

元の翻訳
Thank you for choosing our service.
We have checked with the post office about tracking condition of the product, but it seems to take a little longer.
We are sorry for the inconvenience, but we will contact you once we have found out the condition.
So please give us a little more time.
Once again we apologize to you for the inconvenience caused to you. We would appreciate your kind understanding.

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Thank you for choosing our service.
We have checked with the post office about tracking condition of the product, but it seems to take a little longer.
We are sorry for the inconvenience, but we will contact you once we find out about the status.
So please give us a little more time.
Once again we apologize to you for the inconvenience caused to you. We would appreciate your kind understanding.

元の翻訳
I would like to confirm with you. Is it only a lid which was broken and teapot had no damage?
I informed you that we would send you a new teapot but is it alright to send you only a lid?
As this trade is in the red, we would appreciate if we could save shipping cost.
I await for your reply.
Thank you & Best Regards,

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I would like to confirm with you. Is it only the lid which was broken and the teapot had no damage?
I informed you, by an email, that we would send you a new teapot but is it alright to send you only a lid?
As this trade is in the red, we would appreciate if we could save shipping cost.
I await for your reply.
Thank you & Best Regards,

元の翻訳
Company ○○ has just informed us that cargo is ready to ship out.
Please see the attached document for your reference.
You can find the weight and size of the product.

We would like to request you to send it to Japan as soon as possible as we need it on urgent bases.
Could you give us quotation?

As I discussed with you yesterday, the U.S. transporter which we use currently charges $550 for 200 lbs to Japan.
As we hear that you are one of the prominent global logistics companies, we expect you to give us lower price.
We can give you for 7-10 days for transportation of the product.

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Company ○○ has just informed us that cargo is ready to ship out.
Please see the attached document for your reference.
You can find the weight and size of the product.

We would like to request you to send it to Japan as soon as possible as we need it on urgent basis.
Could you give us quotation?

As I discussed with you yesterday, the U.S. transporter which we use currently charges $550 for 200 lbs to Japan.
As we hear that you are one of the prominent global logistics companies, we expect you to give us lower price.
We can give you for 7-10 days for transportation of the product.

元の翻訳
Join International Competition with expanded Target

Japan Tourism Agency conducted “4th Conference on Promote Unique Venue Utilization ”on 8th of October and discussed about its action contents and how to make approach. The council is comprised of experts from comprehensive fields.

Three meetings were held last year and model events were implemented in three places such as Mitsubishi Ichigokan Museum.

The new action plan on Unique Venue has been added in “Action Program for Touism-oriented country 2014” which was concluded in June this year They plan to implement actions to improve its action quality, quantity and at the same time, tacke the problems they face in operation

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Join International Competition with expanded Target

Japan Tourism Agency conducted “4th Conference on Promote Unique Venue Utilization ”on 8th of October and discussed about its action contents and how to make approach. The council is comprised of experts from a variety of related fields.

Three meetings were held last year and model events were implemented in three places such as Mitsubishi Ichigokan Museum.

The new action plan on Unique Venue has been added in “Action Program for Touism-oriented country 2014” which was concluded in June this year They plan to implement actions to improve its action quality, quantity and at the same time, tacke the problems they face in operation

元の翻訳
The ticket “Together” is to be on sale!
The day has decided when you can join Cheeky Parade and enjoy the event Together with them!
※Resell and forging of the ticket is strictly prohibited. In the event the act of violation is found, entry of the event will not be rejected. Also the act of forging could be reported to the police as it is a crime.
<Inquiry>
Mu-mo shop customer support: 03-5413-8819 (working hour:11:00～18:00 operation only weekdays)

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The ticket “Together” is to be on sale!
The day has decided when you can join Cheeky Parade and enjoy the event Together with them!
※Resell and forging of the ticket is strictly prohibited. In the event the act of violation is found, entry of the event will be rejected. Also the act of forging could be reported to the police as it is a crime.
<Contact info>
Mu-mo shop customer support: 03-5413-8819 (working hour:11:00～18:00 operation only weekdays)