翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

対象を拡大し国際競争に名乗り

観光庁は10月８日、「第４回ユニークベニュー利用促進協議会」を開催。今年度の事業内容や取組み方法について議論した。
協議会はユニークベニューに関わる幅広い分野の専門家で構成されている。

昨年度は３回の協議会を開催し、三菱一号館美術館など３か所でモデルイベントを実施。

今年度は６月に制定された「観光立国実現に向けたアクション・プログラム２０１４」にもユニークベニューの取組みが明記されたこともあり、質・量の拡大、制度運用上の課題解決を図る事業を実施する。

英語

Join International Competition with expanded Target

Japan Tourism Agency conducted “4th Conference on Promote Unique Venue Utilization ”on 8th of October and discussed about its action contents and how to make approach. The council is comprised of experts from comprehensive fields.

Three meetings were held last year and model events were implemented in three places such as Mitsubishi Ichigokan Museum.

The new action plan on Unique Venue has been added in “Action Program for Touism-oriented country 2014” which was concluded in June this year They plan to implement actions to improve its action quality, quantity and at the same time, tacke the problems they face in operation

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/16 13:04:07

元の翻訳
Join International Competition with expanded Target

Japan Tourism Agency conducted “4th Conference on Promote Unique Venue Utilization ”on 8th of October and discussed about its action contents and how to make approach. The council is comprised of experts from comprehensive fields.

Three meetings were held last year and model events were implemented in three places such as Mitsubishi Ichigokan Museum.

The new action plan on Unique Venue has been added in “Action Program for Touism-oriented country 2014” which was concluded in June this year They plan to implement actions to improve its action quality, quantity and at the same time, tacke the problems they face in operation

修正後
Join International Competition with expanded Target

Japan Tourism Agency conducted “4th Conference on Promote Unique Venue Utilization ”on 8th of October and discussed about its action contents and how to make approach. The council is comprised of experts from a variety of related fields.

Three meetings were held last year and model events were implemented in three places such as Mitsubishi Ichigokan Museum.

The new action plan on Unique Venue has been added in “Action Program for Touism-oriented country 2014” which was concluded in June this year They plan to implement actions to improve its action quality, quantity and at the same time, tacke the problems they face in operation

良い訳だと思います。

[wakky]

ありがとうございます。とても励みになります！