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To release Ayumi Hamasaki 15th anniversary's 2013 countdown live video !

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Ayumi Hamasaki 15th anniversary's 2013 countdown live video will be released!

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可以这样来比喻：把有13.7十亿年历史的宇宙年比喻为相对于一年的日历年。
始于大爆炸，
银河系是在樱花盛开的四月中旬形成，
太阳系出现在酷暑犹存的9月。
那么人类诞生呢？

在宇宙时间长河中看来，一个人的一生只是一瞬间。

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宇宙日历将宇宙137亿年的漫长历史压缩进一年里，极富看点。
从大爆炸开始，
樱花盛开的四月中旬银河系形成，
酷暑犹存的9月太阳系出现
那么人类诞生在何时呢？

在宇宙时间长河里，人的一生只是弹指一挥间。

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Thank you for your support by e-mail a few days ago.

Sorry for asking the questions many times. I have a question about setting up e-mail.
I've set the SMTP mail thru management screen. We are able to receive mail without a problem. Is it possible to change the sender's name?

The domain of the server which is used now has been displayed completely.
You can leave this if it can not be changed. But please advise if it is easily to change.

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Thank you for providing me the support by e-mail the other day.

Sorry for asking questions many times. I have a question about setting up e-mail.
I've set the SMTP mail through management screen. We are able to receive e-mails without any problems. Is it possible to change the sender's name?

The domain of the server which is used now has been displayed completely.
You can leave this if it can not be changed. But please advise if it is easily to change.

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CIO Chief Incubate Officer Kentaro Sakakibara
The corporation Akushibu dot-com (now EC Navi) was founded as a business supervision, to address start-up of business headquarter, business promotional strategy, product advertising development, and the strategy of the Alliance Sales Division.
Serving as head of the Corporation, Samurai was established specializing in the seed-early-venture, management, marketing, sales and human resource strategy of in 2008. "Samurai Fund" （サムライファンド）was launched to promote the incubation of venture companies.

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CIO Chief Incubate Officer Kentaro Sakakibara
The corporation Akushibu dot-com (now EC Navi) was founded [wrong subject] as a business supervision, to address start-up of business headquarter, business promotional strategy, product advertising development, and the strategy of the Alliance Sales Division.
Serving as head of the Corporation [dangling modifier], Samurai [wrong subject] was established specializing in the seed-early-venture, management, marketing, sales and human resource strategy of in 2008. "Samurai Fund" （サムライファンド）[wrong subject] was launched to promote the incubation of venture companies.

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Akusera is an Internet company that provides a web services and mobile social content that specializes in love.

Love Content Business

Akusera is, the first one in the industry to release the soap opera style love game , "two people of impermissible love? forbidden love?" in July 2011. After that, it offers towards the users all over the world the popular titles "two people with a secret" and "Mistress Agreement", those two games were released and translated into Traditional Chinese and English as well.↵

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Accela is an Internet company that provides web services and mobile social content specialized in love.

Love Content Business

Accela is the first in the industry to release the soap opera style love game "Forbidden Love? Unforgivable Couple? " in July 2011. After that, along with releasing the popular titles "Mystery Couple" and "Mistress Agreement", translations in English and Simplified Chinese are offered to players all over the world.

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[OK]、私は845.00ドル（$ 60.00送料+785.00リング）をあなたのカードに請求されます
私はまた、あなたの過去の領収書が含まれます。
また、なぜあなたは多くの古典的なオーバルリングを買ったの？

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[OK]、私は845.00ドル（$ 60.00送料+$785.00リング）をあなたのカードに請求いたします。
あなたの過去の領収書も含みます。
また、なぜあなたは多くの古典的なオーバルリングを買ったの？

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パッケージ内のうちの1つ以上が22 CFRパート120から129と15 CFRパート730から774はそれぞれ、米国国務省、米国商務省の規制の下で調節され得ることがあります。このようなこれらのアイテムは、彼らは出荷することができることを確認するために、米国の連邦規制に準拠して検討し、分類する必要があるようです。
私たちの貿易コンプライアンス·チームが適切かつ迅速にあなたの商品を分類するために勤勉に働いでいます。このレビュー·プロセス中にあなたからのさらなる情報が必要な場合は、ご連絡させていただきます。すぐに商品を出荷リリースされることを通知するメールが届きます。

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パッケージ内のうちの1つ以上が22 CFRパート120から129と15 CFRパート730から774はそれぞれ、米国国務省、米国商務省の規制の下で調節され得ることがあります。このようなこれらのアイテムは、彼らは出荷出来ることを確認するために、米国の連邦規制に準拠して検討し、分類する必要があるようです。
私たちの貿易コンプライアンス·チームが適切かつ迅速にあなたの商品を分類するために勤勉に働いでいます。このレビュー·プロセス中にあなたからのさらなる情報が必要な場合は、ご連絡させていただきます。すぐに商品を出荷リリースされることを通知するメールが届きます。

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すばらしい！我々は同じページにある見て喜びます。うん,貿易はいつかちょっと難しいので, 我々329だけに固執することができます。私は前もって署名した契約書と一緒に保証金を必ず要求ます。PayPalを使いますか？

契約はただ標準的な、本当に基本的なものです。

私は今日か早く明日にそれを準備することができます！

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すばらしい！我々は同じ考えを持っていると分かり嬉しいです。そうだね、取引は難しいこともあるので, 329にしておきたいと思います。私は前もって、手付金と、署名された契約書を頂きたいです。PayPalは使えますか？

契約はただ標準的な、本当に基本的なものです。

私は今日か明日の早い時間にそれを準備することができます！

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Ph59701
TOMODACHI! I love the world! Pretty foreign young ladies in the Anime, 10 selections
Characters in Japanimation often have colorful eyes and hairs, it's frequently referred as a "non-national" characters. Meanwhile, the foreign characters no matter appearance or personality are made ​​along the characteristics of the country. Although those characters are drawn up by Japanese, there should have pros and cons comments when viewed by foreigners. That's why, we will introduce the alien characters by different nationalities one by one this time.

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Ph59701
TOMODACHI! I love the world! Pretty foreign young girls in the Anime, 10 selections
Characters in Japanimation often have colorful eyes and hair, it's frequently referred as a "non-national" characters. Meanwhile, the foreign characters no matter appearance or personality are made ​​along the characteristics of the country. Although those characters are drawn up by Japanese, there should have pros and cons comments when viewed by foreigners. That's why, we will introduce the alien characters by different nationalities one by one this time.

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fr103501
You can enjoy Taisho style romantics at Retro Moji Port in Fukuoka!

Moji port remains as a town of the flavor of the Taisho era. Let me guide you through the romantic journey of Taisho by the views of the streets of red brick and smacking your lip at the baked curry.

Go around from Moji harbor station to retro area.

Entrance of Retro at Moji Port

The Moji prot station was built in 1891, and relocated about two hundred meters to the current location.

The Wooden building of Neo-Renaissance-style was supervised by German engineer Hermann Rumschöttel, it remains until now and is important cultural property of the country.

Currently, the station building is under large-scale preservation repair.

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fr103501
You can enjoy Taisho style romantics at the Retro Moji Port in Fukuoka!

Moji port remains as a town of the flavor of the Taisho era. Let me guide you through the romantic journey of Taisho by the views of streets of red brick and smacking your lip at the baked curry.

Go around from Moji harbor station to retro area.

Entrance of Retro at Moji Port

The Moji prot station was built in 1891, and relocated about two hundred meters to the current location.

The Wooden building of Neo-Renaissance-style was supervised by German engineer Hermann Rumschöttel, it remains until now and is important cultural property of the country.

Currently, the station building is under large-scale preservation repair.

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This order has been placed to L size already.
Please confirm the purchase order because it was changed by adding L size.
We want to add the orders for the following parts. Can you check stock? I hope it can be sent together with the goods to ship out next.
Please also let me know the approximate delivery time if those are out of stock.
I do not know the distinction of color of red and orange for the picture. Would you please prepare information of the color swatch of the material?

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This order has been placed to L size already.
Please confirm the purchase order because it was changed by adding L size.
We want to add the orders for the following items. Can you check stock? I hope it can be sent together with the goods that are due to be shipped out.
Please also let me know the approximate delivery time if those are out of stock.
I can not understand the distinction of color of red and orange for the picture. Would you please prepare information of the color swatch of the material?

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You said that there was no progress for almost three months, the forwarder could either return the goods to the seller,or to destroy them if there was no submission of an EIN from the seller.
Because it is a high-priced items, I am really worry about it.
I am sorry to trouble you, can you either send me directly to Japan, or to the place of my friend in Hawaii when you return the camera?
Of course, I will pay shipping and handling fee.
Could you help me please.
Thank you!

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There has been no progress for almost three months. The forwarder could either return the item to the seller or destroy it if the seller does not submit an EIN.
Because it is a high-priced item, I am really worry about it.
I am sorry to trouble you, but could you please either send the camera directly to me in Japan or to my friend in Hawaii once you receive it?
Of course, I will pay for shipping and handling fees.
Could you please help me?
Thank you.

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Okinawa Convention & Visitors Bureau and Okinawa Prefecture will host the "Okinawa Tourism & MICE Content Fair - All Okinawa Great Exhibition -" on January 28 in Osaka, and January 29th in Tokyo.

Okinawa tourism industry is developed into a field to represent the province and the number of tourist achieved record high in 2013. Along with the enhancement of tourism resources such as the National Park designation of the Kerama Islands, it's expected the further development of tourism · MIC by improving access to port terminal of Naha Port and international terminal of Naha Airport this year.

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Okinawa Convention & Visitors Bureau and Okinawa Prefecture will host the "Okinawa Tourism & MICE Content Fair - All Okinawa Great Exhibition -" on January 28 in Osaka, and January 29th in Tokyo.

Okinawa tourism industry is developed into a field to represent the province and the number of tourist achieved record high in 2013. Along with the enhancement of tourism resources such as the National Park designation of the Kerama Islands, the further development of tourism and MICE are expected through improved access to port terminal of Naha Port and international terminal of Naha Airport this year.

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I've already cancelled all delivery request of the previous ID. Now, I'm sending you this ID of items which are requested to ship. Enclosed you all invoices of items of the ID in the attachment. There are included the goods for my important business partners in this package. My company may fall into bankruptcy if it's failure sending the goods of this ID urgently. Please do ship by today. Thank you for your attention.

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I've already cancelled all delivery request of the previous ID. Now, what I would like to have shipped is this ID of shipping request. All invoices of the items of the ID are in the attached files. This package contains the goods for my important business partners. My company may run the risk of bankruptcy if the package of this ID is not shipped post-haste. Please ship it by today. Thank you for your attention.

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あなたはひどく以上Luxilon ALUの単一のセットの価格設定していますか？？49ドル+
$ 13〜19をしてみてください。

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あなたはLuxilon ALUの単一のセットの価格をあまりに高く設定していませんか？？49ドル+
$ 13〜19に設定してみてください。

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如果有噪音的问题，比如从房间的空调传出的噪音等请通知管理员。或写便条投入经理室前的箱子中。

专业人员每个月进行一次空调的检查和维修。
这个月预定在20 号（星期一）将进行空调的维修， 会在19号中午前通知您。

如果你想在你缺席的情况下也进行维修的话，维修人员会拿经理室的钥匙进入房间进行维修工作。

使用公共浴池的时间是18:00至22:00。
如果你认为你是最后洗澡的，请拔开浴缸的塞子，并请关电。↵

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如果有房间空调传出噪音等问题请通知管理员。或写便条投入管理员室前的箱子中。

每个月会有维修专员进行一次空调的检查和维修。
本月预定在20 号（星期一）将进行空调维修， 请在19号中午前通知我们。

如果你希望在外出期间进行维修的话，管理员会拿钥匙开锁并只让维修专员进入进行维修工作。

使用公共浴池的时间是18:00至22:00。
如果你认为你是最后入浴的使用者，请拔开浴缸的塞子，并关掉电灯。

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The razor you planned to buy is bigger than the razor of the same brand,
the blase is very rare because it is made ​​longer.

I think that it is less than five Japanese who have a razor of this type probably, the value will go up more and more in the future.

Because there is a razor that is trading at $ 6000 in Japan, I'm considering the price you gave and the cost of purchase, I will sell it at $ 3000. I think its price is not so high if you really want this razor.
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You can be successful biding without problems from Canada.
What products do you plan to purchase?

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The razor you planned to buy is bigger than the razor of the same brand,
and the blade is very rare because it is made ​​longer.

I think that it is less than five Japanese who have a razor of this type probably, the value will go up more and more in the future.

Because there is a razor that is trading at $ 6000 in Japan, I'm considering the price you gave and the cost of purchase, I will sell it at $ 3000. I think its price is not so high if you really want this razor.
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You can be successful biding without problems from Canada.
What products do you plan to purchase?

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製品は（ティファニーで）100％オリジナルと本物かどうか、残念ながら私には理解できません。これは、コピーや他の何かではないでしょうか？
そして、もう一つ質問あります。私はそれが2月10日の前にロシア/モスクワで配信する必要があります。フェデックスで発送することができていますか？。どうぞ、よろしくお願い申し上げます。

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製品は（ティファニーによる）100％オリジナルの本物かどうか、残念ながら私には理解できません。これは、コピーや他の何かではないでしょうか？
そして、もう一つ質問あります。私はそれが2月10日の前にロシア/モスクワに配達される必要があります。フェデックスで発送することができていますか？。どうぞ、よろしくお願い申し上げます。

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私は1〜3日間を選んだ到着予定するのに、なぜ5〜11日の発送になり、1月17日〜23到着した日の推定になりますか？私はそれが1〜3日の出荷として同じ金額を支払うことは合理的だとは思わないです。

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私は1〜3日間で到着する発送方法を選んだのに、なぜ到着予定が1月17日〜23日の所要時間5～11日間になるのでしょうか？私はこれで所要1〜3日の発送方法と同じ金額を請求されることは不公正だと思います。