summerld_516 — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I would like to order, but Is it possible to get one sooner?
I would want you to send it in 5 to 10 by EMS if possible.
I will order if possible. Thank you.

修正後
I would like to order, but Is it possible to get one sooner?
I would like it to be delivered in 5 to 10 by EMS if possible.
I will order if the above is possible. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your understanding of my suggestion on the other day.
Also apologize again that it has caused trouble.
The good is going to ship today. I will contact you after shipping, so please wait for a while.

Please do not worry about your order as It is going to ship within the deadline in December 12, although it takes some time to process the order because of the number of orders increased due to busy season right now.↵

修正後
Thank you for your understanding of my suggestion the other day.
I also apologize again for the trouble caused.
The good is going to be shipped today. I will contact you after shipping, so please wait a while.

Please do not worry about your order as It is going to ship within the deadline in December 12, although it takes some time to process the order because of the number of orders increased due to busy season right now.

元の翻訳
It was good that the baggage seems to have arrived. I have also read e-mail. I do not know if it I tastes good or not for you, but please try to eat. I also wish you the good life and health. Looking forward to hearing from you!

修正後
It was good that the baggage arrived. I have also read your e-mail. I do not know if it I tastes good or not for you, but please try to eat. I also wish you a good life and health. Looking forward to hearing from you!

元の翻訳
We sell Japanese goods. There are a lot of made ​​in Japan great products . Please feel free to contact us for inquiry. Things that can not be sold are food, deadly weapons,and the murder weapons. We can not sell the import items which are banned in your country as well. Please check the import ban items of your country in advance. There is duty charge to applies on the receipt of the product. Tariff is borne by the purchaser. Please check the tariff of your country in advance. Please confirm that those electrical appliances can be used at your country, as the plug shape and voltage could be different.

修正後
We sell Japanese goods. There are a lot of great products made ​​in Japan. Please feel free to contact us for inquiry. Things that can not be sold are food, deadly weapons,and the things that could be weapons. We can not sell the imported items which are banned in your country as well. Please check the import regulation of your country about what kind of things are banned in advance. There is a duty charge to apply on the receipt of the product. The purchaser will be charged for tariff. Please check the tariff of your country in advance. Please confirm that those electrical appliances can be used at your country, as the plug shape and voltage could be different.

元の翻訳

I'm writing to you for replying the mail which was received on 12/2.↵
This is to support our customer again.

Please ship out the goods which I ordered today as soon as possible, because I want to deliver to our customers in 12/24.

Yours sincerely

修正後
I'm sorry for my late reply.
I'm writing to you for replying the mail which was received on 12/2. I thought I've already sent the reply, but I found I haven't.
I've already supported the customer.
↵
Please ship out the goods which I order today as soon as possible, because I want the product to be delivered to our customers in 12/24.

Yours sincerely

元の翻訳
I think it's possible to change to the shape of the plug to Chinese standard one.
Because I think the product A will become something like the attached photo, it is all right to replace cable portion only and cope with China requirement.

It's possible to use alternative adapter such as the following if you want to use it temporarily.

Do I need to have authentication of CCC for the trial version in China?
And I think I will need time to get its certification if it's necessary.
I think that it can be provided in January if it was not necessary to get authentication for the trial version.
Please let me know the quantity you need.

修正後
I think it's possible to change the shape of the plug to Chinese standard one.
Because I think product A will become something like the attached photo, it is alright to replace cable portion only to cope with China requirement.

It's possible to use alternative adapter such as the following if you want to use it temporarily.

Do I need to have authentication of CCC for the trial version in China?
And I think I will need time to get its certification if it's necessary.
I think that it can be provided in January if it was not necessary to get authentication for the trial version.
Please let me know the quantity you need.

元の翻訳
Japan National Tourist Office and Tourism Agency are commissioned to "MICE Ambassadors" the eight having a network and transmission power to domestic and foreign in academia and industry.
We aim to attract MICE competitiveness of Japan and dig up potential demand for MICE as Japan's prestige per attractive and public relations activities.

※ Holding international conferences, etc. (MICE) is positioned as an important tool to attract many excellent technology and investment to Japan based on [Japan re-emerging strategy] and [Action programs for tourism-oriented country achievement].

修正後
Japan National Tourist Office and Tourism Agency entrusted "MICE Ambassadors" to 8 people who have connections to as well as influences on both academical and industrial fields in Japan and abroad.
As representatives of Japan, they aim to attract MICE to Japan and dig up potential demands for MICE by attractive and public relations activities.

※ Holding international conferences, etc. (MICE) is positioned as an important tool to attract many excellent knowledges and investments to Japan based on the Formulation of "Japan Revitalisation Strategy-Japan is Back-" and “Action Program for Achieving a Tourism-Oriented Country”

元の翻訳
The purpose making this policy is not necessary to change your company work method immediately, but to use as examining for developing new regulation and implementation to enhance your company internal organization structure in future.

Let us make joint efforts to develop this rule through sharing information like sending related documents etc..

修正後
The purpose of making this policy is not necessary to change your company work method immediately, but to use as examining for developing new regulation and implementation to enhance your company internal organization structure in future.

Let us make joint efforts to develop this rule through sharing information like sending related documents etc..

元の翻訳

Hi I'm Yamada from Japan.
The parcel ordered a few days ago has arrived.
Thank you very much for the quick delivery.

One of 〇〇 was shortage after verifying the receipt and the amount paid on our side.
Please do confirm in your store too.

It's all right to deliver the shortage item together the next order.
An other order will be placed soon.
We look forward to working more closely with you in the future.

修正後

Hi I'm Yamada from Japan.
The parcel ordered a few days ago has arrived.
Thank you very much for the quick delivery.

One of 〇〇 was short after verifying with the receipt and the amount paid on our side.
Please do confirm in your store too.

It's all right to deliver the shortage item together the next order.
An other order will be placed soon.
We look forward to working more closely with you in the future.

元の翻訳

Hi I'm Yamada from Japan.
The parcel ordered a few days ago has arrived.
Thank you very much for the quick delivery.

One of 〇〇 was shortage after verifying the receipt and the amount paid on our side.
Please do confirm in your store too.

It's all right to deliver the shortage item together the next order.
An other order will be placed soon.
We look forward to working more closely with you in the future.

修正後
Hello,
This is Yamada from Japan.
The parcel I ordered a few days ago has arrived.
Thank you very much for the quick delivery.

I noticed that one of 〇〇 was missing when I checked the receipt and the amount paid on our side.
Please confirm at your store as well.

It's all right to deliver the missing item together with the next order.
I will place another order soon.
We look forward to working more closely with you in the future.