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日本語

CIO　チーフ・インキュベート・オフィサー 榊原　健太郎
株式会社アクシブドットコム（現ECナビ）創業期において営業統括として、営業本部の立上げ、営業販促戦略、広告商品開発、アライアンス戦略に取り組む。
2008年にシード・アーリーベンチャーの経営・マーケティング・営業・人事戦略支援に特化した株式会社サムライインキュベートを設立し代表を務める。『Samurai Fund』（サムライファンド）を立ち上げ、ベンチャー企業のインキュベーションを推進。

英語

CIO Chief Incubate Officer Kentaro Sakakibara
The corporation Akushibu dot-com (now EC Navi) was founded as a business supervision, to address start-up of business headquarter, business promotional strategy, product advertising development, and the strategy of the Alliance Sales Division.
Serving as head of the Corporation, Samurai was established specializing in the seed-early-venture, management, marketing, sales and human resource strategy of in 2008. "Samurai Fund" （サムライファンド）was launched to promote the incubation of venture companies.

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[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★"と評価しました 2014/03/08 00:27:19

元の翻訳
CIO Chief Incubate Officer Kentaro Sakakibara
The corporation Akushibu dot-com (now EC Navi) was founded as a business supervision, to address start-up of business headquarter, business promotional strategy, product advertising development, and the strategy of the Alliance Sales Division.
Serving as head of the Corporation, Samurai was established specializing in the seed-early-venture, management, marketing, sales and human resource strategy of in 2008. "Samurai Fund" （サムライファンド）was launched to promote the incubation of venture companies.

修正後
CIO Chief Incubate Officer Kentaro Sakakibara
The corporation Akushibu dot-com (now EC Navi) was founded [wrong subject] as a business supervision, to address start-up of business headquarter, business promotional strategy, product advertising development, and the strategy of the Alliance Sales Division.
Serving as head of the Corporation [dangling modifier], Samurai [wrong subject] was established specializing in the seed-early-venture, management, marketing, sales and human resource strategy of in 2008. "Samurai Fund" （サムライファンド）[wrong subject] was launched to promote the incubation of venture companies.

This doesn't read like a short bio in the third person.