翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

評価: 52 / 1 Review / 2014/01/17 16:23:20

日本語

沖縄県と沖縄観光コンベンションビューローは1月28日大阪、29日東京の日程で、「沖縄観光&MICEコンテンツフェア~オールおきなわ大博覧会~」を開催する。

沖縄の観光産業は県を代表する分野へと発展をとげ2013年は過去最高の入域観光客数を達成した。今年はさらに慶良間諸島の国立公園指定など観光資源の充実とともに、那覇空港の国際線ターミナルや那覇港の客船ターミナルなどアクセス向上され、さらなる観光・MICEの発展が予想されている。

英語

Okinawa Convention & Visitors Bureau and Okinawa Prefecture will host the "Okinawa Tourism & MICE Content Fair - All Okinawa Great Exhibition -" on January 28 in Osaka, and January 29th in Tokyo.

Okinawa tourism industry is developed into a field to represent the province and the number of tourist achieved record high in 2013. Along with the enhancement of tourism resources such as the National Park designation of the Kerama Islands, it's expected the further development of tourism · MIC by improving access to port terminal of Naha Port and international terminal of Naha Airport this year.

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...
chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/01/17 17:38:45

元の翻訳
Okinawa Convention & Visitors Bureau and Okinawa Prefecture will host the "Okinawa Tourism & MICE Content Fair - All Okinawa Great Exhibition -" on January 28 in Osaka, and January 29th in Tokyo.

Okinawa tourism industry is developed into a field to represent the province and the number of tourist achieved record high in 2013. Along with the enhancement of tourism resources such as the National Park designation of the Kerama Islands, it's expected the further development of tourism · MIC by improving access to port terminal of Naha Port and international terminal of Naha Airport this year.

修正後
Okinawa Convention & Visitors Bureau and Okinawa Prefecture will host the "Okinawa Tourism & MICE Content Fair - All Okinawa Great Exhibition -" on January 28 in Osaka, and January 29th in Tokyo.

Okinawa tourism industry is developed into a field to represent the province and the number of tourist achieved record high in 2013. Along with the enhancement of tourism resources such as the National Park designation of the Kerama Islands, the further development of tourism and MICE are expected through improved access to port terminal of Naha Port and international terminal of Naha Airport this year.

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summerld_516 summerld_516 2014/01/17 17:49:55

Thank you!

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