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He likes animation from a young age. Especially "Saber Marionette" and "Mamotte Shugogetten" were his original point.
In 2001, he started break dance after he saw the break-dance performed by Takashi Okamura on TV.
In 2006, he was again interested in Otaku culture after he watched the animation "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya".
In 2008, he won the "BATTLE OF THE YEAR JAPAN", the tournament which determined the best break dancer in Japan, then he became the best performer in Japan among the team he formed at the time.

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He likes animation from a young age. Especially "Saber Marionette" and "Mamotte Shugogetten" were his original point.
In 2001, he started break dance after he saw the break-dance performed by Takashi Okamura on TV.
In 2006, he was again interested in Otaku culture after he watched the animation "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya".
In 2008, he won the "BATTLE OF THE YEAR JAPAN", the tournament which determined the best break dancer in Japan, then he became the best performer in Japan with the team he formed at the time.

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I have already shipped the item you ordered by air to the US.
It will be arrived at you around 2nd of December.
If you don't accept it at arrival, it will be returned to me.
When I receive it, I will give you a refund immediately.
$12 will be charged as the shipping cost. So the amount will be the balance.

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I have already shipped the item you ordered by air to the US.
It will be arrived at you around 2nd of December.
If you don't accept it upon arrival, it will be returned to me.
When I receive it, I will give you a refund immediately.
$12 will be charged as the shipping cost. So the amount will be the balance.

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I ordered the merchandise A.
The merchandise B was sent to me although I ordered the merchandise A.
I'd like to have the merchandise A.
Please don't fail to send the merchandise A.
Thank you for your corperation.

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I ordered the merchandise A.
The merchandise B was sent to me although I ordered the merchandise A.
I'd like to have the merchandise A.
Please don't fail to send the merchandise A.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
Is this translation task different from "MASCHINE 2.2" received from Agito?

Also, can we delay the deadline of "MACHINE 2.2" of Agito and "Firmware 20.11.2014" to 26?

If "141121_NI_Maschine_2_2_Press_Release_wmdoc" is a different translation task from Agito, we can manage then if you delay the deadline to 27.

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Is this translation task different from "MASCHINE 2.2" received from Agito?

Also, can we delay the deadline of "MACHINE 2.2" of Agito and "Firmware 20.11.2014" to 26?

If "141121_NI_Maschine_2_2_Press_Release_wmdoc" is a different translation task from Agito, we can manage if you delay the deadline to 27.

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1. I would like to order an item from you store, but is the image you have listed a photo that you have actually photographed showing the exact item that will be shipped?
I would like the same exact contents as well as packaging printed in Japanese as shown in the photo. So, if this is a replica or the packaging is printed in Chinese, please let me know.

2. I would like to order a few items to be shipped using EMS. Is a shipping fee required for each individual item? Can you offer a discount for the shipping fee?

3. Since I am purchasing multiple items, will you be able to offer a discount?

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1. I would like to order an item from you store, but is the image you have listed a photo that you have actually photographed showing the exact item that will be shipped?
I would like the same exact contents as well as packaging printed in Japanese as shown in the photo. So, if this is a replica or the packaging is printed in Chinese, please let me know.

2. I would like to order a few items to be shipped using EMS. Is a shipping fee required for each individual item? Can you offer a discount for the shipping fee?

3. Since I am purchasing in bulk, will you be able to offer a discount?

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The special acoustic session movie of track 3 "Fureau dakede ~Always with you~/ IT'S THE RIGHT TIME / Bring It Down" has been confirmed to be included.

Exclusive acoustic sessions from DM Band to Sho Kamijo, Gakushi and Yoshio Kishida will perform.

Please enjoy!

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The special acoustic session movie of track 3 "Fureau dakede ~Always with you~/ IT'S THE RIGHT TIME / Bring It Down" has been confirmed to be included.

Exclusive acoustic sessions from DM Band to Sho Kamijo, Gakushi and Yoshio Kishida will perform.

Don't miss it!

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● Please bring your identification card on which your photo is attached and membership card for entrance.
※ Entrance can be rejected if you come without both of the cards.

Additionally, we will inform you the details about information including ticket booking from midday of November 12 (Wed).

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● Please bring your identification card with your photo attached and a membership card for entrance.
※ Entrance will be rejected if you come without both cards.

Additionally, we will inform you the details about information including ticket booking from midday of November 12 (Wed).

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Could I get the invoice of what I bought from you?
We'll be ready for shipping to Japan after gatheringthe items in the warehouse in Florida.
But we'll need the invoice.

We can't make a document for shipping to ship without the invoice.
Would you email me with the invoice including the information below?
I need your help.

I'm sorry for this inconvenience.
Thank you.

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Could I get the invoice of what I bought from you?
We'll be ready for shipping to Japan after gathering the items in the warehouse in Florida.
But we'll need the invoice.

We can't deliver because we're unable to make a document for shipping without the invoice.
Would you email me with the invoice including the information below?
I need your help.

I'm sorry for this inconvenience.
Thank you.

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Is it possible to have the invoice of the XX that I purchased from you?

After we gather the merchandise in a warehouse in Florida, we ship them to Japan.
We need the invoice for that.

We cannot prepare the shipping documents without the invoice that stops the delivery.

Sorry to bother you, but would you please e-mail me the invoice including the following information?
We need your help.

Again, sorry for the trouble, but your support is very much appreciated.

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Is it possible to have the invoice of the XX that I purchased from you?

After we gather the merchandise in a warehouse in Florida, we ship them to Japan.
We need the invoice for that.

We cannot prepare the shipping documents without the invoice, and that is stoping us from delivering.

Sorry to bother you, but would you please e-mail me the invoice including the following information?
We need your help.

Again, sorry for the trouble, but your support is very much appreciated.

元の翻訳
You can experience the world first 360 degree virtual reality music video at [TOKYO DESINGERS WEEK 2014] held for 10 days from October 25th(Sat.) to November 3rd(Mon.Holiday) in Tokyo following London!

KUMI KODA announced he would make [Dance In The Rain], VR(virtual reality) music video on which you can feel the image world of 360 degree, with the foremost upgraded technology - [ocular slipt] that whirls the hot topics in all the relating line of the business.

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You can experience the world first 360 degree virtual reality music video at [TOKYO DESINGERS WEEK 2014] held for 10 days from October 25th(Sat.) to November 3rd(Mon.Holiday) in Tokyo following London!

KUMI KODA announced she would make [Dance In The Rain], VR(virtual reality) music video on which you can feel the image world of 360 degree, with the foremost upgraded technology - [ocular slipt] that is much talked about in all business field.

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※ On the day, we ask you to follow the instruction and attention of the staff. If you do not follow them, we might refuse your participation. A sponsor is not responsible for the accidents that are caused as a result of not following their instruction and attention in the hall.

※ You are strictly prohibited from reselling, making a copy and counterfeiting. The ticket that is obtained as a result of reselling, etc. is invalid.

※ The contents of the event is subject to change or suspended due to some reasons on the day.
If it happens, you still cannot cancel the items that were reserved or purchased. We ask you to understand it in advance.

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※ On the day, we ask you to follow the instructions and warnings of the staff. If you do not follow them, we might refuse your participation. A sponsor is not responsible for the accidents that are caused as a result of not following their instructions and warnings in the hall.

※ You are strictly prohibited from reselling, making a copy and counterfeiting. The ticket that is obtained as a result of reselling, etc. is invalid.

※ The contents of the event is subject to change or suspended due to some reasons on the day.
If it happens, you still cannot cancel the items that were reserved or purchased. We ask you to understand it in advance.

元の翻訳
Please do not worry about it.
The item exchanged is a base of neck-thru, soild body, two sets p-bass pick-ups in the picture, and it is a correct one.
We will send a correct white base as the item exchanged.
The tracking number is going to be xxx.

Of course, we will refund the shipping charge to Japan that you pay and xx dollars the charge that you are going to pay when you receive it.
We promise that we arrange the system where you do not have to pay for this matter.

We apologize that you had to spend the time for this matter.

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Please do not worry about it.
The replacement item is a base of neck-thru, soild body, two sets p-bass pick-ups as in the picture, and it is a correct one.
We will send a correct white base as a replacement.
The tracking number is going to be xxx.

Of course, we will refund the shipping charge to Japan that you pay and xx dollars for the charge that you are going to pay when you receive it.
We promise that we arrange the system where you do not have to pay for this matter.

We apologize that you had to spend the time for this matter.

元の翻訳
Hi,
Thank you for shopping at our store.
Although you placed an order, I am so sorry that I couldn't ship it to you.
Unfortunately, I would like to give you a refund, as I wouldn't like to trouble you any more.
I think you will receive a message from eBay.
When you agree with it, your order will be cancelled.
Thank you again for shopping with us this time.
Please let us know if you are interested in another Japanese product.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Hi,
Thank you for shopping at our store.
Although you placed an order, I am so sorry that I couldn't ship it to you.
I would like to give you a refund, as I wouldn't like to trouble you any more.
I think you will receive a message from eBay.
When you agree with it, your order will be cancelled.
Thank you again for shopping with us this time.
Please let us know if you are interested in another Japanese product.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
I am interested in Qatar. It is because it is a club that provokes a sensational topics in the horse race world with a new concept all the time. A few days ago, it dominated a topic in the Japanese auction, and as a top sponsor of Triumphal Gateway Prize, the sensational race must have impressed the fans of the horse race all over the world. The reason is that it is the best joy in life if we can experience the best experience with the Qatar racing club that aims to be the top in the world.

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I am interested in Qatar. It is because it is a club that provokes a sensational topics in the horse race world with a newest concept right now. A few days ago, it dominated a topic in the Japanese auction, and as a top sponsor of Triumphal Gateway Prize, the sensational race must have impressed the fans of the horse race all over the world. The reason is that it is the best joy in life if we can experience the best experience with the Qatar racing club that aims to be the top in the world.