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元の翻訳
日本からキセルをたくさん買いましたが、一度も発送で問題があったことはありません。日本はとても効率的です。

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日本からキセルをたくさん買っていますが、一度も発送で問題があったことはありません。日本はとても効率的です。

元の翻訳
I am not a native speaker of English, and I don't understand it well.
For example, can you add the website such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add the special website by ourselves?

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I am not a native speaker of English, and I don't understand it well.
For example, can you add a website such as Google, Yahoo, You Tube and iTunes?
Or is it extremely difficult for us to add a specific website by ourselves?

元の翻訳
All of our female staff at my company concurred in accordance and have come to the conlusion that the dress is wonderful.
As far as the dress is concerned, there were no issues at all. So we would love to do the business with you by all means.

I believe I heard the item is made in Thailand, but I found the item's tag said made in China. Is it really so?

If made in China, please do let me know as we will have to confirm a few concerns from the customs point of view.

Rather than simply selling as a Japanese distributor, we will be able to deal with your items with full of responsibility and morale.

As a result of our internal discussion, based upon the judgment for 00 being wonderful,

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All of our female staff at my company concurred in accordance and have come to the conlusion that the dress is wonderful.
As far as the dress is concerned, there were no issues at all. So we would love to do the business with you by all means.

I believe I heard the item is made in Thailand, but I found the item's tag saying it is made in China. Is it really so?

If made in China, please do let me know as we will have to confirm a few concerns from the customs point of view.

Rather than simply selling as a Japanese distributor, we will be able to deal with your items with full of responsibility and morale.

As a result of our internal discussion, based upon the judgment for 00 being wonderful,

元の翻訳
Hello
Thank you for shopping at our shop.
We are sorry to inform you that the delivery of the item you ordered will be delayed because it is very popular item.
The delivery scheduled day will be between the late in Nov. 2014 and the early in Dec. 2014.
Under this situation, we will keep you waiting for a long time.
So, if you would like to cancel, we can refund.
In case that you would like a refund, would you please contact us?
I'm sorry that I keep you waiting and make you feel inconvenience, but the actual situation is as above.
Anyway, we will do our best until the end in good faith.
If you have any problem, don't hesitate to contact us. We welcome you any time.

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Hello
Thank you for shopping at our shop.
We are sorry to inform you that the delivery of the item you ordered will be delayed because it is a very popular item.
The scheduled delivery date will be between late Nov. 2014 and early Dec. 2014.
Under this situation, we will keep you waiting for a long time.
So, if you would like to cancel, we can refund.
In case that you would like a refund, would you please contact us?
I'm sorry that I keep you waiting and make you feel inconvenient, but the actual situation is as above.
Nevertheless, we will do our best until the end in good faith.
If you have any problem, don't hesitate to contact us. We welcome you any time.

元の翻訳
Company ○○ has just informed us that cargo is ready to ship out.
Please see the attached document for your reference.
You can find the weight and size of the product.

We would like to request you to send it to Japan as soon as possible as we need it on urgent bases.
Could you give us quotation?

As I discussed with you yesterday, the U.S. transporter which we use currently charges $550 for 200 lbs to Japan.
As we hear that you are one of the prominent global logistics companies, we expect you to give us lower price.
We can give you for 7-10 days for transportation of the product.

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Company ○○ has just informed us that cargo is ready to ship out.
Please see the attached document for your reference.
You can find the weight and size of the product.

We would like to request you to send it to Japan as soon as possible as we need it on urgent basis.
Could you give us quotation?

As I discussed with you yesterday, the U.S. transporter which we use currently charges $550 for 200 lbs to Japan.
As we hear that you are one of the prominent global logistics companies, we expect you to give us lower price.
We can give you for 7-10 days for transportation of the product.