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元の翻訳
I apologize for the late reply.
I was away on a business trip to the U.K. last week.
I will again be around Europe for another business trip from next week until 27th.

Regarding the meeting with your company, may I please ask for several possible dates after 28th November?
I am looking forward to seeing you.

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I apologize for the late reply.
I was away on a business trip to the U.K. last week.
I will again be around Europe for another business trip from next week until 27th.

Regarding the meeting with your company, may I please ask for your several available dates after 28th November?
I am looking forward to seeing you.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I want to buy 50 of this product.
They are sold out in many other shops. Is it possible to order from you?

Also, I am thinking of buying with a bargain price since I would buy in a bulk.

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Hello.
I want to buy 50 of this product.
They are sold out in many other shops. Is it possible to order from you?

Also, I am thinking of buying with a bargain price since I would buy in bulk.

元の翻訳
*During the handshake event, staffs may touch customers' shoulders or arms while leading the way. Only those who understand and accept this condition should be recommended to participate.
*Tickets will become invalid once any act of ticket scalping is found to be involved.
*Saving spots by putting bags or sit-in are not allowed in the premises or at the event site.
Taking photographs and recording are strongly prohibited during the event.
*Content of the event may subject to change due to members' situations. We appreciate your understanding.

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*During the handshake event, staffs may touch customers' shoulders or arms while leading the way. Only those who understand and accept this condition should be recommended to participate.
*Tickets will become invalid once any act of ticket scalping is found to be involved.
*Saving spots by putting bags or sit-in are not allowed in the premises or at the event site.
Taking photographs and recording are strongly prohibited during the event.
*Content of the event may be subject to change due to members' situations. We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
The job I am working on is finally settled.
I'm hoping I would be able to reply more quickly from now on.

I learned a lot from your explanation of English phrases. I hope you wouldn't mind teaching me more.

The e-mail I sent the other day had one wrong expression.
That event is not organized BY Google, but instead it was a company event organized AT Google office.
It is a relatively small event. There must have been a bilingual support if it was organized by Google.

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The job I am working on is finally settled.
I'm hoping I would be able to reply more quickly from now on.

I learned a lot from your explanation of English phrases. I hope you wouldn't mind teaching me more.

The e-mail I sent the other day had one wrong expression.
That event was not organized BY Google, but instead was a company event organized AT Google office.
It was relatively a small event. There must have been a bilingual support if it was organized by Google.

元の翻訳
#ill

I ordered "A" the other day but it was "B" when I checked the arrived product.
I will sell it as it is, so it would be a pleasure if you could give a discount, if possible.
Thank you for your consideration.

#fdealsandsteals1

I ordered three of "C" the other day but when I checked the arrived products, one of them had its coating peeled and the other one did not have figures in its data sheet.
Both the products arrived in conditions different from what is mentioned in the product description.
I will sell them as imperfect products.

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#ill

I ordered "A" the other day but it was "B" when I checked the arrived product.
I will sell it as it is, so I would appreciate it if you could give me a discount, if possible.
Thank you for your consideration.

#fdealsandsteals1

I ordered three of "C" the other day but when I checked the arrived products, one of them had its coating peeled and the other one did not have figures in its data sheet.
Both the products arrived in conditions different from what is mentioned in the product description.
I will sell them as imperfect products.