na (natsukio) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Sorry for kept you waiting so long!
We apologize that the goods delayed. Sorry.

We hope you like the gift.
The chocolate might be melted.
It taste good when it's chilled.
The rusk is so popular that people wait for it on a long line at department stores.

I suppose you are busy but please take good care of yourself.
I will write you soon.

修正後
Sorry for keeping you wait so long!
I apologize the delay of the package. Sorry.

We hope you like the gift.
The chocolate might be melted.
It taste good when it's chilled.
The rusk is so popular that people make a long line at department stores.

I suppose you are busy but please take a good care of yourself.
I will write you soon.

元の翻訳
I have kept you waiting for very long !

I am sorry. I apologize that it was the delay of my luggage.

I am glad that i have get you present.
The chocolate maybe melted already.
Cool it inside the refrigerator and it will be delicious.
RASUKU is very a popular product in Japan that it could be a line in a department store.

Although busy with your work, but please take care of yourself.
Will contact again soon.

修正後
I have kept you waiting for very long !

I apologize the delivery of the package took so long.

I hope you'll like the present.
The chocolate maybe melted already.
Cool it inside the refrigerator and it will be delicious.
RASUKU is very a popular product in Japan so that there's a long waiting line at a department store.

I know you're busy with your work, but please take care of yourself.
Will contact again soon.

元の翻訳
元気ですか。 なぜ私が出荷しないかだって。　日本では中間業者がいないからだよ。　いたら私に教えて。
"myus"の代わりにあなたに送ってもいいですか。

修正後
元気ですか。↵
間に業者を介さずに、あなたに直接発送ができますよ。
myusを使わず、私が直接送るのはどうでしょう？

元の翻訳
こんちは
何であなた宛てに日本に送っちゃいけないの？間に誰か入って抑えているわけじゃないよね？教えて？
↵
何で、myusじゃなくて、直接あなたに送っちゃいけないの？

修正後
こんちは
間に業者を介さずに、あなたに直接発送ができますよ。
myusを使わず、私が直接送るのはどうでしょう？

元の翻訳
お元気ですか。中間業者を介在させずに、あなたに直接発送しましょうか？あなたの意見を教えてください。

myusではなくあなたに送ることにしましょうか？

修正後
お元気ですか。中間業者を介在させずに、あなたに直接発送しましょうか？あなたの意見を教えてください。

myusを使わずに直接発送することができます。

元の翻訳
I checked the shipping situation.
As the product was sent by standard shipping, there is no tracking history option, so unfortunately, I could not check the product's location.
Please contact me if there is anything I can do to assist you.
I look forward to any enquiries you may have.

A)NA
]I am still waiting to receive this item. Please inform me about when it will arrive.

修正後
I checked the shipping status.
As the product was sent by standard shipping, there is no tracking option, so unfortunately, I could not track the product location.
Please contact me if there is anything I can do to assist you.
I look forward to any inquiries you may have.

A)NA
]I am still waiting to receive this item. Please inform me about when it will arrive.