na (natsukio) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I've confirmed the condition of the product with you before the bid was ended. You mentioned it's a perfect condition. Also, the image you posted doesn't show a broken piece around the tongue of the doll. Don't you think the doll was damaged during the transportation from you to my place?

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I've confirmed the condition of the product with you before the bid was ended. You mentioned it's in perfect condition. Also, the image you posted doesn't show a broken piece around the tongue of the doll. Don't you think the doll was damaged during the transportation from you to my place?

元の翻訳
-Thank you for the swift correspondence.
The price you presented me goes over my budget.
Sorry, but I'll have to give up on this item.
I'm sorry for taking your time.

-Thank you for the swift correspondence.
The price you presented me goes over my budget.
I'd be able to buy if you lower the prices by $5 for each article.
Would that be possible?
Please think about it.

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-Thank you for your quick reply.
The price you presented me goes over my budget.
Sorry, but I'll have to give up on this item.
I'm sorry for taking your time.

-Thank you for your quick reply.
The price you presented me goes over my budget.
I'd be able to buy if you lower the prices by $5 for each article.
Would that be possible?
Please think about it.

元の翻訳
I ordered X from you
A sufficient amount is needed again so could you offer at wholesale?
The orders are as follows

The payment will be via PayPal.
The shipping address is as follows.

UPS Worldwide Saver is preferable.

I　would like to purchase A and B at 70$ and 85$ respectively including carriage .
These items are currently catching on so so a prompt answer is desirable.
this is the only time to get .

I am looking forward hearing from you soon.

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I ordered X from you.
A sufficient amount is needed again so could you offer at wholesale price?
The orders are as follows

The payment will be via PayPal.
The shipping address is as follows.

UPS Worldwide Saver is preferable.

I would like to purchase A and B at 70$ and 85$ including shipping .
These items are currently catching on so a prompt answer is desirable.
This is the only time to get .

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry that I send reply late.
I couldn't reply because one of mail I got was deleted by security.
When you finish, please visit Tokyo to enjoy!
It may needs a little experience and know-how of techniques to make body of radio control, but when I was young, I made a lot of many until I was satisfied by try and error. I think that now I can make radio control with this experience.
Do your best to make and enjoy!
I like blue X5R!!

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I'm sorry for my late reply.
I couldn't reply because one of the emails I received was deleted by the security.
When you finish, please come visit me in Tokyo!
Youmay need a little experience and know-how to make a radio contro body, but when I was young, I made a lot of them without worrying much about errors until I could build something that satisfied me. I think that now I can make radio controsl with confidence.
Do your best to make and enjoy!
I like blue X5R!!