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アップルがうわさの製品iWatch用として使える曲がるバッテリーパックの詳細を発表

アップルの時計については様々なうわさが飛び交い、今までにもその製品用として曲げることのできる部品の特許が同社から出されました。その中には曲がるディスプレイや曲げると機能に変化が出る仕掛けなどがあります。今日はアップルから出願されたさらに別の特許をご覧に入れましょう。今度は腕時計のようにしなやかで曲げることのできる製品にうってつけのバッテリーデザインです。

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アップルがうわさの製品iWatch用として使える曲がるバッテリーパックの詳細を発表

アップルの時計については様々なうわさが飛び交い、今までにもその製品用として曲げることのできる部品の特許が同社から出されました。その中には曲がるディスプレイや曲げると機能に変化が出る仕掛けなどがあります。今日はアップルから出願されたさらに別の特許をご覧に入れましょう。今度は腕時計のようにしなやかで曲げることのできる製品にうってつけのバッテリーデザインです (PatentlyApple より)。

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I just checked and found that the item did not reach you.
In this case the smoothest way will be that first the order should be cancelled by A and after that the order should be placed again for the same item.
If you agree with this, we will inform you of the page for you to order.

Please be informed that the item you sent back to us will need an extra shipping charge.
Though I have no idea at this stage about the charge, I assume that it will be around $20. Would it be possible for A to bear $10, half of the charge.

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I just checked and found out that the item had not reach you indeed.
In this case the smoothest way would be to have you, Mr. A, first cancel the order and then have you place the order again for the same item.
If you agree with this, we will inform you of the page for you to place the order.

Please be informed that the item you sent back to us would incur an extra shipping charge.
Though I have no idea at this stage about the charge, I assume that it will be around $20. Would it be OK for you, Mr. A, to bear $10, half of the charge?

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Because I have not received any reply from the seller, I have escalated my objection to the claim.
The first, I would like to demand refunding the amount I paid for 6 items.
Next, I am going to return 7 items in my possession right now, and demand refunding the amount I have paid once the seller will receive them.
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I cannot trust the items sold by the seller, therefore, I will return all items I have purchased.
The entire items have not been opened nor used. Once I return all of them, I would like to demand the entire amount I have already paid to the seller.

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Because I have not received any reply from the seller, I have escalated my objection to the claim.
First I would like to request a refund for the six items that I have already returned.
Next I am going to return the seven items in my possession right now and would like to request a refund as soon as the seller receives them.
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I cannot trust the items sold by the seller, and as such, will be returning all the items I have purchased from him.
All the items are unopened and unused. Upon the return kindly process the refund for the entire amount.

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I'm very sorry for asking many things.
I have one more question.

I'd prefer to change settings to censor some keywords (e.g. "abc") and words that includes banned keywords (e.g. "abcde").

For example:
no-go word: abc
written word: abcde
effect: ***de

Which source do I have to change?

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I'd also like to change sentences quoted from aaa.com into an another language. Which source do I have to change?

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I'm very sorry for asking so many questions.
I have one more question.

I would like the change the settings so that when I register the word "abc" to the exclusion list, a string "abcde" would be excluded as well.

For example:
word to be excluded: abc
input: abcde
result: ***de

Whwere in the source code should I modify?

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I'd also like to change the sentences quoted from aaa.com into another language. Which source do I have to change?

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iPad2 keyboard attachment / Personal iPad3 case

When the iPad is in it's case, the screen can be freely operated vertically and horizontally, documents can be produced, animations can be viewed, various applications can be used simultaneously and the screen direction can be changed.

The screen angle can be adjusted to 3 levels because the keyboard allows this change according to one's viewpoint. You can easily charge it by simply connecting it to your computer or USB AC adaptor, and when the case is folded. So charging during use is possible. It's convenient to carry because the cable can be stowed away.

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iPad2 / iPad3 case with keyboard attachment

When the iPad is in its case, the screen can be freely operated vertically and horizontally, documents can be produced, animations can be viewed, and the screen direction can be changed.

The screen angle can be adjusted to three levels by sliding the keyboard forwaard. You can easily charge it by simply connecting it to your computer or USB AC adaptor, and when the case is folded. So charging during use is possible. It's convenient to carry because the cable can be stowed away.

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Have you still got the "Tour Issue R11s V2 10.5 Head"? I would like to order 10 of them.
In 1 or 2 weeks I would also like an additional order on "V3 Head". Would it be possible?
I tried to get them some time ago, but it seems like there are many requests for them in Japan.
I would be thankful if you informed me if you had any heads from "Tour Van". If the desired products were available in Japan, maybe I would order more than 10 of them.

Understood. Please inform me also about the shipping time.

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Would it be possible for you to stock up on "Tour Issue R11s V2 10.5 Head"? If so, I would like to order 10 of them.
In one or two weeks I would also like to place an order for "V3 Head". Would it be possible?
As I mentioned, there is a high demand for your products in Japan.
I would be thankful if you would check with me next time you place an order for any Head from "Tour Van" to see if I am interested in making additional purchase. If the product in question is something I know has a high demand in Japan, I would be happy to place an order of ten or more.

Understood. Please be sure to check with me when ordering.

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Thank you as always.
and thank you very much for your reply.

The holds with defects are as follows;
Cuajo 2XL×２
Smallholds × 10(Until Now)

Anyway,

I appreciate it if you could send us in-stock items.
I'm sorry to bother you when you are busy.
Thank you.

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Thank you as always.
and thank you very much for your reply.

The holds with defects are as follows:
Cuajo 2XL×２
Smallholds × 10 (up to now)

Anyway,

I would appreciate it if you could send us your in-stock items first.
I appreciate your taking the time.
Thank you.

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Hello,

I would like to purchase an item from your company.
And, I would like to verify the followings;

I have not been able to find the indications for the country of origin and materials used.

Would you please let me know where I can find those indications?

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Hello,

I would like to purchase an item from your company.
And, I would like to verify the following;

I have not been able to find the indications of the country of origin and materials used.

Would you please let me know where I can find those indications?

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Thank you.
Please fill in the Google form as soon as you get back.
I will reply you right away when you finished writing.

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Thank you.
Please fill out the Google form as soon as you get back.
We will respond as soon as you complete the form.

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They open to the public the scenery of Hashima also know as Gunkanjima which used to be the entrance of under the sea coal mine in the Nagasaki City, Nagasaki prefecture. At present, the public can visit a part of island, but they have shot the entire scenery of island, in cooperation of Nagasaki city government, including the restricted areas. With using the back pack type shooting equipment “Street View Trekker”, they have walked around the island for about two hours. Mr. A, who was introduced here before, has been the in charge of shooting the moving images. Both the images and background music are excellent. There has been a rarely-visited island even for Japanese. It is simulated profound experience for me from those moving images. With the Street View Trekker on the back, the photographer can walk around anywhere such as on the rubbles.

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They published the video of Hashima Island, also know as Gunkanjima, which used to be the entrance of the underwater coal mine in the Nagasaki City, Nagasaki prefecture. ↵
At present, the access to the public is limited, but they have shot the entire scenery of island, in cooperation of Nagasaki city government, including the restricted areas. ↵
With the use of a backpack-style of shooting equipment “Street View Trekker”, they have walked around the island for about two hours. ↵
Mr. A, who was featured here before, was in charge of shooting the video. Both the images and background music are excellent. The area is rarely explored even by Japanese Japanese. It is amazing that we can experience the visit by means of the movie. With the Street View Trekker on the back, the photographer can walk around anywhere such as on the rubbles.

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I have made a purchase from you before.
I am Taro Yamada from company XXX.

I am an importer and seller of products.
I mainly handle AAA.
Currently, I'm looking for a partner who will be able to cooperate with me for a long time in the future.

I'd like to hasten to add that I want this item.
2 sets.
http://aaa.com
This product is single, however I'd like six of them as a set.

If you're willing to cooperate with me, will you be able to give me 10 percent discount? I will purchase from you in the future, and hope to have a good business relationship with you for a long time.

Thank you.

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I have previously made a purchase from you.
I am Taro Yamada from company XXX.

I am an importer and seller of products.
I mainly handle AAA.
Currently, I'm looking for a partner who would be willing to do businees long term with me.

To start I'd like the following items.
2 sets.
http://aaa.com
This product is a single item, however, I'd like six of them as a set.

If you're willing to cooperate with me, will you be able to give me a 10 percent discount? I will purchase from you in the future and hope to have a good business relationship with you for a long time.

Thank you.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

Within 14 days, you may send back the product to us.

However, please be noted that the return shipping cost should be born by you.

We will make shipment by EMS (with tracking number).

It will take about 4 – 6 days before the shipment reaches Australia.

Hope you may like this camera.

(unrelated matter)

Lithium ion battery is not included in it.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

Within 14 days, you may send back the product to us.

However, please note that the return shipping cost should be born by you.

We will ship via EMS (with a tracking number).

It will take about 4 – 6 days before the shipment reaches Australia.

Hope you will like this camera.

(unrelated matter)

Lithium ion battery is not included in the shipment.

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The ratio of inferior goods purchased from you is too high.
The possibility that the products in themselves are bad knockoffs is very high.
I'll return all the products to you, so please refund me.
All the products are unopened.

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The defect rate is too high among the goods purchased from you.
The likelihood that your products themselves are bad knockoffs is very high.
I'll return all the products to you, so please give me a full refund.
All the products are unopened.

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Hello,

I would like to make an order from you again.

Could you make a connection cord which can connect to RCA terminals?
I would like to try to connect to pre-amplifier of other brands.↵
Its PIN-RCA.

If possible, I would like 2 of them.

Hoping to hear from you soon,

Thank you.

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Hello,

I would like to place an order with you again.

Could you make a connection cord which can connect to the RCA connectors on this amplifier?
I would like to try to connect it to a pre-amplifier of a different brand which has RCA pins.

If possible, I would like 2 of them.

Hoping to hear from you soon,

Thank you.

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Thank you for your reply,

The bag I received was a defective item.
The bag on a product photo has a heart shaped appliqued,
but the one I received didn't have it.

I purchased the item for my friend's birthday,
I would like to exchange it if I can receive the new one by 10th July.

I have also paid JPY 2,653 as import tax.
Please refund the amount, and advice me how to ↵
exchange refund the item.

Please reply to this email ASAP.

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Thank you for your reply,

The bag I received was defective.
The bag shown in the product photo has a heart-shaped applique,
but the one I received didn't have one.

I purchased the item for my friend's birthday,
I would like to exchange it if I can receive the new one by 10th of July.

I have also paid JPY 2,653 as the import tax.
Please refund me the amount and advise me on how I can get the item exchanged.

Please reply to this email ASAP.

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I want to purchase "商品A".
Is there any vacancy for the package that I have ordered(less than 2kg)?
If you can add "商品A" into it, let me know the numbers of "商品A" you can pack.

Do you have a stock of small sized normal type "商品B"?

Do you have a stock of "商品C"?
I want to purchase them by $100 for each as you mentioned before.

Can I purchase "商品D"($10 for each if purchase more than 50 amount) now?

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I would like to purchase "商品A".
Is there any more room to add it to the current order and stay under 2kg?
If you can add "商品A" into it, let me know the numbers of "商品A" you can pack.

Do you have a stock of small sized normal type "商品B"?

Do you have a stock of "商品C"?
I would like to purchase them at the price of $100 each you mentioned earlier.

Can I purchase "商品D" ($10 each if purchased more than 50 pieces) now?

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The shipping address is the same to the transfer company in the US called MYUS even we purchase directly.
We sell them much expensive in Japan than the price in the US because of the shipping fee.
So there wouldn't be any discount from the price in the US.
We can sell them more if the purchasing price would decline.
An agent of ○○ in Japan has quit selling the items, but there is still demand for it.
We would like to sell more items of ○○ in Japan.
Thank you.

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The shipping address is the same as before even with the direct purchase. It is the forwarding company called MYUS localted in the US.
Our prices in Japan are significantly higher than the prices in the US because of the shipping fee.
So there wouldn't be any discount from the price in the US.
We should be able to sell them in larger quantity if the cost would be lower.
Whle the agent of ○○ in Japan has withdrawn from the market, there is still demand for it.
We would love to promote the merchandise by ○○ in Japan.
Thank you.

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and thank you very much for accepting my idea. I was searching for tools that makes easy to research at Ebay and sell the items for you, and that's why it took this long.

Finally, I discovered a sales tool 24, which was developed for Japanese sellers. That manual is on the site below. I'm going to hand you a list of the displayed items next time, so please learn about this tool.

I'm going to ask you to display the products which includes lithium battery. Please add attached sentences to the camera itself this time.

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and thank you very much for accepting my proposal. I was searching for tools that would make it easy to research and put the items up for sale at Ebay, and that's why it took this long.

Finally, I discovered a sales tool called 24, which was developed for Japanese sellers. That manual can be found on the site below. ↵
Please familialize yourself with the tool before I send you the list of the merchandise for sale next time.

I'm going to ask you to put up for sale the products which includes a lithium battery. Please add attached sentences to the camera itself this time.

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He cooerated well with the parties and did most of the work that was necessary for supporting multi dc.
In Q1's Hack Week, he made an operative application based on his unique idea with the support of several people. As you can see, he has an ability and a passion to implement his original idea.

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He did an excellent job of collaborating with the parties involved and did most of the work that was necessary for supporting multi dc.
Based on his unique idea he managed to build a working application with the support of several people during the Q1 of the HackWeek. ↵
As you can see, he has the ability and the passion to turn his original idea into reality.

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Dear AWK,
Thank you for your reply.

↵
I am Cosmo.

Since I cannot speak English, I use the translation service to send the message↵
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At this time,↵
I have read your work ^ ^↵
and felt that you have a view of the world that is very nice and delicate.

In fact at this time,↵
I was thinking about opening a blog
and looking for someone who could make the avatar.

Although I have seen a lot of works,
I felt that AWk's work precisely matched the image I had in mind.

If it is possible,↵
could you please make the avatar for me?
and the cornerstone for everything?↵
I will pay you.

I'm sorry for the surprise,↵
I will be glad if you can think about it,↵
Thank you!

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Dear AWK,
Thank you for your reply.

My name is Cosmo.

Since I cannot speak English, I am using the translation service to send this message.

I am thinking about writing a blog
and have been looking for someone who would create an avatar for me.

Among the various work I have viewed, Mr. AWK,
I felt that your work precisely matches the image I had in mind.

Would you consider creating an avatar for me?
Of course I will compensate you for your work.

I apologize for this unsolicited request. I hope you would consider it. Thank you!

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I had various experiences through my blog.
First, I have over 1,000 followers for my Twitter and instagram. As for my blog, it has now more than 20,000 hits a day. I started it three years ago, that is to say, since I was a high school student, as I'm 21 years old now.

So, SNS usage is my best weapon for now.
I think I am very good at expressing myself in words, and it contributes to this advantage of mine.

I will introduce some of my experiences I have had.

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I have learned a lot through my blogging.
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First, I have over 1,000 followers for my Twitter and instagram. As for my blog, it has now more than 20,000 hits a day. I started it three years ago, that is to say, since I was a high school student, as I'm 21 years old now.

So, SNS usage is my best weapon for now.
And I think that is because I am very good at expressing myself in words.

I would like to introduce some of the experiences I have had.

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Why the visual design is preferred?
Upon the hearing with the client, what are the real messages that ought to be delivered? We needed to be guided. The fact is that, we want give a strong compact of the idea that "living in Sweden makes one want to know the richness of life".

At Dalarna of Sweden, the birthplace of this client, we filmed the people actually living there and presented the real north European lifestyle. It is not about the show of the functions of home and its inside and outside looks as a commercial product. In Japan, there must be some people who want to see the key vision of real north European lifestyle. We needed to arouse the interest of "users who are longing for north Europe.”

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Why those visuals?
Through our interview with our client, we have extracted the core messages that ought to be delivered. They wish to emphasize "the richness of life that is the base of the life in Sweden."

At Dalarna of Sweden, the place of origin of this client, we filmed the people actually living there and presented the true lifestyle of the Northern Europe. ↵
Instead of showcasing the functions of home and its interior and the exterior as a commercial product, we aimed at appealing to those who long for a life in Northern Europe that is known to exist in Japan by emphasizing its lifestyle as a key visual.

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Tooltip not showing on mouse-over
Tooltip not showing upon pressing the up or down key on the keyboard.
Are you sure you want to change the settings?
Backup set phrases when saving
Number of set phrases that can be saved in each group
Show "Memo" with the list of set phrases
Unhide screen when switching between tab and page
Show the main screen where the cursor is
Count words not in bytes by in the number of words
Set pointer on first row when shown on screen
Only show windows that matches the information input

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Do not show the tooltip on mouse-over
Do not show the tooltip upon pressing the up or down key on the keyboard
Are you sure you want to change the settings?
Create a backup when saving the template
Number of templates that can be saved in each group
Show the list of templates in "Memo"-style
Show screen when switching between tab and page
Show the main screen where the cursor is
Save the path when copying files and folders↵
Count words not in bytes by in the number of characters
Set the cursor on first row when shown on screen
Only show windows that matches the input