LilacWonder (lilacwonder) — 付けたレビュー

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I just checked the tracking number, but according the status, the item has reached you.

The tracking number is, EG225716653JP.

Haven't you got it already?

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I just checked the tracking number, but the record shows that the item has reached you.

The tracking number is EG225716653JP.

Are you sure you have not received it already?

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I have contacted the courier company regarding to your item.

The item is still in custom because of the name (company name ) of receiver was blank.

We didn't know it because we didn't receive a contact from courier company about the situation.

We have explained your company name and address, contents of the parcel, to customs service again and asked them to screen out the item just before.

I heard as soon as the item is pass through, it will be delivered to us.↵
I guess it will take 2 to 3 days.

Thank you

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I have contacted the courier company regarding your item.

The item is still in customs because of the name (company name ) of the recipient had been left blank.

We had no way of knowing about it because we had not received any notification from the courier company that the package was being held at customs.

We have forwarded our company name and address, contents of the parcel, to the courier company and requested that they go through customs again.

I was told that it will be shipped to us as soon as the item clears the customs. ↵
I am guessing that we should receive it within 2 or 3 days.

Thank you

元の翻訳
Yes, card is attached with this products.

120 is too low so it is not possible.

At the very least, 999$ is the lowest price that we can give.

Thank you!

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Yes, a card comes with this product.

120 is way too low. I cannot give you that price.

At the very least, 999$ is the lowest price that we can offer.

Thank you!

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It is easier to make the sale plan, if you tell us not only xx and xx,
but the whole price of the things.

As we ordered lots of things, even only a little, we will be glad if you can give lower price compare to the last year.
(200~300 unit, plus we expected to buy some more)

Unfortunately, in comparison to last year, the value of yen dropped about 20%.

We hope to make deals that benefit to both of us.

In the case of credit card payment or bank transfer, Is it possible to get a discount on Paypal commission fee?

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It would be easier for us to make the sales plan if you could tell us not only xx and xx
but the wholesale price of your entire selection.

We would appreciate it if you could give us a little discount over the last year's prices since we place a large order.
(we expect to place orders of 200~300 unit or more)

Please understand that the value of yen has unfortunately dropped about 20% since last year.

We hope to do business with you that would benefit both of us.

In the case of credit card payment or bank transfer, would it be possible to give us a discount in the amount equal to the Paypal commission fee?

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Cherry trees are planted on the way.

It was founded 405 years ago in 1608. The height of the important cultural asset's pagoda is about 32m. it's the oldest one in Kanto. The sculptures standing around are Japanese Animal Zodiac. The four Bodisattvaa and the mortualy tablet of the second Shogun of Tokugawa are in the door. It was established because people praied for recover from sick of the second Shogun of Tokugawa and it was realised.
The feature of the pagoda is a contruction form of transition period between Edo and Momoyama period. Momoyama period is prior to Edo period. It's only pagoda of Momoyama period in Japan.

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Cherry trees are planted along the way.

It was founded 405 years ago in 1608. The pagoda, also designated as an Important Cultural Property, is about 32m high. It did not burn down during the last war and is the oldest one in the Kanto region. Surrounding the pagoda are the sculptures of the Japanese Animal Zodiac. ↵
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Stored in its cabinet are four Bodisattvaa and second General Tokugawa's mortuary tablet. The pagoda was erected when the wishes came true after praying that the General would recover from his illness.
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The pagoda features the contruction style of the transition period between Edo and Momoyama period. Momoyama period is prior to Edo period. This is the only pagoda of Momoyama period in Japan.

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Targetmedia company will hold "Targetmedia Forum" at Iidabashi at 1 p.m on 4th of July. About 40 companies such as research, CRM, telemarketing and PR circles will exhibit at the Forum. Solution providers, the media and tool vendors which are watched with interest by advertising, marketing and IT circles will gather together at the forum ,which will be the place you can gather information from the various fields' professionals and talk business.

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Marketing industries business forum to take place after two and a half years↵
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Targetmedia Inc. will hold "Targetmedia Forum" at Bellesalle Iidabashi First at 1 p.m on the 4th of July. ↵
About forty companies from the research, CRM, telemarketing and PR industries will hold their booth at the forum. Solution providers, the media and tool vendors which are closely watched by the advertising, marketing and IT industries will meet at the forum where you can gather information from the various fields' professionals and do business.

元の翻訳
We appreciate for what you have done to respond our liberty inquiries.

We are planning to upload the items regularly from now on.

We are thinking of letting you check the file for InventryLoader next time as it has been done so. Will it be possible?↵
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I appreciate if you could accept our request.

Thank you and regards.

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Thank you for being accommodating.

We plan to upload a fair amount of products on a regular basis going forward.

Would it be possible for you to continue checking our InventoryLoader files like you did this time?↵
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I would very much appreciate your help in this matter.

Thank you and regards.