翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

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日本語

セラーから返信がありませんので、クレームにエスカレートしました。
まず、すでに返品済みの６個分の返金を求めます。
次に、手元にある７個を返品しますので、それが到着次第、７個分の返金を求めます。
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セラーの扱っている商品自体が信頼性に欠けるので商品自体を全て返品します。
商品は未開封、未使用の状態です。全品返品次第、返金を求めます。

英語

Because I have not received any reply from the seller, I have escalated my objection to the claim.
The first, I would like to demand refunding the amount I paid for 6 items.
Next, I am going to return 7 items in my possession right now, and demand refunding the amount I have paid once the seller will receive them.
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I cannot trust the items sold by the seller, therefore, I will return all items I have purchased.
The entire items have not been opened nor used. Once I return all of them, I would like to demand the entire amount I have already paid to the seller.

レビュー ( 1 )

lilacwonderはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/07/07 14:48:54

元の翻訳
Because I have not received any reply from the seller, I have escalated my objection to the claim.
The first, I would like to demand refunding the amount I paid for 6 items.
Next, I am going to return 7 items in my possession right now, and demand refunding the amount I have paid once the seller will receive them.
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I cannot trust the items sold by the seller, therefore, I will return all items I have purchased.
The entire items have not been opened nor used. Once I return all of them, I would like to demand the entire amount I have already paid to the seller.

修正後
Because I have not received any reply from the seller, I have escalated my objection to the claim.
First I would like to request a refund for the six items that I have already returned.
Next I am going to return the seven items in my possession right now and would like to request a refund as soon as the seller receives them.
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I cannot trust the items sold by the seller, and as such, will be returning all the items I have purchased from him.
All the items are unopened and unused. Upon the return kindly process the refund for the entire amount.

原文に忠実でわかりやすい訳になっていると思います。