Kumi (kumi-kiri) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
何て事なんだ…オーダーしたギターがよりによって他の人からあなたが購入した2017年式のレス・ポールを代わりに購入した同じ日に届くなんて。こんな事になるなんて信じられない。今日届くなんて聞いてないのに突然来るなんて。どうすればいいの？両方払うお金なんて無いし。両方買うとしたらこのギターの値段を何とか大特価にしてくれるかしてくれないと送り返さなきゃならないですよ。こんな事になって申し訳ないです。でもこれはあなたのせいでも私のせいでも無いと思います。なので責めることはしませんが、どう対処したら良いでしょうか？
ご連絡お待ちしています。

修正後
何て事なんだ…あなたの2017年式のレス・ポールの代わりに他の人から購入したギターと、あなたのギターが同じ日に届くなんて。こんな事になるなんて信じられない。今日届くなんて聞いてないのに突然来るなんて。どうすればいいですか？両方払うお金なんて無いし。両方買うとしたらこのギターの値段を何とか大特価にしてくれるかしてくれないと送り返さなきゃならないですよ。こんな事になって申し訳ないです。でもこれはあなたのせいでも私のせいでも無いと思います。なので責めることはしませんが、どう対処したら良いでしょうか？
ご連絡お待ちしています。

元の翻訳
We sold ER01 about a week ago, which we had in our storage. However, we had a claimed that it broken soon after the costumer who had purchased it. The condition of ER01 is when you drive the slider in slow speed, it doesn't move smoothly, but it goes choppy. (It reaches until the third on the scale.) The side which doesn't move smooth switched into its direction by some effect. We had a movie clip sent over to us from the customer and we had attached it on this Email. Is it possible for you to see the part where causing a problem? Is it possible to exchange it to a new part for the customer? Please let me know how.

修正後
We sold ER01, which we had in our storage, about a week ago. However, we had received claims that it broke soon after the customer purchased it. The faulty condition of ER01 is that when you push the slider slowly, it doesn't move smoothly, but instead moves choppy (until the third setting on the scale). The side which doesn't move smoothly switches into this direction for some reason. We had a movie clip sent over to us from the customer and we have attached it to this Email. Is it possible for you to figure out the part that is causing the problem? Is it possible to replace it with a new part for the customer? Please let me know how you will address this issue.

元の翻訳
I am sorry to cause you an inconvenience. ↵
There is a possibility that the Japanese products will not work in your country because of the voltage difference.
Therefore, we will give you the voltage converter as a gift. Could you use it once instead?
Please wait for a while until the converter to be sent to you.
Thank you very much for purchasing our product.

修正後
I am sorry to cause you the inconvenience.↵
Japanese products may not work in your country because of the voltage difference.
Therefore, we will give you a voltage converter as a gift. Could you use it once instead?
Please wait for a while until the converter to be delivered to you.
Thank you very much for purchasing our product.

元の翻訳
I apologize for my late response.

I am happy to hear that you are interested in purchasing a sword.

Please allow me to make sure a few points for smithing a sword.

•Because your order is specific, the price of the production of the sword will start from at least $20,000.

•It will take up to 5 to 6 months for completion of the production until it comes to your hand.

•I would like you to send me a picture of the sword because I would like to know what kind of specification will be to the sword.

修正後
I apologize for my late response.

I am happy to hear that you are interested in purchasing a sword.

Please allow me to make sure a few points before smithing a sword.

•Because your order is specific, the price to produce the sword will start from at least $20,000.

•It will take up to 5 to 6 months for completion of the production until it comes to your hand.

•I would like you to send me a picture of the sword because I would like to know what kind of specification will be to the sword.

元の翻訳
I have not received the invoice for Order0923, yet.
Could you send it to me within today?

I have checked that No. 1165 and 1188 have been shipped.
However, I don't see that Order No. 1195 seems to be not being shipped yet.
Why hasn't it been shipped yet?
If it is on hold because of a part of the inventory is out of stock, then could you send the ones which are ready to be shipped?

修正後
I have not received the invoice for Order0923, yet.
Could you send it to me within today?

I have checked that No. 1165 and 1188 have been shipped.
However, Order No. 1195 does not seem having been shipped yet.
Why hasn't it been shipped yet?
If it is on hold because of a part of the inventory is out of stock, then could you go ahead and ship the available ones first?

元の翻訳
I have not received the invoice for Order0923, yet.
Could you send it to me within today?

I have checked that No. 1165 and 1188 have been shipped.
However, I don't see that Order No. 1195 seems to be not being shipped yet.
Why hasn't it been shipped yet?
If it is on hold because of a part of the inventory is out of stock, then could you send the ones which are ready to be shipped?

修正後
I have not received the invoice for Order0923 yet.
Could you send it to me by the end of the day?

I have checked that No. 1165 and 1188 have been shipped.
However, it doesn't seems that Order No. 1195, which I ordered on Sep. 19, has not been shipped yet.
Why hasn't it been shipped yet?
If it is on hold because of a part of the inventory is out of stock, then could you ship the items in stock?

元の翻訳
We understood it.
So, you are saying that $88 is the lowest price.

Well, the shipping destination is to Florida.
Is it possible to make it for free?
If it is possible, we think that we can compete well against other sellers.

We are hoping for the long lasting business with you.

The common models of this product are sold in Japan, which come with version of 50Hz and 60Hz.
Are you handling one of those common models at your shop?

Do you have the improved model, which is displayed on the seller's website?

We would like to order the 60Hz one.

修正後
We understood it.
So, you are saying that $88 is the lowest price.

Well, the shipping destination is Florida.
Is it possible to ship it for free?
If it is possible, we think that we can compete well against other sellers.

We are hoping for the long lasting business with you.

The common models of this product are sold in Japan, which come with version of 50Hz and 60Hz.
Are you handling one of those common models at your shop?

Do you have the new and updated model, which is displayed on the seller's website?

We would like to order the 60Hz one.

元の翻訳
DHLにて注文に関しての手続きと、DHLサイトへログインをして発送手続きにをする旨をEメール致しました。今後のお話を進めてもよろしいでしょうか？ありがとうございます。

もし、何か不明な点や気になる点がございましたら何なりとお申し付けください。

どの専門的レベルにも匹敵するアーティスト質感のあるカラーペンシル。
その各色は色同士馴染みやすく、そっと色付いてウォータープルーフ。
柔らかくて、太い芯はスムーズに色がのりやすいため上質なブレンドや明暗を作り出します。
パッケージの内容は、9-3/8 X 4-3/8 X 7/8 インチの缶に一個に対し２４本のペンシルが入りです。
上質な着色で豊かな色の飽和を実現。
芯が太くて折れにくいです。

修正後
DHLにて注文に関しての手続きと、DHLサイトへログインをして発送手続きにをする旨をEメール致しました。今後のお話を進めてもよろしいでしょうか？ありがとうございます。

もし、何か不明な点や気になる点がございましたら何なりとお申し付けください。

どの専門的レベルにも匹敵するアーティスト質感のあるカラーペンシル。
その各色は色同士馴染みやすく、そっと色付いてウォータープルーフ。
柔らかくて、太い芯はスムーズに色がのりやすいため上質なブレンドや明暗を作り出します。
パッケージの内容は、9-3/8 X 4-3/8 X 7/8 インチの缶に一個に対し２４本のペンシルが入りです。
上質な着色で豊かな色の彩度を実現。
芯が太くて折れにくいです。

元の翻訳
•Delete the list of item from「Delete product and listing」in「Action」

修正後
•Delete the (applicable/appropriate) item from the [Delete product and listing] in the [Action] menu.

元の翻訳
The price($) (shipping fee included)x80-1000 on Amazon.com > if the market price is $70 on Amazon.com, the selling price should be under ¥4,600 on Amazon.co.jp.
You can search on each Amazon website by entering ASIN to check the price.

In the case If you think that you may be able to get some profits because of the huge difference in price with other sellers, you can set the number of item as 1, and try the process of re-listing the item that I have directed you earlier.

修正後
The price($) (shipping fee included) x 80-1000 on Amazon.com > if the market price is $70 on Amazon.com, the selling price should be under ¥4,600 on Amazon.co.jp.
You can search on each Amazon website by entering an ASIN to check the price.

If you think you may be able to get some profits because of the huge price difference with other sellers, you can set the number of item as 1, and try the process of re-listing the item that I indicated you earlier.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your contact.

I am sending products to Japan all together from a storage place that I have in Florida. Therefore, I request sending the product to Florida.

Also, is it possible for you to purchase accessories and parts of car in low prices as well?
For example, the parts of XXX and its accessories.

There are some products that are not available in Japan, so those are very popular.

I am thinking of ordering order those from your shop.

I am looking forward to hear from your positive response.

The best regards.

修正後
Thank you very much for your message.

I am sending products to Japan all together from a storage place that I have in Florida. Therefore, I request you send the product to Florida.

Also, is it possible for you to purchase accessories and car parts at low prices as well?
For example, parts of XXX and its accessories.

There are some products that are not available in Japan, so those are very popular.

I am thinking of ordering those from your shop.

I am looking forward to receiving your positive response.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
セグメント分割に対するフィードバックをして頂きありがとう改めてお礼申し上げます。
しかし、クライアントのMichael氏によると、ソース内のテキスト上の分割は不可能な場合があるそうです。したがって、以下の方法に決めました。

もし、AGITO Translate上の一つの文章に対して例えば3つに分割する場合、翻訳文章の最初のセグメント*全部*を埋め、他のセグメントを空欄にするか、もしくはセグメントの翻訳を変えていく事によって、最終の.xml.で文章を正しくするかにして下さい。ソースのセグメントが目的のセグメントと一致しなくても構いません。

これで実行できれば良いと願いますが、フィードバックを宜しくお願い致します。

修正後
セグメント分割に対するフィードバックをして頂きありがとう改めてお礼申し上げます。
しかし、クライアントのMichael氏によると、ソース内のテキスト上の分割は不可能な場合があるそうです。したがって、以下の方法に決めました。

もし、AGITO Translate上の一つの文章に対して例えば3つに分割する場合、翻訳文章の最初のセグメント*全部*を埋め、他のセグメントを空欄にするか、もしくはセグメントの翻訳を変えていく事によって、最終の.xml.で文章を正しくするかにして下さい。ソースのセグメントが目的のセグメントと一致しなくても構いません。

これで実行できれば良いと願いますが、フィードバックを宜しくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
→The meaning was, "I have to cancel the order once because the item that I had sent came back to me. I am sorry about the confusion. In return, I would like to refund you $3."

修正後
→The meaning was something like "I have to cancel the order once because the item that I had shipped was returned to me. I am sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused you. As a token of my apologies to you, I am issuing you a refund of 3 dollars."

元の翻訳
→The meaning was, "I have to cancel the order once because the item that I had sent came back to me. I am sorry about the confusion. In return, I would like to refund you $3."

修正後
→The meaning was, "I have to cancel the order once because the item that I had sent came back to me. I am sorry about the confusion. In return, I would like to refund you $3."