Kumi (kumi-kiri) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
I attach the customer list in Japan.
This is the customer list which I prepared the report (excluding Factsheet) and attach.
Thanks.

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I attach the customer list in Japan.
This is the list of customers that I am writing the reports with attachments (excluding Factsheet.)
Thanks.

元の翻訳
Hello. I am Yamada is taking charge of your company supervised by ( ** ).
I am very sorry that I could not visit to greet you directly.
Let me explain about the first page briefly.
The domestic and overseas data are written on the vertical line, and the business outline and action area are on the horizontal line.

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Hello. Nice to meet you. My name is Yamada, I am taking charge of your company (supervised by my boss.)
I am very sorry that I have not been able to visit to greet you directly yet.
Let me explain about the first page briefly.
The domestic and overseas data are written on the vertical line, and the business outline and action area are on the horizontal line.

元の翻訳
I was off work and was in bed with a cold this week. It is was hard to stop even cough. I was finally fully recovered from heat. It is likely to restart studying English again.
Please take care of your physical condition, too, Mr./Mrs.~ .

And I have been decided to watch one movie every week, but I'm wondering what is the next to watch.
I also want to know about "~" of your country , so I searched in Google and the movie with title of "~" is looks good. Do you know this? If you know this one do you recommend it ?

Also, please let me know if there is any other movie that you recommend.

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I was off work, and was in bed with a cold this week. It could not stop coughing, but I have gotten fully recovered from a fever finally. I think I can start studying English again now.
Please take care of your physical condition, too, Mr./Mrs.~ .

And I have decided to watch one movie every week, but I'm wondering what to watch next.
I also want to know about "~" of your country , so I searched in Google and the movie with title of "~" looks good. Do you know about this? If you know this one, do you recommend it ?

Also, please let me know if there is any other movies that you recommend.

元の翻訳
We would like to apologize for our late reply.

We are glad to hear that you are interested in purchasing the sword.

Please let us let you know a few things.

- Your order needs special requirements for us, the costs start from at least $20,000 to produce the sword.
- It takes about 5 to 6 months to produce and deliver it to you.
- Please send us some photos how you would like the sword to be.

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We would like to apologize for our late reply.

We are glad to hear that you are interested in purchasing the sword.

Please allow us to make sure a few things.

- Your order is quite specific for us to work on; therefore, the cost start from at least $20,000 in order to produce the sword.
- It takes about 5 to 6 months to produce and deliver it to you.
- Please send us some photos how you would like the sword to be.

元の翻訳
① Also, as the condition of listing items, we are asked to submit invoice from the products' sources.
Thus, if ever there is any counterfeit product, it may cause some trouble to your company.
(It also may get the maker involved)
We are totally aware that it would cause some hassles to your company and we feel sorry for that since your company has always provided us a great service, but we are hoping for your corporation.

Also, there will be no trouble if the source of the product is its maker. But in that case we need the invoice from the maker.

②We received a message about the cancellation but the status is still " pending".
I asked to ship. Is there anything I can do about it?

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① Also, as the condition of listing items, we are requested to submit the invoice from the supplier.
Thus, it will be possible to cause some problems if ever there are any counterfeit products.
(Also, the investigation by the maker could be involved.)
We are totally aware that it would cause some hassles to your company, and we are sorry for that since your company has always provided us a great service, but we are hoping for your cooperation.

Also, it will not be a problem if the supplier is its maker, but its invoice will be necessary.

②We received a message about the cancellation but the status has been pending.
I would like you to ship it, but how can I request it?