長島文代 (fumiyok) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I will dispatch CPT tomorrow.
After shipment, I will inform you of the tracking number.

My last order arrived, but I found that HDMI cable was not enclosed with A.
Please send it together with my order this time.

Payment is to be made on 29th with a credit card.

The photo of the parts I’m thinking about buying is attached for your reference.
Please refer to the place circled in blue.

The model number of B is RPMQ90, isn’t it?

I assume that the parts shown on the attached photo and the three parts whose quotation I received the other day are the same ones. Am I correct?

Could you give me a little more discount for the selling prices of B and C?

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I will dispatch CPT tomorrow.
After shipment, I will inform you of the tracking number.

My last order arrived, but I found that THE HDMI cable was not enclosed with A.
Please send it together with my order this time.

Payment is to be made on THE 29th with a credit card.

The photo of the parts I’m thinking about buying is attached for your reference.
Please refer to the place circled in blue.

The model number of B is RPMQ90--is THAT CORRECT?

I assume that the parts shown on the attached photo and the three parts whose quotation I received the other day are the same ones. Am I correct?

Could you give me a little more discount for the selling prices of B and C?

元の翻訳
We are interested in buying ○○.
In the case we buy 24 pcs., how much is the unit price Including the shipping cost?
Our desired price is about $100.

As for cosmetics, up to 24 pcs. are allowed to be imported according to the regulation. So, we will place an order for 24 pcs. if we decide to buy.
If they are selling well, we are thinking of buying one or two time per month.

As we have an interest in △△,if possible, please send your price list for this item.

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We are interested in buying ○○.
In the case we buy 24 pcs, how much is the unit price Including the shipping cost?
Our desired price is about $100.

As for cosmetics, up to 24 pcs for each item are allowed to be imported according to regulations. So, we will place an order for 24 pcs if we decide to buy.
If they appear to be selling well, we are thinking of buying one or two times per month.

As we have an interest in △△, if possible please send your price list for this item.

元の翻訳
I’m relieved to know that the goods safely reached you. However, you seem to have a complaint about the shipping cost, please allow us to explain about that. According to the rules of Amazon, we should list our goods on the site at the total price of product price and shipping cost while balancing these two costs.
The shipping costs are subject to the weights registered by Amazon, so please understand that they are different from the actual shipping costs.
Though you chose the standard shipping cost, we sent your order by EMS instead by bearing the express delivery charge on our side. Appreciate your understanding. ↵

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I’m relieved to know that the goods reached you safely. However, you seem to be displeased about the shipping cost. Please allow us to explain about that. According to Amazon's rules, we should list our goods on the site at the total price of product price and shipping cost while balancing these two costs.
The shipping costs are subject to the weights registered by Amazon, so please understand that they differ from the actual shipping costs.
Though you chose the standard shipping cost, we instead sent your order by EMS and bore the express delivery charge on our side. We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
I bought three display cases the other day.

However, what I received were all blown color though I ordered black, so I contacted the seller.

The seller is now sending black items, which have not reached me by now.

I was thinking about sending back the blown cases that were wrongly sent to me, but decided to buy them.

I asked the seller how to pay for my additional order, then the seller told me to contact Amazon.
As this is my first case and I have no idea what to do. Please give me your advise on this matter.

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I bought three display cases the other day.

However, what I received were all blown color though I ordered black, so I contacted the seller.

The seller is now sending black items, which have not reached me by now.

I was initially thinking of sending back the brown cases that were wrongly sent to me, but decided to buy them instead.

I asked the seller how to pay for my additional order and I was told to contact Amazon.
As this is my first time facing such an issue, I have no idea what to do. Please give me your advise on this matter.

元の翻訳
I’m 名前. I’m posting the products at amazon marketplace.
Thank you for your order.

The item you ordered will be shipped from Japan by air using Japan Post Service.
It will take 8 – 16 days before they will reach you.
Please wait for a while.

I don’t have many reviews now, and am looking for buyers who leave their reviews.
If you reply to this mail just by writing YES on it, I will enclose some gift with your order.
In return, appreciate your review.

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I’m 名前. I sell products on the Amazon marketplace.
Thank you for your order.

The item you ordered will be shipped from Japan by air using the Japan Post Service.
It will take 8 – 16 days before it will reach you.
Please wait for a while.

I don’t have many reviews now and am looking for buyers who will leave their reviews.
If you reply to this mail just by writing YES on it, I will enclose some gift with your order.
In return, I would appreciate your review.

元の翻訳
I just checked and found that the item did not reach you.
In this case the smoothest way will be that first the order should be cancelled by A and after that the order should be placed again for the same item.
If you agree with this, we will inform you of the page for you to order.

Please be informed that the item you sent back to us will need an extra shipping charge.
Though I have no idea at this stage about the charge, I assume that it will be around $20. Would it be possible for A to bear $10, half of the charge.

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I just checked and found out that the item had not reach you indeed.
In this case the smoothest way would be to have you, Mr. A, first cancel the order and then have you place the order again for the same item.
If you agree with this, we will inform you of the page for you to place the order.

Please be informed that the item you sent back to us would incur an extra shipping charge.
Though I have no idea at this stage about the charge, I assume that it will be around $20. Would it be OK for you, Mr. A, to bear $10, half of the charge?

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.

Within 14 days, you may send back the product to us.

However, please be noted that the return shipping cost should be born by you.

We will make shipment by EMS (with tracking number).

It will take about 4 – 6 days before the shipment reaches Australia.

Hope you may like this camera.

(unrelated matter)

Lithium ion battery is not included in it.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

Within 14 days, you may send back the product to us.

However, please note that the return shipping cost should be born by you.

We will ship via EMS (with a tracking number).

It will take about 4 – 6 days before the shipment reaches Australia.

Hope you will like this camera.

(unrelated matter)

Lithium ion battery is not included in the shipment.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your mail.
We can ship to US.
Please check the attached drawing.
In some cases the shapes of the actual parts are different from the ones shown on the attached photo, but if the item number is correct, you don’t have to worry.

The price shown on the site does not include tax.
The tax-inclusive price is as follows.

Besides the above price, the shipping cost is required.
You can choose EMS or DHL as a shipping method.

You may select your convenient payment method from the following choices.

If you want to place an order, please inform us of your shipping address as well as your favorable forwarder by return.
We will calculate the shipping cost and let you know.

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Thank you for your email.
We can ship to US.
Please check the attached drawing.
In some cases the shapes of the actual parts are different from the ones shown on the attached photo, but if the item number is correct, you don’t have to worry.

The price shown on the site does not include tax.
The tax-inclusive price is as follows.

Besides the above price, the shipping cost is required.
You can choose EMS or DHL as a shipping method.

You may select your convenient payment method from the following choices.

If you want to place an order, please inform us of your shipping address as well as your favorable forwarder by return.
We will calculate the shipping cost and let you know.

元の翻訳
Dear Mr. Marc,

Could you advise me about the current status of my order?
As I really want to buy, please inform me of the total amount.

Thank you.

Masaaki


Dear Mr. David,

I have planed a new order.
Have the rubber seals I ordered last time become available?

I would like them to be shipped together with my new order.

Thank you.

Masaaki

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Dear Mr. Marc,

Could you advise me about the current status of my order?
As I really want to make a purchase of it (them), please let me know the total amount of money that I have to pay.

Thank you.

Masaaki


Dear Mr. David,

I placed a new order.
Are the rubber seals I ordered last time available?

I would like them to be shipped together with my new order.

Thank you.

Masaaki

元の翻訳
Hello.
Could you send the product to my friend in Sweden?
Here is their shipping address.

As it will take time if they pay directly to you, I will make payment on behalf of them.
The payment will be made by the name of ○○.

I’ve got the shipping cost from Sweden to Japan, but for sure, please inform me of the shipping cost to Japan in the case of ordinary post.

Appreciate it if you could pack the product carefully.

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Hello.
Could you send the product to my friend in Sweden?
Here is their shipping address.

As a direct payment would take time, my friend will make payment on behalf of me.
The payment will be made by the name of ○○.

I’ve got the shipping cost from Sweden to Japan, but for sure, please inform me of the shipping cost to Japan in the case of ordinary post.

Appreciate it if you could pack the product carefully.

元の翻訳
Hello.

Sorry for getting back to you late.

As I sent the invoice through PayPay, please check it.

Thank you!

Daimugen　　$270
WonTiger　　　$199
Dairenou　　　Used　$230
RV Robo　　　$220
GaoBear + GaoPolar　　$120
GaoGod　　$170

The above shows the price for each item.

You can get more discount if you buy some of them at one time.

Are you a fan of Power Rangers??

I love them too.

I am glad getting to know you.

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Hello.

Sorry for getting back to you late.

As I sent the invoice through PayPal, please check it.

Thank you!

Daimugen　　$270
WonTiger　　　$199
Dairenou　　　Used　$230
RV Robo　　　$220
GaoBear + GaoPolar　　$120
GaoGod　　$170

The list above shows the price for each item.

You can get more discount if you buy some of them at one time.

Are you a fan of Power Rangers??

I love them too.

I am glad to get to know you.

元の翻訳
Japan may be most ready to accept others’ cultures and religions in the world. I’m glad that I was able to meet you.

I wonder if K lives in Japan. I would really like to talk with your friends in your university days.

The other day I visited my friend’s atelier and found a very interesting item like this.

I assume that it was produced in 1980s.

I started to post moving images on YouTube some days ago. Did I tell you about it?

Though I'm afraid that my English is good enough, if you like, please see my video. For the sake of my children’s safety, I tried not to show their faces.

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Japan may be most ready to accept others’ cultures and religions in the world. I’m glad that I was able to meet you.

I wonder if K lives in Japan. I would really like to talk with your friends in your university days.

The other day I visited my friend’s atelier and found a very interesting item like this.

I assume that it was produced in 1980s.

I started to post moving images on YouTube some days ago. Did I tell you about it?

Though I'm afraid that my English is good enough, if you like, please see my video. For the sake of my children’s safety, I tried not to show their faces.
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Though I'm afraid that my English is good enough,はたぶんあなたの勘違いで、↵
Though I'm afraid that my English is not good enough,↵
とnotが入るのではないでしょうか。たいした間違いではありませんが。