翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

日本ほど他の文化や宗教を受け入れる国は無いかもしれません。私はあなたと出会えたことを嬉しく思っています。

Kさんは日本にお住まいなんですか？あなたの大学時代のご友人とぜひお話をしてみたいです。

先日友人のアトリエに遊びに行った時に、こんなにおもしろい製品を見つけました。

おそらく80年代の商品ではないかと思います。

先日Youtubeへの動画投稿を始めたんですが、お伝えしましたっけ？

つたない英語で恥ずかしいですがもしよかったら見てくださいね。安全のため子どもたちの顔は出していません。

英語

Japan may be most ready to accept others’ cultures and religions in the world. I’m glad that I was able to meet you.

I wonder if K lives in Japan. I would really like to talk with your friends in your university days.

The other day I visited my friend’s atelier and found a very interesting item like this.

I assume that it was produced in 1980s.

I started to post moving images on YouTube some days ago. Did I tell you about it?

Though I'm afraid that my English is good enough, if you like, please see my video. For the sake of my children’s safety, I tried not to show their faces.

レビュー ( 1 )

muraはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/06/09 14:11:34

元の翻訳
Japan may be most ready to accept others’ cultures and religions in the world. I’m glad that I was able to meet you.

I wonder if K lives in Japan. I would really like to talk with your friends in your university days.

The other day I visited my friend’s atelier and found a very interesting item like this.

I assume that it was produced in 1980s.

I started to post moving images on YouTube some days ago. Did I tell you about it?

Though I'm afraid that my English is good enough, if you like, please see my video. For the sake of my children’s safety, I tried not to show their faces.

修正後
Japan may be most ready to accept others’ cultures and religions in the world. I’m glad that I was able to meet you.

I wonder if K lives in Japan. I would really like to talk with your friends in your university days.

The other day I visited my friend’s atelier and found a very interesting item like this.

I assume that it was produced in 1980s.

I started to post moving images on YouTube some days ago. Did I tell you about it?

Though I'm afraid that my English is good enough, if you like, please see my video. For the sake of my children’s safety, I tried not to show their faces.
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Though I'm afraid that my English is good enough,はたぶんあなたの勘違いで、↵
Though I'm afraid that my English is not good enough,↵
とnotが入るのではないでしょうか。たいした間違いではありませんが。

[fumiyok]

ご指摘有難うございます！notが抜けていました。