翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

ばかげたことに、材料の購入価格を5%引き下げるために20%のリワークが生じてしまっている。ただちに供給業者を変更しリワーク率を下げなければならない。しかし供給業者を再度変えるだけでは十分ではなく、そもそもなぜ今の供給業者に変えたのかについても考える必要がある。根本にある問題は購買部門の評価基準である。たとえ標準価格を下回っていても20%のリワークを生み出す材料を使っていては本末転倒なので、材料の質に関しても評価基準を設定し、購買部門に材料の質に対して責任を与えるべきだ。

英語

It is foolish that we have 20 percent rework in order to increase the purchase price by 5 percent. We have to change the supplier immediately, and reduce the rework.
However, it is not sufficient only to change the supplier again.
We have to consider why we had changed to the supplier that we have business with now.
The original problem is an assessment standard of the purchasing department.
Even if it is less than the standard price, it is quite contradictiory if we use the wood that produces 20 percent rework.
Regarding the quality of the wood, we have to set the assessment standard, and make the purchasing department be responsible for the quality of the wood.

レビュー ( 2 )

ozsamurai_69はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/31 18:36:06

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fujisawa_2014はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/31 18:42:04

元の翻訳
It is foolish that we have 20 percent rework in order to increase the purchase price by 5 percent. We have to change the supplier immediately, and reduce the rework.
However, it is not sufficient only to change the supplier again.
We have to consider why we had changed to the supplier that we have business with now.
The original problem is an assessment standard of the purchasing department.
Even if it is less than the standard price, it is quite contradictiory if we use the wood that produces 20 percent rework.
Regarding the quality of the wood, we have to set the assessment standard, and make the purchasing department be responsible for the quality of the wood.

修正後
It is foolish that we face 20 percent of rework in order to decrease the purchase price by 5 percent. We have to change the supplier immediately, and reduce the rework.
However, it is not sufficient only to change the supplier again.
We have to consider why we had changed to the supplier that we have business with now.
The original problem is the assessment standard of the purchasing department.
Even if it is less than the standard price, it is quite contradictiory if we use wood that produces 20 percent rework.
Regarding the quality of the wood, we have to set an assessment standard, and make the purchasing department be responsible for the quality of the wood.