翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

こんにちは。
私は現在の状況（Ｓ）になって○ヶ月がたちますが、その間に
多くの業務改善をしてきました。

これは御社の管理しているプラットフォームで今でも販売をしたいと
強く望んでいるからです。

私は今までの過ちをこの○ヶ月に全て見直し、改善策を練ってきました。
同じ過ちは致しません。

再度、販売の許可を頂けないでしょうか？
どうぞよろしくお願い致します。

英語

Hello.
It's been ○ months since I got in this situation, and in the meanwhile, I have made every effort to improve my business.

That is because I am still eager to do business on the platform you are managening.

In the past few months, I have taken a hard look at all the mistakes I made and sought the solutions. I will never make the same mistake again.

Could you please give me the sale permission once again?
Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

レビュー ( 1 )

fujisawa_2014はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/01 07:48:27

元の翻訳
Hello.
It's been ○ months since I got in this situation, and in the meanwhile, I have made every effort to improve my business.

That is because I am still eager to do business on the platform you are managening.

In the past few months, I have taken a hard look at all the mistakes I made and sought the solutions. I will never make the same mistake again.

Could you please give me the sale permission once again?
Your consideration would be highly appreciated.

修正後
Hello.
It's been ○ months since I got in this status S, and in the meanwhile, I have made every effort to improve my business.

That is because I am still eager to do business on the platform you are managing.

In the past few months, I have taken a hard look at all the mistakes I made and sought the solutions. I will never make the same mistakes again.

Could you please give me the sale permission once again?
Your consideration would be highly appreciated.