翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

こんにちは。
私は現在の状況（Ｓ）になって○ヶ月がたちますが、その間に
多くの業務改善をしてきました。

これは御社の管理しているプラットフォームで今でも販売をしたいと
強く望んでいるからです。

私は今までの過ちをこの○ヶ月に全て見直し、改善策を練ってきました。
同じ過ちは致しません。

再度、販売の許可を頂けないでしょうか？
どうぞよろしくお願い致します。

英語

How do you do?
It's been -- months since I hold the current status.
Meanwhile, I can say to you that I have made much improvement in my work.

This is because I sincerely hope to restart selling products on the platform which your company is administrating.

In the last -- months, I've looked over all the failure that I had made.
And I also prepared solutions not to make the same mistakes.
I will not disappoint you.

So would you please grant me again your authorization of selling?
I would really appreciate it if you would take this matter into consideration.
Thank you.

レビュー ( 2 )

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/01 00:45:11

元の翻訳
How do you do?
It's been -- months since I hold the current status.
Meanwhile, I can say to you that I have made much improvement in my work.

This is because I sincerely hope to restart selling products on the platform which your company is administrating.

In the last -- months, I've looked over all the failure that I had made.
And I also prepared solutions not to make the same mistakes.
I will not disappoint you.

So would you please grant me again your authorization of selling?
I would really appreciate it if you would take this matter into consideration.
Thank you.

修正後
Hello.
It's been -- months since I hold the current status.
Meanwhile, I can say to you that I have made much improvement in my work.

This is because I sincerely hope to restart selling products on the platform your company is administrating.

In the last -- months I have looked over all the failure that I had made.
And I also prepared solutions not to repeat the same mistakes.
I will not disappoint you.

So could you please restore my selling privileges?
I would really appreciate it if you would take this matter into consideration.
Thank you.

fujisawa_2014はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/01 07:43:52

good!