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Thank you for letting me contact you several times.

Honestly 1,575 dollars is the best price, but they handled me very kindly.
As I expect to continue to do the business with you in the future, I will lower the price to 1,500 dollars.
Do you agree with me?
As for sending money to bank, they accepted only US dollars.
I recommend that you are careful about it.
I hope that you send money by US dollar.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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Thank you for letting me contact you several times.

Honestly 1,575 dollars is the best price, but they handled me very kindly.
As I expect to continue to do the business with you in the future, I will lower the price to 1,500 dollars.
Do you agree with me?
As for sending money to banks, they accept only US dollars.
I recommend that you are careful about it.
I hope that you send money by US dollar.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
Can you please arrange the delivery?
Or, would it be possible for your contracted forwarder to make the shipment?

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Could you please arrange the delivery?
Or, would it be possible for your contracted forwarder to make the shipment?

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The Japanese tend to put priority not on what is correct but on harmony with people around them.
This kind of people are considered to be appropriate people. In this society, it is very difficult
to take a step based on truth of God.

No one knows what happens tomorrow. We even do not know what happens to me 1 hour later.
For this reason, it is as if we were walking in the dark.
However, word of Bible leads the way we must follow seriously. The word of the Bible is a guide that
leads us to the best way.

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The Japanese tend to put priority not on what is correct but on harmony with people around them.
This kind of people are considered to be appropriate people. In this society, it is very difficult
to take a step based on truth of God.

No one knows what will happen tomorrow. We even do not know what will happen to me 1 hour later.
For this reason, it is as if we were walking in the dark.
However, the word of Bible leads the way we must follow seriously. The word of the Bible is a guide that
leads us to the best way.

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I have a question about package ID ○○. I bought the item whose name is ▲▲. The invoice attached with "Action Required" shows the item name as ▲▲. But, the notification email which tells its arrival has the description that ■■ has arrived. Which item did you receive, ▲▲ or ■■? I am waiting for your reply.

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I have a question about package ID ○○. I bought the item whose name is ▲▲. The invoice attached with "Action Required" also shows the item name as ▲▲. But, the notification email which tells its arrival has the description that ■■ has arrived. Which item did you receive, ▲▲ or ■■? I am waiting for your reply.

元の翻訳
分かりません。あなたが本当に必要なのは何ですか？見積もりのレシートですか？本当にカメラを返品したくないんです。何がとめてるんですか？

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分かりません。あなたが本当に必要なのは何ですか？見積もりのレシートですか？本当にカメラを返品したくないんです。何が障害になっているんですか？

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Now we have been aware that the cover of the item (a blue case) was missing, so we will deliver it without delivery fee only this time. Would it be OK for you?

As the items we are sending to you are expensive, we will send them separately on different days to avoid custom tax related issues.

We have shipped the item numbered as A1 today. We will send A2 two days ahead, so please wait for a while.

It will take 4 to 6 days to deliver items.

If you are not at home, a notification of absentee delivery is put into the post. So, please arrange redelivery.

Tracking numbers are as follow.

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Now we have been aware that the cover of the item (a blue case) was missing, so we will deliver it without delivery fee only this time. Would it be OK for you?

As the items we are sending to you are expensive, we will send them separately on different days to avoid custom tax related issues.

We have shipped the item numbered as A1 today. We will send A2 two days ahead, so please wait for a while.

It will take 4 to 6 days to deliver items.

If you are not at home, a notification of absentee delivery is put into your post. So, please arrange redelivery.

Tracking numbers are as follow.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your successful bidding.
I made mistake in sending the item. I sent incorrect one to you.
But it is the same kind of item, and the status is almost the same, you'll be still satisfied with it.
If you don't like it, please let me know.
I will try to cope with it until you get satisfied.
Please feel at ease.

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Thanks for your successful bidding.
I made a mistake in sending the item. I sent incorrect one to you.
But it is the same kind of item, and the status is almost the same, you'll be still satisfied with it.
If you don't like it, please let me know.
I will try to cope with it until you get satisfied.
Please feel at ease.

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Thank you for your continued support.
I am sorry for having bothered you.
I have just contacted EMS and checked.
It seems that the item is now under inspection because it is expensive.
They told that the inspection would be done tomorrow.
I let them know that we are in a harry.
I appreciate your considerations in spite you are waiting so long.

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Thank you for your continued support.
I am sorry for having bothered you.
I have just contacted EMS and checked.
It seems that the item is now under inspection because it is expensive.
They told that the inspection would be done tomorrow.
I let them know that we are in a harry.
I appreciate your considerations for your waiting so long.

元の翻訳
Historic guitar synthesizer GR-500 released in 1977

That world-famous guitarists such as Jeff Baxter, Jimmy Page, Jeff Beck used it made the topic in those days.

It used the GR-30 synthesizer moduleis done, and modified to the polyphonic specifications from the monophonic specifications that is easier to use.

With GR-500, vivid sound is provided by the division pickup, and the basic performance as an electric guitar is distinguished, too.

It is a golden opportunity for you to acquire a historic guitar synthesizer.

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Historic guitar synthesizer GR-500 released in 1977

That world-famous guitarists such as Jeff Baxter, Jimmy Page, Jeff Beck used it made the topic in those days.

It uses the GR-30 synthesizer modules, and is modified to the polyphonic specifications from the monophonic specifications that is easier to use.

With GR-500, vivid sound is provided by the division pickup, and the basic performance as an electric guitar is distinguished, too.

It is a golden opportunity for you to acquire a historic guitar synthesizer.

元の翻訳
Historical guitar synthesizer announced in 1977 GR-500.
At that time, the fact that world wide famous guitarists such as Jeff Baxter, Jimmy Page and Jeff Beck, used GR-500 became a popular topic of conversation.
It uses GR-30 synthesizer module, and it is modified from monophonic spec into polyphonic supported, which makes it more easy to use.
GR-500 can provide vivid sound by separated pick-up, and the basic performance as an electric guitar is also excellent.
This is rare opportunity that may never come again for you to buy historical guitar synthesizer.

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Historical guitar synthesizer GR-500 announced in 1977.
At that time, the fact that world wide famous guitarists such as Jeff Baxter, Jimmy Page and Jeff Beck used GR-500 became a popular topic of conversation.
It uses GR-30 synthesizer module, and it is modified from monophonic spec into polyphonic spec, which makes it more easy to use.
GR-500 can provide vivid sound by separated pick-up, and the basic performance as an electric guitar is also excellent.
This is a rare opportunity that may never come again for you to buy historical guitar synthesizer.

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Instruction of "Lumibrite" in the manual (page68) are following.

If Lumibrite is not glittering, please try the following methods first.

- Leave the clock under the direct sunlight for 10 minutes.
- And make sure to see whether the time display is glittering.

There's possibility that sometimes Lumibrite will not glitter when the electricity charging is not enough.

If this method doesn't work, please send me a photo taken in the dark (without flash) by a digital camera.
I will inform you process to exchange for a new one which works fine.

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Instruction of "Lumibrite" in the manual (page68) are following.

If Lumibrite is not glittering, please try the following methods first.

- Leave the clock under the direct sunlight for 10 minutes.
- And make sure to see whether the time display is glittering.

There's a possibility that sometimes Lumibrite will not glitter when the electricity charging is not enough.

If this method doesn't work, please send me a photo taken in the dark (without flash) by a digital camera.
I will inform you process to exchange for a new one which works fine.

元の翻訳
The explanation of the instruction (p68) 'Lumibrite ' is as below,

Please try the next way when the Lumibrite doesn't turn on.

・ Expose the watch to the sun directly for 10 mins.
・ Check if the display of time turns on in the dark.

Lumibrite sometimes doesn't turn on if it doesn't have enough power of the electricity.

If these way don't work, please send its photo taken by digital camera (without flash)in the dark.
I will let you know if Lumibrite works properly and needs to be changed to new one.

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The explanation of the instruction (p68) 'Lumibrite ' is as below,

Please try the next way if the Lumibrite doesn't light up.

・ Expose the watch to the sun directly for 10 mins.
・ Check if the time display lights up in the dark.

Lumibrite sometimes doesn't light up if it doesn't have enough power of the electricity.

If these way don't work, please send its photo taken by digital camera (without flash)in the dark.
I will let you know when Lumibrite doesn't work properly and needs to be changed to new one.

元の翻訳
Our staff carefully pack and send it out promptly from Japan.
You can feel comfortable about your shopping, as a tracking number will be attached to a product.

Please specify "Expedited" in case you are in a hurry.
Should you have any other queries, please feel free to contact us by e-mail.

We are hoping that we will be able to assist you for your good shopping.

We are Second who do mind about careful packing and speedy shipping.

修正後
Our staff carefully packs and send it out promptly from Japan.
You can feel comfortable about your shopping, as a tracking number will be attached to a product.

Please specify "Expedited" in case you are in a hurry.
Should you have any other queries, please feel free to contact us by e-mail.

We are hoping that we will be able to assist you for your good shopping.

We are Second who does mind about careful packing and speedy shipping.