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やっと昔に工場へ注文した入荷待ちしてた物が入りました。

S4410xを10個入荷したそうですが、私たちが昔注文したのは3個だと言われました、そちらの記録に合っていますか？

もし問題はなければ、上記通り次の出荷と一緒に出しますので、数は合ってるかどうかを教えてください。

新しい注文の在庫はほぼ確保できています。もう少し揃えば出荷できるかと思います。

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やっと昔に工場に注文し、入荷待ちしていた物が入りました。

S4410xを10個入荷したそうですが、私たちが昔注文したのは3個だと言われました、そちらの記録に合っていますか？

もし問題がなければ、上記通り次の出荷と一緒にしますので、数が合ってるかどうか教えてください。

新しい注文の在庫はほぼ確保できています。もう少し揃えば出荷できると思います。

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Thank you for your message.

I am sorry to be late very much.
The tracking number is as follows.
I sent by EMS, and you will receive the item in 3 to 5 days.

Thank you for your message.
I have sent it to you for more than a month ago,
but haven't you receive it yet?
I will check it here. I apologize to you.

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Thank you for your message.

I am sorry for the delay in my reply very much.

I sent by EMS, and you will receive the item in 3 to 5 days.

Thank you for your message.
It has passed more than one month from the shipment,
but haven't you received it yet?
I will check it here. I apologize to you.

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Warning
I bought a product from you, but I have not received the product even after more than two months. When I checked at the Post Office in Japan with the tracking number they said it has not left the US and is not in Japan. You should have insured the shipment of the product. Please refund the full amount I paid immediately. Otherwise, I will assume this as fraud. I have done nothing wrong. You should always contact the customer in good faith as long as you are in business.
I am looking forward at any time to hear from you.

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Warning
I bought a product from you, but I have not received the product even after more than two months. When I checked at the Post Office in Japan with the tracking number, they said it has not left the US and is not in Japan. You should have insured the shipment of the product. Please refund the full amount I paid immediately. Otherwise, I will assume this as fraud. I have done nothing wrong. You should always contact the customers in good faith as long as you are in business.
I am looking forward at any time to hearing from you.

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I can send it tomorrow, so if I use express it will be at your address in Yokohama by tomorrow. Are you able to take it to your country by yourself?

When the items get to Yokohama, please check their condition there and let me know.
Thank you.

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I will be able to send it tomorrow, so if I use express, it will be at your address in Yokohama the day after tomorrow. Are you able to take it to your country by yourself?

When the items get to Yokohama, please check their condition there and let me know.
Thank you.

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Re the question on Estimated delivery dates

We deliver to various countries through our delivery agency. Therefore, As the shipment location, registered address, and where the item actually ships from area ll different, there are some variations in the arrival dates, this causes us some concern.
With this schedule, Standard Shipping take 7 days, Expedited 3 days to arrive, Is it possible to fix this schedule to fix these estimated shipping dates?

What can other sellers in a similar situation to us with multiple item forwarding addresses do?

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I have some questions about Estimated delivery dates.

We deliver to various countries through our delivery agency. Therefore, as the shipment location, registered address, and where the item actually ships from area ll different, there are some variations in the arrival dates, this causes us some concern.
With this schedule, Standard Shipping take 7 days, Expedited 3 days to arrive, is it possible to fix this schedule to fix these estimated shipping dates?

What can other sellers in a similar situation to us with multiple item forwarding addresses do?

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I have a question regarding the estimated delivery dates.

We ship our products from some distribution centers located throughout the United States. Therefore, sometimes it takes additional days in case the address registered as the “Shipped from” differs to the one from which the products are actually shipped.

Is it possible to fix the estimated delivery dates to be shown as either “Seven days” for the standard shipping or “Three days” for the expedited shipping?

How should we (and other sellers with more than one shipping places) handle this kind of problem?

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I have some questions about regarding the estimated delivery dates.

We ship our products from some distribution centers located throughout the United States. Therefore, sometimes it takes additional days in case the address registered as the “Shipping area” differs to the one from which the products are actually shipped.

Is it possible to fix the estimated delivery dates to be shown as either “After seven days” for the standard shipping or “After three days” for the expedited shipping?

How should we (and other sellers with more than one shipping places) handle this kind of problem?

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Judy Ongg / Love is Calling
May J./ Let it Go

[Singers in a VTR]
Goldenbomber
Sho Sakurai
Masato Nakamura(Dreams Come True)
etc.
*in kana order

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Judy Ongg / Love is Calling
May J./ Let it Go

[Singers in a VTR]
Goldenbomber
Sho Sakurai
Masato Nakamura(Dreams Come True)
etc.
※Syllabary order↵

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Thank you for the message. I have checked inside the package over and over to see if I could find the knob just in case. I couldn't find it after all. I am in a major situation. If the knob had come off during the transportaion, it should still remain somewhere in the package but it wasn't there. How could I do when an item is lost on its way?

If not found, could I guy the knob only?

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Thank you for the message. I have checked inside the package over and over to see if I could find the knob just in case. I couldn't find it after all. I am in trouble very much. If the knob had come off during the transportation , it should still remain somewhere in the package but it wasn't there. How could I do when the knob is lost on its way?

If not found, could I buy the knob only?

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I don't want 10 items. I want to purchase 5.
This will change the the price right?

For the shipping methods, please let your company support it.

Payment Methods: Please use paypal or a credit card.

Thank you very much.

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I don't want 10 items. I want to purchase 5.
This will change the price right?

For the shipping methods, please let your company support it.

Payment Methods: Please use paypal or a credit card.

Thank you very much.

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We purchase these kettles based upon the understanding they were made in Japan, however it is difficult to prove so.
If you prefer the dragon design, we would recommend you with ○○.
This one looks more classic, with its detailed work.
Nevertheless, it is totally up to you upon taking a look at the photo.

Please refer to the below for how to enjoy using ○○ for a long time.

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I purchase these kettles based upon the understanding they were made in Japan, however it is difficult to prove so.
If you prefer the dragon design, I would recommend you with ○○.
This one looks more classic, with its detailed work.
Nevertheless, it is totally up to you upon taking a look at the photo.

Please refer to the below for how to enjoy using ○○ for a long time.

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Now, with the plot I think I want to make a big floor.
That is to say a one piece flat floor or possibly a floor made of a few parts? I'm still thinking about the shape.
I think the important part is the scheme for constructing the support for the floor.
I'm looking into the results and significance of the materials to support the floor on the upper and lower ends.

Finally, I was thinking of an item that you go up it and that feels like a stage. I plan on making a space where there can be performances.

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Now, with the plot I think I want to make a big floor.
That is to say a one piece flat floor or possibly a floor made of a few parts? I'm thinking of the shape.
I think the important part is the scheme for constructing the support for the floor.
I'm looking into the results and significance of the materials to support the floor on the upper and lower ends.

Finally, I was thinking of an item that you go up it and that feel like a stage. I plan on making a space where there can be performances.

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もし私のところに来る個人的小包、或いは業務用小包全てに私はサインしなければならないとしたら、そのために私の仕事は単に座って、私宛の小包にサインすることです。出荷部門が何故サインできないのか分かりません。その為、郵便局が小包を受取るための用紙に何を記載していたのか分かりません。また、不在配達証明も全く気がつきませんでした。小包は先週見つけましたが、引き取りに行く時間がありません。引き取りに行くの葉時間の浪費です。小包は先週早々にあったパーティーのためのものでしたが、それでも商品が欲しいのです。私が本当に郵便局に対して激怒したので、彼等が再配達をしてくれることを期待しています。
配達証明はどのようにすればよいのでしょうか。
本当の宛先人のサインだけが必要なのでしょうか。

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もし私のところに来る個人的小包、或いは業務用小包全てに私はサインしなければならないとしたら、そのために私の仕事は単に座って、私宛の小包にサインすることです。出荷部門が何故サインできないのか分かりません。その為、郵便局が小包を受取るための用紙に何を記載していたのか分かりません。また、不在配達証明も全く気がつきませんでした。小包は先週見つけましたが、引き取りに行く時間がありません。引き取りに行くのは時間の浪費です。小包は先週早々にあったパーティーのためのものでしたが、それでも商品が欲しいのです。私が本当に郵便局に対して激怒したので、彼等が再配達をしてくれることを期待しています。
配達証明はどのようにすればよいのでしょうか。
本当の宛先人のサインだけが必要なのでしょうか。

元の翻訳
なぜ私の問い合わせに対して返答をいただけないのでしょうか？もちろん、私は関税を払う責任がありますが、これは理屈に合わないとご説明しました。従って、解決をお願いしています。貴方の過去のメッセージの中で、貴方は梱包会社に電話をして解決を図るとおっしゃいました。以下に、もともとの問い合わせを原文のまま載せておきます。
「皆様。2週間前、通関業者から、輸入手続きを始めるとの通知を受け取りました。本日、彼らは、通関のために私が204米ドルを支払う必要があることを伝えてきました。これは品物の50％もの値段になるので、受け入れることはできません。
１、どうしたら解決することができるでしょうか？
２、この購入をキャンセルするにはどうすればよいでしょうか？

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なぜ私の問い合わせを読んでくれなかったのですか？もちろん、私は関税を払う責任がありますが、これは理屈に合わないとご説明しました。従って、解決をお願いしています。貴方の過去のメッセージの中で、梱包会社に電話をして解決を図るとおっしゃいました。以下に、もともとの問い合わせを原文のまま載せておきます。
「皆様。2週間前、通関業者から、輸入手続きを始めるとの通知を受け取りました。本日、彼らは、通関のために私が204米ドルを支払う必要があることを伝えてきました。これは原価の50％もの値段になるので、受け入れることはできません。
１、どうしたら解決することができるでしょうか？
２、この購入をキャンセルするにはどうすればよいでしょうか？

元の翻訳
We received the product that you sent back today.
Delivery fee $13 and sent-back fee $13 is deducted and we'll give $123.05 back to you.
Although we feel sad that this dealing is canceled, we still look forward to see you again.
If you have any question of our product, please feel free to contact us.
We sincerely thank you again.

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We received the product that you sent back today.
Delivery fee $13 and sent-back fee $13 is deducted and we'll give $123.05 back to you.
Although we feel sad that this dealing is canceled, we still look forward to seeing you again.
If you have any questions to our product, please feel free to contact us.
We sincerely thank you again.

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手助け、また時間を割いていただき大変有難うございます。注文したA54はそのまま購入します。A09は別に後で注文します。これがA54に決めました。貴店が日本剃刀を私が使うのは始めてであることを考えてくれたことに好感を持ち、剃刀を使いたいと思っています。A09を購入したいのですが、少し待ちます。また、貴店の販売している最高の剃刀を購入かもしてません。
どちらにしても、色々と有難うございます。A54を購入することが良い始まりだと確信しています。

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手助け、また時間を割いていただき大変有難うございます。注文したA54はそのまま購入します。あとで別のものを注文します。これがA54に決めた理由です。貴店が日本剃刀を私が使うのは始めてであることを考えてくれたことに好感を持ち、剃刀を使いたいと思っています。A09を購入したいのですが、少し待ちます。また、貴店の販売している最高の剃刀を購入するかもしれません。
どちらにしても、色々と有難うございます。A54を購入することが良い始まりだと確信しています。

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The day of holding: July 2nd 2014(Wednesday)
Time: Open at 19:30 and start of performance at 20:00
Admission: 1,5000 Yeh by reservation and 1,800 Yen if you pay on the day(pay 1 drink additionally)

Reservation of ticket
http://2-5-d.jp/schedule/20140702/

USTREAM
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/2-5d1

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The day of holding: July 2nd 2014(Wednesday)
Time: Open at 19:30 and start of performance at 20:00
Admission fee: 1,500 yen by reservation and 1,800 Yen if you pay on the day(pay 1 drink additionally)

Reservation of ticket
http://2-5-d.jp/schedule/20140702/

USTREAM
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/2-5d1

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I would like to buy this neckless.
I would like to buy the silver one (14cm) and gold one(14cm), but as the available quantity of each item is one, I can buy only one item. Please modify the available quantity, if I can buy two neckless.
Thank you.

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I would like to buy this necklace.
I would like to buy the silver one (14cm) and gold one(14cm), but as the available quantity of each item is one, I can buy only one item. Please modify the available quantity, if I can buy two necklaces.
Thank you.

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Dear Yvonne Noelani

Hello.

This is my first time to send you an e-mail. My name is xx.

I am going to Oahu in October to attend my friend's wedding, and also planning to spend my one- week holiday with my family there.

It would be great if I could stay at your beautiful house with my wife and two kids.
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Will it be available from Oct.25 to 31?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

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Dear Yvonne Noelani

Hello.

This is my first time to send you an e-mail. My name is xx.

I am going to Oahu in October to attend my friend's wedding, and also planning to spend our one- week holiday there doubles as my family trip.

It would be great if I could stay at your beautiful house with my wife and two kids.
Are you free for the dates of from October 25 to 31?

Thanks in advance.

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Along with your proposals, we are currently working on item A by replacing from the liquid type to the powder one. Having said that though, this is our first time dealing with the powder type, so our final decision will rely on our customer's reaction whether or not to continue with the liquid type.

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Along with your proposals, we are currently working on item A by replacing from the liquid type to the powder one. Having said that though, this is the first time dealing with the powder type, so our final decision will rely on our customer's reaction whether or not to continue handling of the liquid type.

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You are responsible for the customs fee or tax when you purchase from Amazon USA.
We recommend contacting Amazon USA customer support center.
However, we would like to reimburse you for some of the customs fee or tax due to our lack of clear communication.↵
We'd hope you'd accept $100 worth of Amazon gift card which we can email you in PDF format.
Thank you for your consideration.

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It becomes the burden of the customer when you purchased from Amazon USA.
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We recommend contacting Amazon USA customer support center.
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However, we would like to reimburse you for some of the the customs duty because we also didn't informed about the handling of customs duties in detail to you in advance.↵
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Would you please approved to be send email to you in PDF format $100 worth of Amazon gift certificate?↵

Thank you for your consideration.

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【Astalight*】members only! 300 points Present (smartphone only)

Now, an additional course or register your new member registration, to "Kisekae ♪ mu-mo" from 【Astalight*】, you can get 300 points for free!
You are able to plan the delivery and wallpaper Kisekae special of Tokyo Women's flow in the future, don't miss this chance! !

【Astalight*】
https://fc.avex.jp/tgs/s/member/bnr_mumo.html?type=KISEKAE_OPEN

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【Astalight*】members only! 300 points Present (smartphone only)

Now, if you register an additional course or your new member registration from 【Astalight*】to "Kisekae ♪ mu-mo", you'll be given 300 points!
Being scheduled the delivery special of Tokyo Women's flow and wallpaper Kisekae in the future, don't miss this chance! !

【Astalight*】
https://fc.avex.jp/tgs/s/member/bnr_mumo.html?type=KISEKAE_OPEN