翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

Yvonne Noelaniさん、こんにちは。

初めまして、○○と申します。

10月に私の友人がオアフ島で結婚式をあげるため、家族旅行もかねてオアフ島に1週間行く事になりました。

Yvonne Noelaniさんのお家はとても素敵で、ぜひ妻と子供2人と一緒に泊まらせてほしいです。

10月25日から10月31日の日程で空いていますか？

よろしくお願いします。

英語

Dear Yvonne Noelani

Hello.

This is my first time to send you an e-mail. My name is xx.

I am going to Oahu in October to attend my friend's wedding, and also planning to spend my one- week holiday with my family there.

It would be great if I could stay at your beautiful house with my wife and two kids.

Will it be available from Oct.25 to 31?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

レビュー ( 1 )

conan7はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/06/07 20:07:25

元の翻訳
Dear Yvonne Noelani

Hello.

This is my first time to send you an e-mail. My name is xx.

I am going to Oahu in October to attend my friend's wedding, and also planning to spend my one- week holiday with my family there.

It would be great if I could stay at your beautiful house with my wife and two kids.
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Will it be available from Oct.25 to 31?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

修正後
Dear Yvonne Noelani

Hello.

This is my first time to send you an e-mail. My name is xx.

I am going to Oahu in October to attend my friend's wedding, and also planning to spend our one- week holiday there doubles as my family trip.

It would be great if I could stay at your beautiful house with my wife and two kids.
Are you free for the dates of from October 25 to 31?

Thanks in advance.

よく翻訳されておられると思います。少しだけ訂正させて頂きました。これから、ともに頑張りましょう！