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元の翻訳
1. I would be purchasing 〇〇 units of the product so can you give a △△% discount?
I would like to continue buying more from you once the deal has been established.
I will look forward for your response.

2. I am 〇〇 who purchased this product previously.
I thought of purchasing again but the product ran out of stock so I was not able to buy.
Is there a plan the re-stock?
Can you send an email on the product re-stocking to my mail address once you have confirmed the schedule?
I would also like to know the selling price once you have restock.

修正後
1. I would be purchasing 〇〇 units of the product so can you give a △△% discount?
I would like to continue buying more from you once the deal has been established.
I will look forward to your response.

2. I am 〇〇 who purchased this product previously.
I thought of purchasing the product again but it ran out of stock so I was not able to buy it.
Is there a plan of re-stocking the tem?
If you plan to re-stock the item, would you please send an email to my mail address below once you receive it?
I would also like to know the selling price once you have restock.

元の翻訳
Actually I have been working on it for two months. I am remaking the body panel for it.
Tig weld is the way that I'm doing for the cage. The light cage attached to ○○ is what I made and I hope you can see it how I welded it.
My plan is to make a copy of the body panel with resin treatment that keeps it stronger than FRP.
I can replicate the same one by processing an aluminum plate if I have enough budget and time.
I'm sure it'll be superior beyond comparison as the pipe material will be high grade iron and it'll be processed by Tig welding.

修正後
Actually I have been working on it for two months. I am remaking the body panel for it.
Tig weld is the way that I'm doing for the cage. The light cage attached to ○○ is what I made and I hope you can see it how I welded it.
My plan is to make a copy of the body panel with resin treatment that keeps it stronger than FRP.
I can replicate the same one by processing an aluminum plate if your budget and time allow.
I'm sure it'll be superior beyond comparison as the pipe material will be high grade iron and it'll be processed by Tig welding.

元の翻訳
私は、あなた方に興味を持っていただけると思い、メールにて、我々が結びうる契約について問い合わせをさせていただきました。
私は、今自分の輝かしい未来に向かって努力をしている若い調理師です。
過去に数年間、Feitoriaレストラン＆ワインバー(ミシュランの１つ星レストラン)や、Viajante(ミシュラン1つ星レストラン、世界のレストランベスト50にも選出)を含む、リスボンとロンドンの著名なレストランで働いてきました。他にも、Vila Joya(ミシュラン2つ星レストラン、世界のレストランベスト50にも選出)で催されたインターナショナルグルメフェスティバルのような、ヨーロッパの一流のイベントにも数々携わってきました。
今から16ヶ月間は、コペンハーゲンのNoma(ミシュラン2つ星レストラン、世界2位であり、世界でもっとも有名なレストラン)で勤務予定です。

修正後
私は、あなた方に興味を持っていただけるのではないかと思い、メールにて、我々が結びうる契約について問い合わせをさせていただきました。
私は、今自分の輝かしい未来に向かって努力をしている若い調理師です。
過去に数年間、Feitoriaレストラン＆ワインバー(ミシュランの１つ星レストラン)や、Viajante(ミシュラン1つ星レストラン、世界のレストランベスト50にも選出)を含む、リスボンとロンドンの著名なレストランで働いてきました。他にも、Vila Joya(ミシュラン2つ星レストラン、世界のレストランベスト50にも選出)で催されたインターナショナルグルメフェスティバルのような、ヨーロッパの一流のイベントにも数々携わってきました。
今から16ヶ月間は、コペンハーゲンのNoma(ミシュラン2つ星レストラン、世界2位であり、世界でもっとも有名なレストラン)で勤務予定です。

元の翻訳
With the details had been attached to the luggage,that are also listed about three cases, the 7-point golf club.
In other words,in spite of there is specification of the three cases which is paid a fee,but one case is not received
and Its contents is seven points golf club.
DHL is not in charge of the one remaining case,and It said that it is the responsibility of MyUS regarding this matter.

Where is the golf club now?

And when they might arrive?

Tax and charges that I paid the last time ,whether the amount of the golf club included?
Make sure above
Before the end of the day, please reply as soon as possible.

修正後
With the details had been attached to the packages, that（←何をさしているのか分からない） are also listed about three cases, the 7-point golf club.
In other words, in spite of the specification of the three cases which is paid a fee(←このwhich is はつながりません）, but one case has not been received
and Its contents is seven golf clubs.
DHL is not in charge of the one remaining case,and It said that it is the responsibility of MyUS regarding this matter.

Where is the golf club now?

And when they might arrive?

Tax and charges that I paid the last time ,whether the amount of the golf club included?
Make sure above
Before the end of the day, please reply as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
The breakdown list attached to the package indicated the total of 3 cases and it’s also indicated the 7 pieces of golf clubs.
This means that there is breakdown list of items in 3 cases which I have made the payment, the 1 case with 7 pieces of golf clubs has not been delivered to me.

The DHL has emphasized that they did not pick up 3 cases but only 2 cases so the MyUS should be totally responsible on this issue.
So, I want to know where those golf clubs are now?
And, when those will be delivered to me?
Has the payment I made for this order included the amount of golf clubs and the taxes?
Please verify those of my inquiries and get back to me as possible as earlier.

修正後
The breakdown list attached to the package indicated the total of 3 cases and it’s also indicated the 7 pieces of golf clubs.
This means that there is breakdown list of items in 3 cases which I have made the payment, the 1 case with 7 pieces of golf clubs has not been delivered to me.

The DHL has emphasized that they did not pick up 3 cases but only 2 cases so the MyUS should be totally responsible on this issue.
So, I want to know where those golf clubs are now?
And, when those will be delivered to me?
Has the payment I made for this order included the amount of golf clubs and the taxes?
Please verify those of my inquiries and get back to me as soon as possible.

元の翻訳
The product I bought seemed to have been shipped there but I couldn't track it despite entering the tracking number.
The package might have been lost or stolen by the shipping company according to the seller so is it being investigated there?
It is an important package so it's quite urgent.
Please provide a response within the day.

修正後
The product I bought seemed to have been shipped from you but I couldn't track it despite entering the tracking number.
The package might have been lost or stolen by the shipping company according to the seller so is it being investigated there?
It is an important package so it's quite urgent.
Please provide a response within the day.

元の翻訳
オンラインペット·コミュニティーGouminがペット関連商品向けの共同購入アプリケーションAichongtuanを発表

共同購入の概念は、中国で新しいものではないが、多数がケータリング、エンターテイメント、衣服の分野に焦点を当てている。、オンラインペットコミュニティ のGouminは、↵
ペット関連商品専用の共同購入携帯向けアプリのAichongtuanをリリースし、共同購入の概念を拡大した。

ユーザは一番最初のページですぐにペットの種類を選んだり、高品質のペット製品を検索でき、迅速に高品質なペット製品を購入できる。アプリ内決済機能も搭載している。

修正後
オンラインペット·コミュニティーGouminがペット関連商品向けの共同購入アプリケーションAichongtuanを発表

共同購入の概念は、中国で新しいものではないが、ほとんどがケータリング、エンターテイメント、衣服の分野に焦点を当てている。(←ほとんどは～焦点を当てたものだ。）オンラインペットコミュニティ のGouminは、ペット関連商品専用の共同購入携帯向けアプリのAichongtuanをリリースし、共同購入の概念を拡大した。

ユーザは一番最初のページですぐにペットの種類を選んだり、高品質のペット製品を検索でき、迅速に高品質なペット製品を購入できる。アプリ内決済機能も搭載している。

元の翻訳
引き取り手のないパッケージ
14日以内に郵便局で現金化されていないパッケージがある場合は、販売は帰りの発送および貨物会社の管理コストをカバーするためにあなたに手数料を請求する権利を有します。

修正後
引き取り手のないパッケージ
14日以内に郵便局で現金化されていないパッケージがある場合は、販売者は返送コストおよび貨物会社の管理コストをカバーするためにあなたに手数料を請求する権利を有します。

元の翻訳
受け取り手のない荷物
14日以内に貴郵便局で受け取られなかった荷物については、売り手は、返品発送および運送会社の管理費をカバーする手数料を貴方に請求する権利を保留します。

修正後
受け取り手のない荷物
14日以内に郵便局で受け取られなかった荷物については、売り手は、返品発送および運送会社の管理費をカバーする手数料を貴方に請求する権利を保留します。

元の翻訳
At first I thought I was wrong because there were so many claims in the email but now I realized that I was not wrong.
There is no mistake in my description.
The interpretation of how you describe the dust may varies but the successful bidder expects it too much.
I never described its condition as mint but he/she expects that.
The product is dusty as I described in the description.
He/She finds my fault extremely that he/she picks the small words and interpret as what he/she is suitable for her/him.

修正後
At first I thought I was wrong because there were so many claims in the email but now I realized that I was not wrong.
There is no mistake in my description.
The interpretation of how you describe the dust may varies but the successful bidder expects it too much.
I never described its condition as mint but he/she expects that.
The product is dusty as I described in the description.
He/She finds my fault extremely that he/she picks the small words and interpret as what he/she thinks is suitable for her/him.

元の翻訳
Since you made series of complaints in the initial email, I thought I was to be blamed, however I found out that was not right. As I think more, more I become sure there was no mistake in my item explanation
Each person may think differently about description of the dust, but I think interpretation of the succesful bidder is too much. I never mentioned it was in mint condition, but the bidder requires such condition.
Of course the item has certain dust as described.
The way the bidder trips me up is not normal, he picks some words and makes everything to suit his needs.

修正後
Since you made series of complaints in the initial email, I thought I was to be blamed, however I found out that was not right. The more I think, the more I become sure there was no mistake in my item explanation
Each person may think differently about description of (the?) dust, but I think the interpretation of the succesful bidder is too much. I never mentioned it was in mint condition, but the bidder requires such a condition.
Of course, the item has a certain amount of dust as (I?) described.
The way the bidder trips me up is not normal, he picks some words and makes (← tries to make?) everything to suit his needs.

元の翻訳
I want to report the current issue.

There seems change in selling rules at eBay. It seems they set up a restriction for adding the listings if the monthly sales quantity is less than 10 items or the monthly sales amount of less than 500.00$.

My account is still new and only three months from opening so this restriction is now applied to my shop.

For the meantime, please list 12 items which you have completed preparation.
And, before I am going to make payment, please correct the fonts at the digital camera listing page.

I will get back to you after the restriction will be lifted.

修正後
I want to report the current issue.

There seems a change in the selling rules at eBay. It seems they set up a restriction for the sellers to add the listings if their monthly sales quantity is less than 10 items or the monthly sales amount is less than 500.00$.

My account is still new and only three months from opening so this restriction is now applied to my shop.

For the meantime, please list 12 items which you have completed preparation.
And, before I am going to make payment, please correct the fonts at the digital camera listing page.

I will get back to you after the restriction will be lifted.