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Purchase→about the delivery

The first problem is the customs.
It can be stopped or be charge depends on the goods.

The second problem is
It may takes a long time to be arrived.

So, I came up with a way to resolve these inconveniences.

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Purchase→about the delivery

The first problem is the customs.
It can be stopped or be charged depending on the goods.

The second problem is
It may take a long time to arrive.

So, I came up with a way to resolve these inconveniences.

元の翻訳
I trusted you, and I bought the item. But, I am deeply disappointed.

In eBay page, you described, "The watch is an unused one," but it was actually used.
The belt of the watch is dirty, and there is a scratch in the screen back.

I am returning all of the watches I bought from you.
As I already sent them to Japan, I will return them to you by way of EMS.
I am responsible for having sent them to Japan, I will cover all the shipping fee for return.

If you make refund in full for the items, I am not going to rate you badly.
I appreciate your help. Please respond as soon as possible.

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I trusted you, and I bought the item. But, I am deeply disappointed.

In eBay page, you described, "The watch is an unused one," but it was actually used.
The belt of the watch is dirty, and there is a scratch in the screen back.

I am returning all of the watches I bought from you.
As I already sent them to Japan, I will return them to you by way of EMS.
I am responsible for having sent them to Japan, I will cover all the shipping fees for return.

If you make a refund in full for the items, I am not going to rate you badly.
I appreciate your help. Please respond as soon as possible.

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As this item was our last item, we had newly ordered them, and we are waiting for their arrival.
Once we receive the items, we will ship the item to you again. But, as we make sure to make shipment, please allow me to mark the order as "delivered" once.
(Due to the rule of Amazon)

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As this item was our last item, we had newly ordered them, and we are waiting for their arrival.
Once we receive the items, we will ship the item to you again. But, as we will make sure to make the shipment, please allow me to mark the order as "delivered" for now.
(Due to the rules of Amazon)

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Hello. Thank you for your e-mail.
In Hokkaido that I'm living in, there is no influence of earthquake, so I'm OK.
Thank you for worrying about me.
I respect your favor, Stephany.
I appriciate you.
New song of this time is great, too.
The phrase of arpeggio and a change of rydyme are so nice, and I like the view of the world in this song.
The top of the Drum and Bass Charts is so cool!
It means that many people love your music.
I'm also so happy.
I am always looking forward to your new song.

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Hello. Thank you for your e-mail.
In Hokkaido where I'm living, there is no influence of earthquake, so I'm OK.
Thank you for worrying about me.
I respect your favor, Stephany.
I appreciate you.
The new song this time is great, too.
The phrase of arpeggio and a change of rhythm are so nice, and I like the view of the world in this song.
The top of the Drum and Bass Charts is so cool!
It means that many people love your music.
I'm also so happy.
I am always looking forward to your new song.

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I am sorry for late reply. I was out of country for important work.

Normally, it takes five to seven days shipped from Japan to U.S. though I can not mention the clear arrival date of guitar. Please check it from following site.

We acknowledged about GB12. However, it is highly rare and that may take time.
We promise to report you at first when we find it.

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I am sorry for the late reply. I was out of the country for important work.

Normally, it takes five to seven days to ship from Japan to U.S. though I can not mention the exact arrival date of thr guitar. Please check it from following site.

We acknowledged about GB12. However, it is highly rare and that may take time.
We promise to report you at first when we find it.

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I am a Japanese wholesale trader.
I want to buy a large quantity of this product, and I want to know that how much discount I can get at most?
Please contact me with the e-mail address writing in the attachment.

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I am a Japanese wholesale trader.
I want to buy a large quantity of this product, and I want to know how much discount I can get at most?
Please contact me with the e-mail address writing in the attachment.

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The apartment manager will not talk to you. so don't worry about that.

If the apartment manager ask something to you,
it will go well, just saying " I came here to visit and play with my friend" or something.

Feel free to question me anything.

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The apartment manager will not talk to you, so don't worry about that.

If the apartment manager ask something to you,
it will be fine if you say "I came here to visit and play with my friend" or something.

Feel free to ask me anything.

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Please be assured that the apartment manager will not speak to you.

If he/she asks you anything,
just tell him/her that you are visiting your friend, and no problem.

Please ask me anything if you have any other questions.

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Please be assured that the apartment manager will not speak to you.

If he/she asks you anything,
just tell him/her that you are visiting your friend, and there will be no problem.

Please ask me anything if you have any other questions.

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The girls were very friendly. They also kept the room very clean. I spent a long time with them. We went to a BBQ and a bar, and had very good time. They bought me souvenirs, and they also showed me pictures and shared the stories from that day. We appreciated them and want to meet again. Kathleen, Pauly, sorry for my poor English. I will let you guys know if we go to Singapore.

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The girls were very friendly. They also kept the room very clean. I spent a long time with them. We went to a BBQ and a bar, and had a very good time. They bought me souvenirs, and they also showed me pictures and shared the stories from that day. We appreciated them and want to meet again. Kathleen, Pauly, sorry for my poor English. I will let you guys know if we go to Singapore.

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The details of the flight is attached as photo!
I'm looking forward to taking on a business class for the first time!

Actually, I haven't reserved the hotel because I haven't decided which hotel could be. I would like to make a reservation for the hotel which is convenient to meet you. Where is a convenient place?

Thank you very much for appearing the video!
I'll let you know when the details of the scenario is decided.

Thank you very much for order guitar.
I'll look for a good one.
Do you want a vintage guitar? Or a reissue model?

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The details of the flight is attached as a photo!
I'm looking forward to travelling in business class for the first time!

Actually, I haven't reserved the hotel because I haven't decided on a hotel yet. I would like to make a reservation for the hotel which is convenient to meet you. Where is a convenient place?

Thank you very much for appearing in the video!
I'll let you know when the details of the scenario is decided.

Thank you very much for ordering a guitar.
I'll look for a good one.
Do you want a vintage guitar? Or a reissue model?

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Thank you for your purchase.
I am sorry to tell you that items you purchased are currently out of stock.
However, there is a substitute item, would you mind see the pictures of this item and take a consideration?
I am looking froward to hear from you soon.↵
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Thank you for your purchase.
I am sorry to tell you that unfortunately, the items you purchased are currently out of stock.
However, as a substitute item, please allow us to suggest a similar swan tie pin and other bird tie pins. Would you mind seeing the pictures of this item to consider?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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I receive the lens you returned. I apologize to have caused you an inconvenience this time.
As you submitted a damage report, I was compensated from the delivery company here.
I appreciate you.

I have a favor to ask you finally.
As my eBay seller, may I ask you to delete the "negative feedback" from you?
I am going to continue the sale at eBay. For this purpose, I have to keep my rating
as clean as possible.
I need your cooperation.
Thank you very much.

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I received the lens you returned. I apologize for causing you an inconvenience this time.
As you submitted a damage report, I was compensated by the delivery company here.
I appreciate you.

I have a favor to ask you finally.
As an eBay seller, may I ask you to delete your "negative feedback"?
I am going to continue selling at eBay. For this purpose, I have to keep my rating
as clean as possible.
I need your cooperation.
Thank you very much.

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I managed to safely received the returned lense from you.
I am very sorry for the inconvenience.

It is a relief that I submit a damage report , and able to received security compensation from the shipping company.

Thanks you.

Finally, here is a request.
Could you cancel the negative evaluation from you as my ebay customer?

I want to continue selling more of my products in the future on ebay, please do me a favor to keep the evaluation clean as much as possible for that to happen.

Your cooperation is very much required.
Nice to meet you.

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I managed to safely received the returned lens from you.
I am very sorry for the inconvenience.

It is a relief that I submitted a damage report, and was able to receive security compensation from the shipping company.

It's thanks to you.

Finally, here is a request.
Could you cancel the negative evaluation from you as my ebay customer?

I want to continue selling more of my products in the future on ebay, please do me a favor to keep the evaluation clean as much as possible for that to happen.

Your cooperation is very much required.
Nice to meet you.

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Ok. Let's have lunch together. Would you come to reception in Risona Bank on 1st floor of Marunouchi Building at 12:00 on April 15th Friday? The address is 1-1-5. I will be waiting there. If you cannot find it, please call my cell phone (080-8888-1111).

If you and your wife are interested in what kind food laborers in Japan are eating in the house as small as a house for bird, you can come to my house and have dinner with me in the evening on the day.

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Ok. Let's have lunch together. Would you come to reception in Risona Bank on 1st floor of Marunouchi Building at 12:00 on April 15th Friday? The address is 1-1-5. I will be waiting there. If you cannot find it, please call my cell phone (080-8888-1111).

If you and your wife are interested in what kind food laborers in Japan are eating in a house as small as birdhouse, you can come to my house and have dinner with me in the evening on that day.

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OK.
Let's have lunch together. Please come to the general reception of Rizona Bank in the !F of Marunouchi Building, at 12:00 on April 15th. Address is 1-1-5 Marunouchi. I will wait you there. If you do not know the place well, please contact me with my mobile phone number (080-8888-1111).
If you and your wife are interested in what I usually eat at my home, a home of normal Japanese working class that is so small just like a birdcage, it is also OK that you come to my home and have dinner together that night.

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OK.
Let's have lunch together. Please come to the general reception of Rizona Bank in the 1F of Marunouchi Building, at 12:00 on April 15th. The address is 1-1-5 Marunouchi. I will wait for you there. If you do not know the place well, please contact me with my mobile phone number (080-8888-1111).
If you and your wife are interested in what I usually eat at home, a home of normal Japanese working class that is so small just like a birdcage, it is also OK if you come to my home and have dinner together that night.

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Hello

The item that I ordered on March 31st hasn't been delivered yet to Japan even after 15 days are past.

I wonder if this may be reached to Hong Kong again?

I need my package by the 24th.
Today I have ordered two of the item, but since the previous item that I ordered hasn't been here yet, can I place the same order again?

Thank you for your reply in advance.

Yamane

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Hello

The items 100110493 and 100110494 that I ordered on March 31st haven't been delivered yet to Japan even after 15 days are past.

I wonder if they returned to Hong Kong again?

I need my package by the 24th.
Today I have ordered two of the item, but since the previous item that I ordered hasn't been here yet, can I place the same order again?

Thank you for your reply in advance.

Yamane

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Hello.

Regarding my order, 100110493 and 10011049４, it is already 15 days have passed, but they have not arrived in Japan yet.

Have the already arrived at Hong Kong?

I would like to have this item by 24th.
Today, I ordered 2 pieces of the item, but as my previous orders have not been delivered, would I be able to order the same items again?

I am looking forward to your reply.

Thank you.
Yamane

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Hello.

Regarding my orders, 100110493 and 100110494 from March 31st, 15 days have already passed, but they have not arrived in Japan yet.

Have they already arrived at Hong Kong?

I would like to have this item by the 24th.
Today, I ordered 2 pieces of the item, but as my previous orders have not been delivered, would I be able to order the same items again?

I am looking forward to your reply.

Thank you.
Yamane

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Yes, you are right. The baggage of the tracking number AAA arrived today. Only BBB wasn't in there. The parcel was not suitable for the size of BBB, but it is rectangle and slim type. Please handle with this on your end.

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Yes, you are right. The package of tracking number AAA arrived today. Only BBB wasn't in there. The parcel was not suitable for the shape of BBB, but it is rectangular and slim. Please handle this on your end.

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I hava an address in the United States too.
If you can not ship it to Japan, please ship it to the address in the United States.
By the way, the paid postage $136.52 is for shipment to Japan, so in the case you send it to the United States is $61.52.
So can you refund $75 of the difference through PAYPAL, can't you?
Or should I cancel and win it again at $549.99 $ + $61.52?

American address is below .


Thank you.
So please ship it to the address in the United States.
I am looking forward to it.

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I hava an address in the United States too.
If you can not ship it to Japan, please ship it to the address in the United States.
By the way, the paid postage $136.52 is for shipment to Japan, so if you send it to the United States, it is $61.52.
So you can refund the $75 difference through PAYPAL, can't you?
Or should I cancel and win it again at $549.99 $ + $61.52?

The American address is below.


Thank you.
So please ship it to the address in the United States.
I am looking forward to it.