Vernelle / バーネル (vytt) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
****さん

CML（デリー）へ*****さんのソーファの出荷を確認した後で、月曜日（９月５日）の発送の予定を送ることが出来るようになります。

よろしくお願いします。

修正後
****さん

CML（デリー）へ*****さんのソファーの出荷を確認した後、9月5日（月）に発送スケジュールをお伝えできるようになるでしょう。

よろしくお願いします。

元の翻訳
At the time, AE-18, which was the best selling type of equipment, was produced from 1972 to 1976. This is the from the serial line made in 1974. The beautiful body arch certainly gives it the appearance of a work of art. The nuts have been replaced and the fret has reduced, but there is probably isn't any change from the normal sound. The pegs for 4 strings have been changed, and some of the parts for the bridge are out of stock. On the top of the body, some cracks in the coat are visible. On the back of the neck bird's eye can be seen here and there, and you can tell it was made of good materials for the time.

Please enjoy this old, good quality YAMAHA work of art.

修正後
At the time, AE-18, which was the best selling type of equipment, was produced from 1972 to 1976. This is the from the serial line made in 1974. The beautiful body arch certainly gives it the appearance of a work of art. The nuts have been replaced and the fret has reduced, but there is probably isn't any change from the normal sound. The pegs for 4 strings have been changed, and some of the parts for the bridge are out of stock. On the top of the body, some cracks in the coat are visible. On the back of the neck bird's eye can be seen here and there, and you can tell it was made of good materials for the time.

Please enjoy this good old quality YAMAHA work of art.

元の翻訳
I placed an order for apparel in the same ratio as the last order.
Since not all the apparel was sold and became stock, I can't add any more orders beyond this.
The L size of this brand is larger than the usual sizes, so it's hard to sell.
Could I receive a discount of 30% for just the L size?
The order amount for this brand is very little, but I've been ordering it continuously.
If the price goes 5% higher than what it is now, it will become hard to order.
Could you sell it to me for the same price as this year?

修正後
I placed an order for apparel in the same ratio as the last order.
Since not all the apparel was not sold and became stock, I can't add any more orders beyond this.
The L size of this brand is larger than the usual sizes, so it's hard to sell.
Could I receive a discount of 30% for just the L size?
The order amount for this brand is very little, but I've been ordering it continuously.
If the price goes 5% higher than what it is now, it will become hard to order.
Could you sell it to me for the same price as this year?

元の翻訳
Firstly I apologize for hurting your feelings. I am very sorry. I do not have detailed knowledge of the product. Since the 1600 label was attached, I can't judge whether that was really 1500 or 1600. Because of that I sent the product back to you. I'd like you to please understand that. Until now I have purchased products from you many times. I've always settled the payment immediately, and I've never made any claims about the products received. I'd like to continue a good business relationship with you from now on. After this would you still be able to continue transactions with me?

修正後
Firstly I apologize for hurting your feelings. I am very sorry. I do not have detailed knowledge of the product. Since the 1600 label was attached, I can't judge whether that was really 1500 or 1600. Because of that I sent the product back to you. I'd appreciate it if you understand. Until now I have purchased products from you for many times. I've always settled the payment immediately, and I've never made any claims about the products received. I'd like to continue a good business relationship with you from now on. After this would you still continue transactions with me?