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元の翻訳
Thanks for making shipment.
However, as I see tracking information, status was "Undeliverable - Item restricted at Global Shipping Center".
What does this mean? Will it be delivered to Japan without any problem?
Please ask Global Shipping Center and let me know.
Also, if it cannot be sent that way, please send it by Royal Mail.
I really want this item...
Thank you in advance for your kind arrangement.

修正後
Thanks for making shipment.
However, as I see on the tracking information, the status was "Undeliverable - Item restricted at Global Shipping Center".
What does this mean? Will it be delivered to Japan without any problem?
Please ask Global Shipping Center and let me know.
Also, if it cannot be sent that way, please send it by Royal Mail.
I really want this item...
Thank you in advance for your kind arrangement.

元の翻訳
Have you checked email?

If you still want to buy guyatone WR-2, I can directly make an offer to you using eBay.

The price is $110 plus $15 for shipping cost.

When you reply, I will make an offer as soon as possible.
As this item is popular, it might be sold out.

I'd definitely like you to buy this item.
I appreciate your soonest reply.

修正後
Have you checked email?

If you still want to buy guyatone WR-2, I can directly make an offer to you using eBay.

The price is $110 plus $15 for shipping cost.

I will make an offer as soon as I receive your response.
As this item is popular, it might become sold out.

I'd definitely like you to buy this item.
I appreciate your soonest reply.

元の翻訳
(1) Thanks for the color number. I quickly placed an order.
Additionally, will yo inform me the item number of match product?
The color of item I'd like to know is as follows.
A
Thank you in advance.
I always appreciate your kind cooperation, it really helps me. Thank you.

(2) However, if adding this item will delay shipment of prepared item, please do not add it.
Please prioritize shipment of the item I ordered last month.

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(1) Thanks for the color number. I quickly placed an order.
Additionally, will you inform me the item number of match product?
The color of item I'd like to know is as follows.
A
Thank you in advance.
I always appreciate your kind cooperation, it really helps me. Thank you.

(2) However, if adding this item will delay shipment of prepared item, please do not add it.
Please prioritize shipment of the item I ordered last month.

元の翻訳
Thanks for your inquiry.
9.5 feet in US would be around 27.5 in Japanese size.
however, width etc are very different and I think it's better to buy larger size, how about following item in 28cm?

I cannot say for sure these will fit because I haven't actually seen your foot, so please kindly understand.
Next size 30cm would be around 12 feet, so I think it's too large for you.
I appreciate your kind consideration.

修正後
Thanks for your inquiry.
9.5 feet in US would be around 27.5 in Japanese size.
However, the width etc is very different so I think it's better to buy larger size, how about the following item in 28cm?

I cannot say for sure these will fit because I haven't actually seen your foot, so please kindly understand.
The next size 30cm would be around 12 feet, so I think it's too large for you.
I appreciate your kind consideration.

元の翻訳
はい、すべて問題なければ添加物の輸入許可取得に2週間かかります。

添加物の輸入許可を入手したら、日本から添加物を輸出してください、その方がいいです。

ところで、サレンダーBLと書類原本コピーを添付ファイルにてお送りさせていただきます。

修正後
はい、すべて問題なければ添加物の輸入許可取得に2週間かかります。

添加物の輸入許可を入手したら、日本から添加物を輸出してください、その方がいいです。

ところで、サレンダードB/Lと書類原本コピーを添付ファイルにてお送りさせていただきます。