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I would like to let you ship the item to Japan. Do you always use a specific courier service?

I would like to request you to use the USPS, but if it is troublesome for you, it is all right for me to use the courier service you are always using. Anyway, I would like to let you ship it to Japan.

I understand that the shipping charge becomes expensive and I will shoulder it.

And, it is also all right to me that you will add 10.00$ as your commission to send it directly to Japan.

I appreciate if you could consider my request.

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I would like you to ship the item to Japan. Do you always use a specific courier service?

I would like to request you to use the USPS, but if it is troublesome for you, it is all right for me to use the courier service you are always using. Anyway, I would like to let you ship it to Japan.

I understand that the shipping charge becomes expensive and I will shoulder it.

And, it is also all right with me for you to add 10.00$ as your commission to send it directly to Japan.

I appreciate if you could consider my request.

元の翻訳
ご連絡ありがとうございます。満足いく条件であれば、前向きなご連絡が出来ると思います。

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ご連絡ありがとうございます。商品の状態に満足できれば、前向きなご連絡が出来ると思います。

元の翻訳
I am ●● who bought ●●.

The watches you handle are very attractive, so I plan to continue a lot of purchase from you.

Though you told that you give me 10% discounts off if I pay by Western Union, I want to pay by PayPal.
Can you give me 10% discounts off if I pay by PayPal ?

If you accept my request, I will buy three or more on one trade.

It would be nice if you could reply early because I search another client company.

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I am ●● who bought ●●.

The watches you handle are very attractive, so I am thinking to purchase many items from you.

Though you told that you will give me 10% discount if I pay by Western Union, I would like to pay by PayPal.
Can you give me 10% discount if I pay by PayPal ?

If that's possible, I will buy three or more at once.

It would be nice if you could reply soon because I am looking for other client company.