Himeyoshiko (sakura1980z) — 付けたレビュー

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pit crew challenge Congratulations for winning 1st and 2nd!!↵
I hear that in the race, you were only an inch away from the top!!! I felt so happy when reading the article:)

Today, it's snowing heavily in Tokyo, and everything is in chaos lol
I will always be supporting you! Do your best in the next race also.

Thank you for your comment. I will post various pictures from now on, though bit by bit, so please take a look at it!

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Congratulations for winning 1st and 2nd on pit crew challenge!↵
You have finished a close second in the race, right? I felt so happy when reading the article:)

Today, it's snowing heavily in Tokyo, and everything is in chaos lol
I will always be supporting you! Do your best in the next race also.

Thank you for your comment. I will post various pictures from now on, though bit by bit, so please take a look at it!

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We, Myus fowarding agent , have one notification for you.

If the receiving charge of the goods exceeds $ 2,500, it is necessary for you to submit EIN code (employer identification number).
(If possible, the price of the goods is above $ 2,500, it would be helpful for me if you in advance told me the fact that you have sent EIN code.)

Without EIN code, the goods can't be delivered to Japan.

If the good stops here, we will receive further complaints from our customers.

We kindly ask for your cooperation.

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We, Myus fowarding agent , has a prior notification for you.

If the value of the goods is exceeding to $ 2,500, it is necessary for you to submit EIN code (employer identification number).
(If possible, the price of the goods is $ 2,500 or more, it would be helpful for us if you described that you have sent EIN code.)

Without EIN code, the goods can't be delivered to Japan.

If they are suspended here, we will receive further complaints from our customers.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Every country you want to express has its own price in freight which is counted in weight.
It will be knew when accounting.
<Estimated time of arrival>Air Smail Packet/7〜10days、EMS/4〜7days
In consideration of the traffic condition ,please take notice of the time.
In addition ,watching the goods all by yourself after they are sent out.
<custody of goods>
If the goods are not arrive in the deadline,please go to the distribution point for asking.
The goods in distribution point will be kept for about a week.

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Every country you want to express has its own price in freight which is counted in weight.
It will be known when accounting.
<Estimated time of arrival>Air Smail Packet/7〜10days、EMS/4〜7days
In consideration of the traffic condition, please take notice of the time.
In addition, tracing the goods by yourselves after they are sent out.
<custody of goods>
If the goods are not arrived in the deadline, please contact the nearest delivery office.
The goods can be hold there on or about one week.

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To cancel the exhibitor account only, the buyer account remains.
Thanks in advance.

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To cancel the seller account only, the buyer account remains.
Thanks in advance.

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しかし、貴方はそれを失くしたと言いましたが、私は、それを、既に、受け取っているので、取引しましょう。

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しかし、貴方はそれを失くしたと言いましたが、私は、それを、既に、受け取っているので、どう（取引）しましょうか？

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What is specific packages?
I cannot understand what you say.
The package is sent so late, and I was wondering if I should inquire?

I checked what is preventing export, but I did not find what violates law.
Is it band of watch called "military strap"?
For confirmation, I attached invoice, and please check it.

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What is specific packages?
I cannot understand what you're saying.
Since the package was sent so late, I was wondering if I should inquire.

I have checked why is preventing to export, but I did not find what violates law.
Could it be the band of watch called "military strap"?
For your reference, please confirm the invoice as per attached.

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そのご注文を転送して頂けましたら、仮オーダーを作りオンラインで詳しい見積もりをご用意出来ます。

よろしければ送って頂いたご注文を再送信して頂けませんでしょうか？

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仕様のわかる注文を送って頂けますなら、仮注文書を作り、詳細がわかれば、オンラインで見積もりができるか調べます。

当方喜んで致しますので、オリジナルの注文書を送信して頂けませんでしょうか？

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こんにちは。
発送方法を訂正してください。

クーリエ便ではなく、郵便局を利用したいのです。
これは、最たる経済的な郵送方法でありますが、↵
追跡番号もありますので。
５から１０ドルくらいだと思います。
製品は、かなり軽量ですが、日本においてこれらを大量に購入しました。

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こんにちは。
発送方法を訂正してください。

クーリエ便ではなく、郵便局を利用したいのです。
こちらの方が経済的ですが、追跡番号は付けてください。
５から１０ドルくらいだと思います。
製品は、かなり軽量ですが、日本においてこれらを大量に購入しました。

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Thank your for purchasing our products. You chose Expedite for delivery service, but we asked if Japan Post has been taken fast delivery service to Google, It hasn't been accepted by Japan Post.

if your changed the way of delivery service to standard. we will refund $12 for the gap of price. Standard(small pocket) will take 6-20days(average 2weeks) and we will compensate
for delivery accidents as full cover compensation.

May I suggest if we can send the products on Standard.
We'll wait for your suggestion how we can deal with.
Thank you.

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Thank your for purchasing our products. You chose Expedite for delivery service, but we asked if Japan Post has been taken fast delivery service to Google, It hasn't been accepted by Japan Post.

if your changed the way of delivery service to standard. we will refund $12 for the gap of price. Standard(small packet) will take 6-20days(average 2weeks) and we will compensate
for delivery accidents as full cover compensation.

May I suggest if we can send the products on Standard.
We'll wait for your suggestion how we can deal with.
Thank you.

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こんにちは　親愛なる友人様
↵
ご注文ありがとうございました。悪いお知らせがあります。チャイナポストがバッテリー内の小包の回収を拒否したので、バッテリーを発送できません。貴方の注文も速やかにキャンセルしてください。よろしくお願いします。

敬具

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こんにちは　親愛なる友人
ご注文ありがとうございました。悪いお知らせがあります。チャイナポストがバッテリー入りの小包の引き取りを拒否するので、バッテリーを発送できません。貴方の注文も速やかにキャンセルしてください。よろしくお願いします。

敬具

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I forgot writing this.
Please request A company for creating this document.
It may take a great number of days because B　company's staff made custom staff angry.
If you can't creat the document,I will send products once,so I want you to resend by changing transport company from B to xx.
If you can't send by xx,please refund me.
Using B company will take a many time for receiving product,and by xx transporting I received already A company's products that I purchased from another company in US.

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I forgot writing this.
Please request A company for creating this document.
It may take a great number of days because B　company's staff made customs officer angry.
If you can't creat the document,I will send products once,so I want you to resend by changing forwarding company from B to xx.
If you can't send by xx,please refund me.
Using B company will take a many time for receiving product,and by xx I received already A company's products that I purchased from another company in US.

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もしまだでいらっしゃるようなら、私達がお願いした取引の仕入れ書をどうぞご用意下さい。
もしくはすでにお願いした取引の仕入れ書を準備いただいているのであれば、どうか問屋/仕入れ先に私達がお願いした輸出に関しての追加情報もご用意頂くようお願いします。
必要であれば、カスタマーサービスのほうで追加情報を要約したものをご用意できます。

もしこの商品を問屋に返品したい場合、郵送の注文をキャンセルするのに私どもまでご一報下さい。
もし何のご連絡も頂けない場合や、お願いした情報がこちらに送れられなかった場合、取引をキャンセルさせて頂きます。

追加情報、もしくは何かお手伝いが必要ならその旨を添えて、ご返信頂きますようお願いします。

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もしまだでいらっしゃるようなら、私達がお願いした商品のインボイスをどうぞご用意下さい。
もしくはすでにお願いしたインボイスを全部準備いただいているのであれば、どうか売主/仕入れ先に私達がお願いした輸出に関しての追加情報もご用意頂くようお願いします。
必要であれば、カスタマーサービスのほうで追加情報を要約したものをご用意できます。

もしこの商品を売主に返品したい場合、郵送の注文をキャンセルするのに私どもまでご一報下さい。
もし何のご連絡も頂けない場合や、お願いした情報がこちらに送れられなかった場合、取引をキャンセルさせて頂きます。

追加情報、もしくは何かお手伝いが必要ならその旨を添えて、ご返信頂きますようお願いします。

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Classic records of "Romeo and Juliet"
I'sorry that I'm not familiar with sort of records.please check these pictures.
"Romeo and Juliet" was shown in japan , these are extremely precious pamphlet at that time. and no tears.
"Juliet" "Romeo and Juliet" "Olivia Hussey special"
"Cinema album of Olivia Hussey who played Juliet in the film" , no cover, half of pictures are color , use of rather thick papers and no tears .
A special number of Screen's "Romeo andJuliet" published in japan 1969 october. also no tears and good condition as copared with the age.

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Analog records "Romeo and Juliet"
Since I'm sorry that I have no knowledge about analog records, please check these pictures.
The movie "Romeo and Juliet" has been screened in japan in those days, these are extremely precious pamphlets at that time. without tears.
"Juliet" "Romeo and Juliet" "Olivia Hussey special"
"Cinema album of Olivia Hussey who played Juliet in the film" ,coverless, half of pictures are colored , used rather thick papers without tears .
A special number of Screen's "Romeo andJuliet" published in japan October,1969 without tears and good condition as compared to the age.

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こんにちは！この荷物の関税を払わなければいけないかどうか心配だったのですが。
宜しくお願いします！

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こんにちは！この荷物の通関料を払わなければいけないかどうか心配だったのですが。
宜しくお願いします！

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その供給業者はAmazonの納入方針に沿っていません。　私は１１月２日に注文した際に３～５日の出荷を依頼しました。　現在の出荷予定日は１１月１５日から１２月５日と言われています。

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その販売業者はAmazonの納入方針に沿っていません。　私は１１月２日に注文した際に３～５日の出荷を依頼しました。　現在の出荷予定日は１１月１５日から１２月５日と言われています。