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I have a one question regarding LEICA that I made a successful bid. The one I made a bid is M8 but the shutter speed dial is M8.2.
I had a concern before the bid but I didn't have a chance to ask.

Is this camera upgraded to M8.2 dial or just divert to use in reparing?
M8.2's shutter must be quiete but this camera' isn't.
I would like to know the fact rather than claiming.

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I have a question regarding LEICA that I made a successful bid. The one I made a bid is M8 but the shutter speed dial is M8.2.
I had a concern before making a bid but I did not have a chance to ask.

Is this camera upgraded to M8.2 dial or has it been changed to M8.2 whem repaired?
M8.2's shutter sound must be quiet but this camera's is not.
Could you kindly let me know as I just want to know the fact and not to make a claim.

元の翻訳
My question was that there are 2 products for "show detail 00-442-6423", but the two seems to be the same.
The picture you sent can be checked using camera service.
Is the product in the picture tracking no.xxx?
The product I purchased was BOSE MUSIC SYSTEM, therefore not the same.
Plesae kindly tell me which product tracking no.xxx is.

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My question is that there are 2 products for "show detail 00-442-6423", but are these two products the same ones?
The picture you sent can be checked using camera service.
Is the product in the picture tracking no.xxx?
The product I purchased was BOSE MUSIC SYSTEM, therefore it is the wrong item.
Plesae kindly tell me which product tracking no.xxx is.

元の翻訳
I deeply regret that the merchandise sustained a damage in transit.

I inquired about the compensation to the Japanese post office, that replied that insurance can be applied to EMS. Please contact the shipping company that delivered it to demand the compensation. The shipper in Japan say they can't process it.

I'm sorry to bother you, but please demand it.

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I deeply regret that the product got damaged.

I inquired the Japanese post office about the compensation, and the answer was that insurance can be applied on EMS. Please contact the shipping company to claim the compensation. The shipper that the item has been sent out from, which is in Japan, can not process it.

I'm sorry to bother you, but please claim it from your end.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your very polite contact. I am living in Japan so I have another person receive it. And then, The dolls I bought from you arrived to my place in Japan. Please do not worry even though my feedback is late. I will make a good evaluation to you

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Thank you for your very polite contact. I have asked another person to receive it as I live in Japan now. The doll I bought from you then will arrive at my place in Japan. Please do not worry even though my feedback is late. I will make a good evaluation on you.

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I thank for your cooperation. But I have a question. Today the goods had arrived already, but why the package is so large even surplus? For the original boxes, it should be entered boxes of the same size just like the attached pictures. Are the boxes outside your company's boxes?And I thank you for severe package, but don't you think the boxes outside were too larger?
The size is so larger that the freight free would cost double, Is it your package from now on?Is anything I can do for you?I am waiting for your contacting.

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I thank for your cooperation. But I have a question. Today the goods have arrived, but why the package is so larger than it actually needs to be? You have put the item into the larger box than the original one, like the attached pictures. Is the box outside your company's? I thank you for a careful package, but don't you think the box outside is too large?
The size is so large that the freight fee has costed me double, are you going to use this kind of packaging from now on? Is there anything I can do for you? I am waiting for your contact.

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I have been using SNS smartly until now. I also am an experienced blogger outside school and my blog gets more than 20,000 access a day. I get all sorts of benefit from SNS including the topic which I would like to talk about today.

I am a bilingual in Chinese and Japanese, and have been studying English as my third language these days. The reason why I think this method would be helpful for you is because I succeeded in this method myself.

Have you ever felt tired having have to take tests everyday?

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I have been using SNS smartly until now. I have gone through various experiences as a blogger outside school and my blog has more than 20,000 access a day. I get all sorts of benefit from SNS including the topic which I would like to talk about today.

I am a bilingual in Chinese and Japanese, and have been studying English as my third language these days. The reason why I would like you to refer to this method is that I myself is the one who has succeeded using this method.

Have you ever felt tired of being forced to take tests everyday?

元の翻訳
At last, please give message to indivisual investors.

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At last, please give messages to the individual investors.

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Another factory gives us the wholesale price, therefore proceed the purchase if they gives us the wholesale price as well.
They are the same condisions, but you insisted that you have to order from that factory.
By the way, they agreed that the pick-up cost will be covered by the warehouse.

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Another factory gives us the wholesale price, therefore please proceed to placing orders if they can give us the wholesale price as well.
They are on the same conditions however, this is because you have insisted on ordering from the factory.
Also, we have agreed that the pick-up cost will be covered by the warehouse.

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I think I want to increase product handling of Company A in our store by various ways.
The product which I always order was already popular .Please tell me. if there are the parts have many orders from the United States elsewhere
(but because it is hard to treat xxx, I would like to exclude).
In addition, please introduce me if there is marketable goods product with many orders from the United States in other makers not only Company A.
It is not the purchasing, but I purchase it for trial little by little and want to examine all immediately whether profit appears with sales and domestic market price.
Please give an advice by all means.

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I would like to increase the opportunities to handle A company's products in our store in various ways.
The product which I always order has already gained popularity however, please tell me if there are any parts that have many orders from the United States
(excluding xxx because it is hard to handle).
In addition, please introduce the products with many orders from the United States to us, this can be both A company's and any other brands.
I do not mean to buy all the items immediately but I would like to purchase items for trial one by one to examine if we can gain profit in Japanese domestic market.
Please give us an advice.

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The items I shipped to you will arrive in your country in 3 or 4 days. But I don't know how long it will take to inspect at the custom. Time needed for customs vary depending on countries and seasons, and sometimes it takes long.

It depend on the custom, and I assume you will get the item within 14 to 20 day.

I know you are looking forward to getting the item soon, but please be patient.

Thank you for your understanding.

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The items I shipped to you will arrive at your country in 3 or 4 days. But I don't know how long it will take for an inspection at the custom. Time needed for customs varies depending on countries and seasons, and sometimes it takes long.

It depends on the custom, however I assume you will get the item within 14 to 20 day.

I know you are looking forward to getting the item soon, but please wait a little more with a patience.

Thank you for your understanding.

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#Golf Xcess
thank you very much for giving me a lot of discount on RBZ 10.5. But I have enough that I bought the other day, so this time I'll be very glad if you give me a rain check.

#Marcus Bougard
I'm going to order 10 Tour Issue R11S T3 Head. I want to get a new RBZ9, so on this occasion, I'll put that order off, sorry.
Version 2 Head doesn't mean Stage 2, but that old type RBZ Version 2.
When it is available to place that order, please let me know.↵
Thank you. Best wishes! ↵
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#Golf Xcess
thank you very much for giving me a big discount on RBZ 10.5. But I have enough stocks which I have bought the other day, so this time I'll be very glad if you would understand of my not ordering.

#Marcus Bougard
I'm going to order 10 Tour Issue R11S T3 Head. I will put that order of on this occasion because I want to get a new RBZ9.
Version 2 Head does not mean Stage 2, but that old type RBZ Version 2.
If it is possible to place an order, please let me know.

元の翻訳
Please be responsible.
From the page of the product of your company, it says that it has 1 year guarantee.
Where on the product does it say 3 months?
Please clarify where the sign is. If there is no labels or signs on the product then it will mean what you said makes no sense. Please do not change the rules by yourself.
If things like this ever happen again in the future, I will report to ebay for sure.
Please send me the parts of products that have flaws in them to the following address as soon as possible.

Do you think it is the right manner to deal with things like this?
It is a matter of responsibility and trust.

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Please be responsible.
From the page of the product of your company, it says that it has 1 year guarantee.
Where does it say 3 months guarantee for a part?
Please clarify where it is mentioned. If it is not mentioned, then it will mean what you said makes no sense. Please do not change the rules by yourself.
If things like this ever happens again in the future, I will report the claims to ebay for sure.
Please send me the defect part of the product to the following address as soon as possible.

Do you think it is the right manner to deal with things like this?
It is a matter of responsibility and trust.

元の翻訳
History of call center.
April 1st, 2002.
Joined in company as operator...
Rewarded the operator newcomer award.
July 1st, 2007
Appointed as a supervisor at the company's contact center
After being charge of domestic Lodging department, took responsibility for establish Life service department.
April 1st 2008
appointed as a chief supervisor at the company's contact center
Promoted of multi-skills of the domestic Lodging & Life Service.
April 1st 2009, appointed as a Deputy Director in the company's contact center
Use number .->. review (year on year %)
Sales .->, yen (year on year%)
Balance of payment --> Profitability

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History of call center.
April 1st, 2002.
Joined in company as an operator...
Awarded the operator newcomer award.
July 1st, 2007
Been appointed as a supervisor at the company's contact center
After being in charge of domestic Lodging department, took responsibility of establishing Life service department.
April 1st 2008
Been appointed as a chief supervisor at the company's contact center
Promoted the multi-skills of the domestic Lodging & Life Service.
April 1st 2009, been appointed as a Deputy Director in the company's contact center
Used number .->. review (year on year %)
Sales .->, yen (year on year%)
Balance of payment --> Profitability

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I didn't know this item is precious for you.
I appreciate your giving to me.
I like this item very much,but I was disappointed when I found a hole on this item.

I was wondering how to do about this hole. And I decided to keep this item like now.
So please give me 200$ discount.

Thank you for your gentle offer.

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Thank you for your reply.
I didn't know this item is precious for you.
I appreciate that you have sold this item to me.
I like this item very much, but I was disappointed when I found a hole on this item.

I was wondering how to deal with this issue. As a concequence I have decided to keep this item with me.
Please give me 200$ discount.

Thank you for your gentle offer.

元の翻訳
Also, I catch the latest information of apps and services by checking English IT news such as TechChrunch and so on.↵
Another advantage I have is to never stop catching business trends. (I have a strong interest in a launch of new internet service or business.) In other sides, I have many friends who are in their 20s, because I was a street dancer a few years ago (mainly HipHop and House). This has allowed me to reach various information from those friends and be familiar with culture and atmosphere for young generation.↵

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Also my continuous effort of catching up English IT news such as TechChrunch and gaining the latest information of apps and services is my strong advantage. (I have a strong interest in launching new internet services or business.) Furthermore, I have many friends who are in their 20s, because I was a street dancer (mainly HipHop and House) until a few years ago. This has allowed me to reach various information of young generation from these friends which enables me to be familiar with culture and atmosphere for young generation, which I also regard as my advantage.

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#4 At the moment, I am in charge of development, but by around April 2014, I plan on changing my career to experience the role of an engineering leader. After having worked on my management skills, presentation skills and on my English language skills, my ultimate goal is to become either the [[[CCT職]]] or the management position of a cyber company that creates business globally.

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#4 Currently, I am in charge of product development, but by around April 2014, I am planning to change my career. After experiencing the role as an engineering leader, brushing up my skills in management, presentation and English coversation, I am aiming to become either the [[[CCT職]]] or work in a management position of a cyber company that opens business globally.

元の翻訳
(In my private time, currently I have continued to study mainly “English” and “Statistics”.)

Others, I am very confident myself to create “a great idea”. Actually, I won the first place by acquiring 12,000 [[[stars]]] in one of the [[[Ogiri]]] site [[[“bokete”]]]. The site has been rapidly gaining in popularity for recent a few years.

Further, I expended myself for and tried to use a 3D printer (Solidoodle) and an wearable device (Vuzix M100)

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(In my private time, currently I am studying mainly “English” and “Statistics”.)

Others, I am very confident with myself in creating “a great idea”. Actually, I won the first place by acquiring 12,000 [[[stars]]] in one of the [[[Ogiri]]] sites [[[“bokete”]]]. The site has been rapidly gaining its popularity in recent few years.

Furthermore, I have purchased and expended in trying to use a 3D printer (Solidoodle) and an wearable device (Vuzix M100)

元の翻訳
Hello,
We are JAPANTEX Video team.

We have provided a pitch of the product you will make a presentation this time by delivering a video streaming. This is for the purpose to make the product to be known well in the Japanese market.

We will summarize your presentation into 3 minutes long and put a Japanese language guide to deliver for the target of JAPANTEX in various opportunities.

For example, the top page of JAPANTEX’s website, between seminar live broadcastings, on the site map in the website and in japantex facebook., etc.

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Hello,
We are JAPANTEX Video team.

We are providing you with a prgramme that delivers your product presentation as a film. This is for the purpose to make the product to be well-known to the Japanese market.

We will summarize your presentation into 3 minutes long and put a Japanese subtitles and deliver to the targets in JAPANTEX in various opportunities.

For example, the top page of JAPANTEX’s website, between live seminars, on the site map in the website and in japantex facebook., etc.

元の翻訳
Hello.
We are Japantex Video Team.

We provide a program to deliver as an animation for the purpose of the presentation of the product which you exhibit this time and make it to be well-know to Japanese markets.

I settle your presentation for three minutes and attach Japanese subtitles and, for a target of JAPANTEX, deliver it at various opportunities.

The top page of the JAPANTEX web site, an interval of the live delivery of the seminar, the publication to a venue map of web, an introduction on japantex facebook.

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Hello.
We are Japantex Video Team.

We provide you with a program to deliver your presentation as a film in the purpose of making your products well-known in Japanese market.

We make your presentation into a three-minute film with Japanese subtitles and deliver it at various opportunities, targetting the JAPANTEX.

The top page of the JAPANTEX web site, at an interval time between the live seminars, on the venue map of web, an introduction on japantex facebook.

元の翻訳
I am confirming how much you can prepare for the person in charge of the advertisement now.
I want you to tell the sales number from October to December of the last year in Japan.
I think that It will become a useful reference quantity

For these past 2-3 months, we has been selling from 90 to 110 pieces per month
I hardly have the surplus stock.
The stores which I continue selling elsewhere are as follows.
-A
-B
The pages are different but the operator is same.
The prices are cheaper than our company so there is existing buying a certain number from the store mentioned above

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I am now confirming how much we can prepare with the person in charge of the advertisement.
I would be grateful if you can tell us the number of the sales made from October to December last year in Japan.
I think that will be a helpful information to know how much we
need.
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These past 2-3 months, we have sold around 90 to 110 pieces per month.
We do not havemuch stocks available.
The stores that are stilI selling the items are as follows.
-A
-B
The pages are different but the operating companies are the same.
The prices are cheaper than our company so there is some certain numbers of the people buying from the store mentioned above.

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I receive a fair wind of the Tokyo Olympics Paralympics held decision in 2020, and I enter in September, and Tokyo two, one Kyoto and Japan holding are decided one after another large size international conferences more than 4,000 holding scales.

As the reason why the invitation of many meetings succeeded, the people concerned such as a sponsor, association of study, industry, the local government get united, and the Japanese Government sightseeing station raises that national invitation activity was evaluated.
In addition, JNTO supports Japan inspection of the influential decision incarnation of a procession and the International Headquarters of the letter of invitation such as the Prime Minister, the Director of JNTO on the occasion of invitation activity in cooperation with Japan Tourism Agency

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Entering September, encouraged by a favorable wind upon Tokyo Olympics Paralympics held in 2020, huge international conferences with more than 4,000 people are continuously set in Japan like two in Tokyo and one in Kyoto.

As the reason why the invitation for many meetings succeeded is that the fact of united cooperation of the people concerned such as sponsor, association of study, industry, and the local government have been evaluated, the Japanese Government sightseeing station explains.
In addition, JNTO supports the inspection of Japan by a influencial person on making decisions in United Nations and publishing official letter of invitation from the Prime Minister and the Director of JNTO in accordance with the Japan Tourism Agency.

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On October 1st, at the Japan National Tourism Organization, Japan Congress and Convention Bureau industry group held " The first 2013 JCCB industry group organized by MICE skills workshop (Industrial Group MICE seminar)" . Approximately 50 people attended from member company members and organizations.

The workshop deputy secretary of the Taiwan Trade Center headquarters (Vice President) Mr. Mingshui gave a lecture titled "MICE circumstances of Taiwan and the introduction of the IT example" by the workshop. They won a best marketing award of association of international conference (ICCA) and introduced activity of TAITRA which worked on MICE promotion all over the country.

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On October 1st, Japan Congress and Convention Bureau industry group held " The first JCCB industry group organized by MICE skills workshop (Industrial Group MICE seminar) in 2013" at the Japan National Tourism Organization. Approximately 50 people from member companies and organizations have attemded the workshop.

The vice president, as well as the deputy head of secretary of the Taiwan Trade Center headquarters, Mr. Mingshui Ye gave a lecture titled "MICE circumstances of Taiwan and the introduction of the IT example" in the workshop. They have introduced the TAITRA activity which is promoted by the country, presenting the fact that they have won a best marketing award of association of international conference (ICCA)

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for your Email
About mention to a cabinet, it is all right in just what I heard.
Thank you in advance
Because I leave Japan for around two weeks after 14th of this month and cannot transfer the documents,So could you tell me when the plan is completed?

This is forward information
Aiefuesu joitn stock company （http://www.ifsjpn.co.jp/com/）
Person in charge is mr Hara and his email address is hikari.hara@ifsjpn.co.jp
Thank you in advance↵
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Thanking you in advance.

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Hello.
Thank you for your Email
All the information you have given to us is right with regards to the package.
Thank you in advance
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Could you tell me when the plan will be completed because I leave Japan for around two weeks after 14th of this month and I will not be able to proceed to the money transfer?

This is the information of the person who will be forwarded the item.
IFS stock company （http://www.ifsjpn.co.jp/com/）
Person in charge is Mr. Hara and his email address is hikari.hara@ifsjpn.co.jp
Thank you.

元の翻訳
I'm sorry. I listed it in product explanation with lens filter attachment, but, actually, the lens filter is not attached to this product (only the cap is attached).

Because product explanation had a mistake, I can accept repayment.

Besides I wait for your communication about the purchase.

I'm sorry to trouble you,; but thank you in advance.

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I would like to sincerely aporogize first. I have listed the products including lens filter however, the fact is that the lens filter is not attached to this product but only the cap is attached.

Because I have given you a false explanation, I can accept the refund from you.

I am waiting for your further communication about the purchase.

I am sorry for troubling you and thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
Hello ladies and gentlemen all over the world.
This is a web page like a world forum. In the world there are various kinds of cultures, services, ways of thinking, people.I hope people in the world interact and exchange opinions in this page. It will be really great. Do you think it is very interesting? And why don't you become the originator? The main character of this page is you who originate the opinions and thoughts.
Let's warm up together!
Thank you!

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Hello ladies and gentlemen all over the world.
This web page was made in the purpose of making a world forum board. There are various cultures, services, ways of thinking, and the people in the world. I guess it will be really great if I can enable the people in the world to interact and exchange opinions in this page. Why don't you participate and prevail your opinions to the world? The main character of this page is you who transmmits the opinions and thoughts.
Let's get the page livend up!
Thank you!