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元の翻訳
Because the product I ordered on (month,date) is broken, I want to have a full refund.
Please tell me the necessary procedures to get the refund.

Below are the information about the order.
Product Name: yyyyy
Order number: xxxxx
Quantity: 1
Price: $ 58.99

The broken part is that part of the zipper can't be occlude well and will be open in the middle when closing the zipper. I can send a picture about the broken status, please tell me if you need it.

I am looking forward to your contact.

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Because the product I ordered on (month,date) was broken, I want to have a full refund.
Please tell me the necessary procedures to get the refund.

Below are the information about the order.
Product Name: yyyyy
Order number: xxxxx
Quantity: 1
Price: $ 58.99

The broken part is that part of the zipper can't be occlude well and will be opened in the middle when closing the zipper. I can send a picture about the broken status, please tell me if you need it.

I am looking forward to your contact.

元の翻訳
I purchased a product at (month/day) was broken. May I have refund of this product? Please tell me how to do this process.
Product information as below:
Product: yyyyy
Purchase number: xxxxx
Quantity: 1
Price: $58.99

I guess that is something wrong about zipper. Even if I zip up it still open from the middle part. If you need some pictures please let me know.
Look forward your reply.

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The product I purchased on(month/day) was broken. May I have refund of this product? Please tell me how to do this process.
Product information as below:
Product: yyyyy
Purchase number: xxxxx
Quantity: 1
Price: $58.99

I guess that there was something wrong ewith zipper. Even if I zip up it still opens from the middle part. If you need some pictures please let me know.
I look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
We do not sell products in Europe.

Why is it that your shop does not sell goods to other stores?

I don't think that any trouble does happen.


Would you wholesale this product somehow?

The sizes we want are 41-43.


Can I really order a brand of ◯◯?

While other stores have already started selling them,
can I order you to produce 2015SS now?


I already completed shop making.

As I have got a lot of advance orders, too, I will be in a big trouble if I cannot order them now.

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We do not sell products in Europe.

Why does your shop does sell goods to other stores?

I don't think that any trouble does happen.


Would you wholesale this product somehow?

The sizes we want are 41-43.


Can I really order a brand of ◯◯?

While other stores have already started selling them,
can I order you to produce 2015SS now?


I already completed shop making.

As I have got a lot of advance orders, too, I will be in a big trouble if I cannot order them now.

元の翻訳
Please let me ask.
Our company business is direct selling supply goods to young consumers with
proposing movie productive style.
We took an attention to product A and
B from your product line up.
At the same,we have a plan that we import to sell them focusing to each targets.
As far as i see japanese dealer's web site,that seem not to work.
So please let me know if we can stock them from your company by some pieces.

If it's available, let me hear the trade rules such as how about the lot and etc.

regards

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Please let me ask.
Our company business is directly selling supply goods to young consumers with
proposing movie productive style.
We took an attention to product A and
B from your product line up.
At the same,we have a plan that we import to sell them focusing to each targets.
As far as I see Japanese dealer's web site,that seem not to work.
So please let me know if we can stock them from your company by some pieces.

If it's available, let me hear the trade rules such as how about the lot and etc.

Regards

元の翻訳
I wan to confirm one thing about the delivery.
The bath mat I ordered at the beginning of this month is still not arrived in Japan.
Below is the list of ordered items and its ordering date.

Below item arrived on Jan.27.

Large sized color: I heard ivory is the back order, so is other color also back color?
If the items have been delivered, could you tell me the tracking number of the items with ordering data Jan.6, Jan.9 and Jan.13?
I will try to contact with the delivery company that usually receives my item.

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I want to confirm one thing about the delivery.
The bath mat I ordered at the beginning of this month is still not arrived in Japan.
Below is the list of ordered items and its ordering date.

Below item arrived on Jan.27.

Large sized color: I heard ivory is the back order, so is other color also back color?
If the items have been delivered, could you tell me the tracking number of the items with ordering data Jan.6, Jan.9 and Jan.13?
I will try to contact with the delivery company that usually receives my item.

元の翻訳
It seems your items has been stuck in the custom.
We've been investigating right now, but it takes time so we will refund you for now.
We're very sorry.

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It seems your item has been stuck in the custom.
We've been investigating right now, but it takes time so we will refund you for now.
We're very sorry.

元の翻訳
As I told you last time, a glass panel I had ordered was also cracked before. This is why I have asked you to pack up very carefully, especially not to crack the glass panel without fail.
The packing this time has not been done carefully at all.
There are no cushioning materials and since the double carton boards are just layered, they do not function at all.
My claim would not go through USPS as the packing is too bad.
But I would use the product by replacing the glass panel.
Please refund $140 for the glass panel fee as I would buy it by myself.
Thank you.

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As I told you last time, a glass panel I had ordered was also cracked before. That is why I have asked you to pack up very carefully, especially not to crack the glass panel without fail.
The packing this time has not been done carefully at all.
There are no cushioning materials and since the double carton boards are just layered, they do not function at all.
My claim would not go through USPS as the packing is too bad.
But I would use the product by replacing the glass panel.
Please refund $140 for the glass panel fee as I would buy it by myself.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for your reply.
I am glad to hear that the item arrived safely.
Regarding the payment, I will contact an ebay customer service rep. in the early next week.
Then, I will reply to you as soon as I hear back from them.
Thank you again for contacting us this time.

This time, we will be delivering an item for a left handed person.
We confirmed it.
Sp please don't worry about it.

We understood it.
So we would like to take care of the cancellation.
I will contact an eBay's customer service in the earlier next week.
Then, I will reply to you as soon as we hear back from them.

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Hello.
Thank you for your reply.
I am glad to hear that the item arrived safely.
Regarding the payment, I will contact an ebay customer service rep. in the early next week.
Then, I will reply to you as soon as I hear back from them.
Thank you again for contacting us this time.

This time, we will be delivering an item for a left handed person.
We confirmed it.
So please don't worry about it.

We understood it.
So we would like to take care of the cancellation.
I will contact an eBay's customer service in the earlier next week.
Then, I will reply to you as soon as we hear back from them.

元の翻訳
Since I want to sell more on C, I would like the limit to be raised.
In the future, I plan to sell a lots of expensive brands (Gucci, Louis Vitton, etc).
Now, I am selling around 5000 brand products in Japan.

Now, I have a limit and I can only show 5 products.
I would like you to unlock this limit.

My wish:
- Remove the limit on the number of brand products I can show.
- Raise the price limit to 40,000$

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Since I want to sell more on C, I would like the limit to be raised.
In the future, I plan to sell lots of expensive brands (Gucci, Louis Vitton, etc).
Now, I am selling around 5000 brand products in Japan.

Now, I have a limit and I can only show 5 products.
I would like you to unlock this limit.

My wish:
- Remove the limit on the number of brand products I can show.
- Raise the price limit to 40,000$

元の翻訳
1 We are buying our product from wholesalers and retailers.
2 Our short term target is the sales of $100,000.
3 We are expecting to sell more products at Amazon.

4 I have been working at a mail order company for three years. I have sales experience for about one year since I started my business.
5 We are also selling on other websites.
When the sales at Amazon is increase, we are considering to sell only at Amazon.

6 We are expecting to sell the great Japanese products to more customers through Amazon.

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1 We are buying our product from wholesalers and retailers.
2 Our short term target is the sales of $100,000.
3 We are expecting to sell more products at Amazon.

4 I have been working at a mail order company for three years. I have sales experience for about one year since I started my business.
5 We are also selling on other websites.
When the sales at Amazon is increasing, we are considering to sell only at Amazon.

6 We are expecting to sell the great Japanese products to more customers through Amazon.

元の翻訳
Good day!
I could not use a coupon of xx a few minutes ago.
I would like you to change that I can use it again,
and order 2 of xx additionally.
I am looking forward to your reply.

I am going to purhase the Samsonite.
Do you give me the discount as much as the one for the Rimowa?
If you like, I would like to continue the business with you from now.
By considering the result I have had so far,
could you lower the price of the items other than the Rimowa?
May I ask you to discuss it with your boss?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

I cannot discuss it any more. I understand.

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Good day!
I could not use a coupon of xx a few minutes ago.
I would like you to change that I can use it again,
and order 2 of xx additionally.
I am looking forward to your reply.

I am going to purchase the Samsonite.
Do you give me the discount as much as the one for the Rimowa?
If you like, I would like to continue the business with you from now.
By considering the result I have had so far,
could you lower the price of the items other than the Rimowa?
May I ask you to discuss it with your boss?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

I cannot discuss it any more. I understand.

元の翻訳
Are you looking for an 1991 Aria Bob Bogle Bass ?
I like Ventures and collect Ventures model instruments, however, unfortunately I don't have the one you're looking for.
I might have a chance to find it if I ask a musical instrument store which I know well.
Could you give me some time? The color you want is blue, right?
If you have a picture of the model, could you sent that piece of data to me?
I'll ask my acquaintances, too.

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Are you looking for an 199's Aria Bob Bogle Bass ?
I like Ventures and collect Ventures model instruments, however, unfortunately I don't have the one you're looking for.
I might have a chance to find it if I ask a musical instrument store which I know well.
Could you give me some time? The color you want is blue, right?
If you have a picture of the model, could you send that piece of data to me?
I'll ask my acquaintances, too.

元の翻訳
Is it possible to deal with you the following products?
"Item"
If it is possible please send quotation.

Since we have received some customers inquired about the item, we look forward to make a deal with you
Thank you

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Is it possible to deal with you the following products?
"Item"
If it is possible please send quotation.

Since we have received some customers inquired about the item, we look forward to making a deal with you
Thank you

元の翻訳
It's unfortunate that I couldn't meet your expectations.
I had no bad intentions, but I thought I was describing the product accurately.
As it's excellent, not mint condition, it contains some dust.
I thought I packed it with the utmost care, but I didn't realize it needed some cushion.
I apologize for the inconvenience.

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It's unfortunate that I couldn't meet your expectations.
I had no bad intentions, but I thought I was describing the product accurately.
As it's excellent, not mint condition, it contains some dust.
I thought I packed it with the utmost care, but I didn't realize that the cushion was not enough
I apologize for the inconvenience.

元の翻訳
Re:
I regret that I was not able to realize your expectation.

I really looked so malicious.

Because it is excellent condition, there is the some mixture of Chile not a mint.

I intended to pay attention of the forefront to packing, but did not notice that a cushion was insufficient.

I am sorry that I have made you feel unpleasant.

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Re:
I regret that I was not able to realize your expectation.

I really looked so malicious.

Because it is excellent condition, there is the some mixture of Chile not a mint.

I intended to pay attention to the forefront to packing, but did not notice that a cushion was insufficient.

I am sorry that I have made you feel unpleasant.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for the deal.

I apologize for bothering you, but could you please print out the webpage with which I can know the item I purchesed and its price, and enclose it with the item? Then it would be appreciated very much.

I have ordered a number of items, so I would like to distinguish it from the items of the other sellers.

When I confirm the arrival of the item, I will make an assessment.

Thanks in advance.

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Thank you very much for the deal.

I apologize for bothering you, but could you please print out the webpage that I can know the item I purchased and its price, and enclose it with the item? Then it would be appreciated very much.

I have ordered a number of items, so I would like to distinguish it from the items of the other sellers.

When I confirm the arrival of the item, I will make an assessment.

Thanks in advance.

元の翻訳
Hello,my name is 〇〇
I refunded the other day but I'd like to inform you that I found a stock.
I can only sell one.
If you are still looking for the product, let me know and I'll add to the ebay page.
I can ship it as soon as possible.I'll inform you the tracking number after I finish shipping.
If you won't contact me, I'll add to the ebay page so that the other people can purchase it.
Please contact me soon.

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Hello,my name is 〇〇
I refunded the other day but I'd like to inform you that I found a stock.
I can only sell one.
If you are still looking for the product, let me know and I'll add to the ebay page.
I can ship it as soon as possible.I'll inform you the tracking number after I finish shipping.
If you won't contact me within this week, I'll add to the ebay page so that the other people can purchase it.
Please contact me soon.

元の翻訳
How long will you keep the products?
In order to reduce the delivery costs, could you please pack them together and send it in one box?

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How long will you keep the products?
In order to reduce the delivery costs, could you please pack them together and send them in one box?

元の翻訳
Is very disappointed, and I am afraid that I am no longer able to make a deal.

The reason of this is because of the recognition of the entry clearance issue that may happen when importing your products into Japan.
Although thankfully you secured a stock, again I am terribly sorry for the situation that surrounding us.

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I am sorry to inform that I am not able to make a deal any longer

The reason of this is because of the recognition of the entry clearance issue that may happen when importing your products into Japan.
Although thankfully you secured stock, again I am terribly sorry for the situation that surrounding us.

元の翻訳
The tracking of order #610 has not been changed since November 18.
Please check again if arrangement of sending has been carried out without mistake.

The rug of order#610 and 611 is listed as is described below.
It has not been listed as business days.

In any case, 14 days have passed since we ordered.
Even counting only business day, 10 days have already passed.
Would you arrange that we can receive it before or on November 29?
Please send it immediately.
I appreciate your prompt action.

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The tracking of order #610 has not been changed since November 18.
Please check again if arrangement of sending has been carried out without mistake.

The rug of order#610 and 611 is listed as is described below.
It has not been listed as business days.

In any case, 14 days have passed since we ordered.
Even counting only business day, 10 days have already passed.
Would you arrange that we can receive it by 29th November?
Please send it immediately.
I appreciate your prompt action.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the reply.
It buys completely.
( 70 )
How much is it?
I hope for 280 dollars.
Send a bill to the following PayPal address if it is possible to understand.
Please send an invoice in PayPal.
PayPal　Adress: kanemura.hisanori@hotmail.co.jp

It hopes for the long relationship.
Then, it thinks that it wants to buy a product from you continuously.
We request, being good.

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Thank you for the reply.
It buys all.
( 70 )
How much is it?
I hope for 280 dollars.
Send a bill to the following PayPal address if you understand about it
Please send an invoice via PayPal.
PayPal　Adress: kanemura.hisanori@hotmail.co.jp

I hope for the long relationship with you.
Then, I think that I want to buy a product from you continuously.
Kind regards

元の翻訳
I am sorry for let you contact me many times.
I have not displayed your company product the 2nd time
Could I ask you to withdraw the claim to B?
Please help me
I am believing in you
Good luck to you!!!

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I am sorry for letting you contact me many times.
I have not displayed your company product the 2nd time
Could I ask you to withdraw the claim to B?
Please help me
I am believing in you
Good luck to you!!!

元の翻訳
I have purchased the following products.
If you send the invoice which has been adjusted to 700 Euro follow to commitment, I will make a payment.

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I have purchased the following products.
If you could send me the invoice which has been adjusted to 700 Euro follow to commitment, I will make a payment.