翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

こんにちは、先ほど〇〇のクーポンが使えなかった。
もう一度使える様にしてほしい。
私はあと追加で〇〇を2つ注文したい。
あなたからの連絡お待ちしています。

■サムソナイトを購入する際ですが、リモワと割引は同じですか？
もしよければ、
これからも私はあなた方と今後も取引したい、今までの結果をみて
リモワ以外の他の商品ももう少し安くしてほしい。
あなたの上司と検討してもらえませんか？

是非あなたからの連絡をお待ちしています。

■それは仕方ないですね。わかりました。

英語

Good day!
I could not use a coupon of xx a few minutes ago.
I would like you to change that I can use it again,
and order 2 of xx additionally.
I am looking forward to your reply.

I am going to purhase the Samsonite.
Do you give me the discount as much as the one for the Rimowa?
If you like, I would like to continue the business with you from now.
By considering the result I have had so far,
could you lower the price of the items other than the Rimowa?
May I ask you to discuss it with your boss?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

I cannot discuss it any more. I understand.

レビュー ( 1 )

huuhungはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2015/01/22 18:55:16

元の翻訳
Good day!
I could not use a coupon of xx a few minutes ago.
I would like you to change that I can use it again,
and order 2 of xx additionally.
I am looking forward to your reply.

I am going to purhase the Samsonite.
Do you give me the discount as much as the one for the Rimowa?
If you like, I would like to continue the business with you from now.
By considering the result I have had so far,
could you lower the price of the items other than the Rimowa?
May I ask you to discuss it with your boss?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

I cannot discuss it any more. I understand.

修正後
Good day!
I could not use a coupon of xx a few minutes ago.
I would like you to change that I can use it again,
and order 2 of xx additionally.
I am looking forward to your reply.

I am going to purchase the Samsonite.
Do you give me the discount as much as the one for the Rimowa?
If you like, I would like to continue the business with you from now.
By considering the result I have had so far,
could you lower the price of the items other than the Rimowa?
May I ask you to discuss it with your boss?

I will be looking forward to your reply.

I cannot discuss it any more. I understand.