Khanh (huuhung) — 付けたレビュー

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Hello, the product seems to be kept at the customs.

It seems to be kept at post office or the customs.
All marshmallows were sold out

Although, what was said "replacement", please send this marshmallow.

Please get it.
One more time, I am so sorry for disturb you

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Hello, the product seems to be kept at the customs.

It seems to be kept at post office or the customs.
All marshmallows were sold out

Although, what do you mean when say "replacement", I will send this marshmallow.

Please get it.
One more time, I am so sorry for disturbing you.

元の翻訳
Hello.
The product has been stored in customs
Postal has also been stored in customs
Marshmallow has been all sold out.
You said "change", what does it mean? I will send the following Marshmallow
Please eat it by all means.
Once more, Sorry for bothering you.

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Hello.
The product has been kept in customs
Postal has also been kept in customs
Marshmallow has been all sold out.
You said "change", what does it mean? I will send the following Marshmallow
Please eat it by all means.
Once again, Sorry for bothering you.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your real understanding about the Japanese sword.
Japanese sword is not only a lump of iron, a very sharp cutlery,also need to understand that it includes the philosophy and spirituality.
Especially, it is the best aesthetics and philosophy when it is along with Samurai's death.
However, There is a trend to capture the Japanese sword with the art of ornamental only, and we were very concerned about this.
Because you are living with the constantly weapons of a proud solider in honor, your understanding about the soul of Far East's samurai is very natural.

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Thank you very much for your real understanding about the Japanese sword.
Japanese sword is not only a lump of iron, a very sharp cutlery,but also need understanding that it includes the philosophy and spirituality.
Especially, it is the best aesthetics and philosophy when it is along with Samurai's death.
However, There is a trend to capture the Japanese sword with the art of ornamental only, and we were very concerned about this.
Because you are living with the constantly weapons of a proud solider in honor, your understanding about the soul of Far East's samurai is very natural.

元の翻訳
About the Ford Explorer you had bought, because arrival of documents from the previous owner was delayed so departure becomes 4th Dec.Originally, departure date was 27th but it was too early on 25th so it became late. We are making the document so there will be delayed again. Please contact about progress situation

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About the Ford Explorer you had bought, because arrival of documents from the previous owner was delayed so departure becomes on 4th Dec.Originally, departure date was 27th but it was too early on 25th so it became late. We are making the document so it won't be delayed again. Please contact about progress situation

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Mr. Paul. It was the best today's live. Impression ! Thank you so much.
by the way, please come to Japan!

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Mr. Paul. It was the best today's live. I am impressed ! Thank you so much.
By the way, please come to Japan!

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Sorry for the late reply.
At present, We are considering purchasing with company's boss.
Sorry for this impolite but could you offer us some discount?
I think that If you offer us some discount it is useful for persuading my boss.
Please think about it.
We will decide purchasing after receiving your offering.We are making payment documents now.
We will take part in the auction within 2-5 days.
At the risk of sounding too forward, please wrap tightly to Impact-resistant material and ship it.
Please support for us.Thank you and best regards.

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Sorry for the late reply.
At present, We are considering purchasing with company's boss.
Sorry for this impolite but could you offer us some discount?
I think that If you offer us some discount it is useful for persuading my boss.
Please think about it.
We will decide purchasing after receiving your offer.We are making payment documents now.
We will take part in the auction within 2-5 days.
At the risk of sounding too forward, please wrap tightly to Impact-resistant material and ship it.
Please support us.Thank you and best regards.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.
I want to confirm that, now Boot-Console is out of stock so it is impossible to buy.
Then, I am interested in shipping service
From now quantity will be increased so when I want to purchase large product like wheel I will ask you.
Please let me know if you have any information about shipping cost and order method

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Thank you for your reply.
I want to confirm that now Boot-Console is out of stock so it is impossible to buy.
Then, I am interested in shipping service
From now, quantity will be increased so when I want to purchase large size of items like wheels I will ask you.
Please let me know if you have any information about shipping cost and order method

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply.
Now, I am creating the website which used the product you are dealing
Because the customer deposits for me late so I think of paying for you on 17th.
Thank you and best regards

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Sorry for the late reply.
Now, I am creating the website which used the product you are dealing
Because the customer deposits for me late so I think about paying for you on 17th.
Thank you and best regards

元の翻訳
Thank you so much for your contacting. I am living in Japan now, but because the shipping to Japan was wrong, this time I would like to send to a transferring trader in Forida . Sorry for your inconvenience but Please ship to the address in Florida.
Sorry for disturb you

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Thank you so much for your contacting. I am living in Japan now, but because the shipping to Japan was impossible, this time I would like to ask a forwarder in Florida to ship it . Sorry for your inconvenience but Please ship to the address in Florida.
Sorry for disturb you