Eiko (gloria) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply.

I would like to confirm the followings: The price of the item is $〇〇, the shipping fee to Florida is $ｘｘ, and the total is $△△.

Is the above total price correct?

I would like to as you for my reference: How many units can you ship with the above shipping fee?

OK, noted. Please send me the invoice to my Paypal address.

Thank you for having a good deal.

Then, once the number of units are satisfied, please send me the invoice to my Paypal address.

修正後
Thank you for your reply.

I would like to confirm the followings: The price of the item is $〇〇, the shipping fee to Florida is $ｘｘ, and the total is $△△.

Is the above total price correct?

Plus, I would like to ask you one thing: How many units can you ship with the above shipping fee?

OK, noted. Please send me the invoice to my Paypal address.

Thank you for offering a good deal.

Then, once the number of units is satisfied, please send me the invoice to my Paypal address.

元の翻訳
It's OK,

This time I accept.

The picture you publish on ebay is not "Newport 2 Notchback", but do you have picture data f "Newport 2"?

I would like to sell them in Japan, so can you please give me the picture data?

And if I buy them the next time, can you give me a discount?

I will start to sell the items I bought this time in Japan from today, and if it sells well, I will buy them more the next time.

修正後
It's OK,

I accept this time.

The picture you posted on ebay is not "Newport 2 Notchback", but do you have picture data f "Newport 2"?

I would like to sell them in Japan, so can you please give it to me?

And can I receive a discount for potential purchases?

I will start to sell the items I bought this time in Japan from today; if it sells well, I will buy more the next time.

元の翻訳
インサイドバイザーダーク　ヘルメットの内部にバイザーがあり、装着が簡単です。

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インサイドバイザーダーク　ヘルメットの内部にバイザーがあり、活動しやすいです。

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry!

This item is a used one, but is in very good condition.
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It was stored in a sleeve soon after it was taken out from the package.

Do you want to buy only one card?↵

If you buy only one card, it will be $130 without any discount. Is it acceptable for you??

Kindly please consider.

Thank you!!

修正後
Thank you for your inquiry!

This item is a used one but in a very good condition.
It was kept in a sleeve soon after it was taken out from the package.

By the way, do you want to buy only one card?
If you buy only one card, it will be $130 without any discount. Is it acceptable for you??

Kindly please consider.

Thank you!!

元の翻訳
We are very sorry to hear that the item shipped by us had been broken.
The item had no problem at the time when we shipped it out, so it is supposed to have been broken during the transportation.
We contacted the carrier, but regretfully they told us that they cannot recompense you because too many days have passed after the delivery.
So pleae allow us to give you a proposal.
Return shipping also involves money.
There will be no merit for both of us if you return the broken item. Can you agree to the solution that we will refund you the half price?
We are looking forward to your reply.
Thank you.

修正後
We are very sorry to hear that the item shipped by us had been broken.
The item had no problem at the time when we shipped it out, so it is supposed to have been broken during the transportation.
We contacted the carrier, but regretfully they told us that they cannot recompense you because too many days have passed after the delivery.
So please allow us to give you a proposal.
Return shipping also involves money.
There will be no merit for both of us if you return the broken item. Can you agree to the solution that we will refund you the half price?
We are looking forward to your reply.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
We are sorry to have caused you trouble this time.
The correct item has been shipped out yesterday.
You will receive it approximately within 7 to 10 days, if it clears the customs without any problem.
You can see the hipping status from the following site.
As for the wrong item, can you please return it to the following address?
We would appreciate you if you return it using less expensive carrier, such as Priority Mail.
We will refund you your return shipping fee, dedctng it from the current order, so kindly please let us know once you complete the return shipping.
If you have any question, please do not hesitate to contact us.
Thank you.

修正後
We are sorry to have caused you trouble this time.
The correct item has been shipped out yesterday.
You will receive it approximately within 7 to 10 days, if it clears the customs without any problem.
You can see the shipping status from the following site.
As for the wrong item, can you please return it to the following address?
We appreciate if you would return it using less expensive carrier, such as Priority Mail.
We will refund you your return shipping fee, deductng it from the current order, so kindly let us know once you complete the return shipping.
If you have any question, please do not hesitate to contact us.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
選手たちは本当に素晴らしかったと日本監督のアルベルト・ザッケローニは語った
観客も輝いていたしファンのサポートも本当に選手たちの助けになった
試合を見たら勝ったこと自体はそれほどの驚きではないかもしれないが、我々は予期せぬ何かに打たれて最後の最後でチームが力を出すことができた

私が日本に来た理由はこのチームをワールドカップにふさわしいチームにすることだった、とイタリア人監督は付け加えた
それを実現できてよかったし、これからもがんばり続けて世界に衝撃を与えていきたい

日本は4年前にも同じことを実現しており、今回は次のブラジルでのトーナメントへの進出を決めた最初の国となったが、本田が91分目に冷静さを保っていなかったらそれは実現しなかっただろう

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選手たちは本当に素晴らしかったと日本監督のアルベルト・ザッケローニは語った
観客も輝いていたしファンのサポートも本当に選手たちの助けになった
試合を見たら勝ったこと自体はそれほどの驚きではないかもしれないが、我々は予期せぬ何かに打たれて最後の最後でチームが力を出すことができた

私が日本に来た理由はこのチームをワールドカップに出場できるチームにすることだった、とイタリア人監督は付け加えた
それを実現できてよかったし、これからもがんばり続けて世界に衝撃を与えていきたい

日本は4年前にも同じことを実現しており、今回は次のブラジルでのトーナメントへの進出を決めた最初の国となったが、本田が91分目に冷静さを保っていなかったらそれは実現しなかっただろう

元の翻訳
I am sorry to tell you that we cannot accept the method you offer.
That is because the auxiliary battery is very expensive,
and if I bear the cost, it is too much for me.
Sorry to cause you inconvenience but kindly please understand my situation.
Thank you.

修正後
I am sorry to tell you that we cannot accept the method you offer.
That is because the auxiliary battery is very expensive,
and if I bear the cost, it is too much for me.
Sorry to cause you inconvenience, but kindly please understand my situation.
Thank you.