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元の翻訳
We sincerely apologize that we have displayed the items that violates the Rights of Intellectual Property.
We have deleted all the items pointed immediately.
We will never display these items.
Also, as the future treatment, we will carefully treat this issue with double filtering, by increasing the checking system if any items which violate the Rights of Intellectual Property are displayed while we are processing.
Again, we apologize for such an issue.
Could you allow us to resume the business?
Best regards.↵

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We sincerely apologize that we have displayed the items that violate intellectual property rights.
We have deleted all the items pointed immediately.
We will never display these items.
Also, as the future treatment, we will carefully treat this issue with double filtering, by increasing the checking system if any items which violate intellectual property rights are displayed while we are processing.
Again, we apologize for such an issue.
Could you allow us to resume the business?
Best regards.

元の翻訳
Music Storm-무료로 음악 마음대로 갖음＆듣고 마음껏
Music Storm는 인터넷에서 공개 된 악곡을 “완전 무료”로 즐길 수 있습니다.장르는, POP이나록, 힙합 등. 좋아하는 음악을 캐시(다운로드) 할 수 있으므로, 전파가 약한 곳에서도 재생할 수 있습니다.
백그라운드에서 재생할 수 있기 때문에, 다른 앱을 보면서 음악을듣는 것도할 수 있습니다.
그리고, 셔플 재생, 반복 재생에도 대응! 좋아하는 노래를 플레이 목록에정리하자!

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Music Storm - 무료로 음악을 마음껏 다운로드 하고 듣기
Music Storm은 인터넷에 공개 된 악곡을 “완전 무료”로 즐길 수 있습니다. 장르는 POP이나 록, 힙합 등. 좋아하는 음악을 캐시(다운로드)할 수 있으므로, 전파가 약한 곳에서도 재생할 수 있습니다.
백그라운드에서 재생할 수 있기 때문에, 다른 앱을 보면서 음악을 들을 수도 있습니다.
그리고, 셔플 재생, 반복 재생에도 대응! 좋아하는 노래를 플레이리스트에 모아 봅시다!

元の翻訳
Music Storm-무료로 음악 마음대로 갖음＆듣고 마음껏
Music Storm는 인터넷에서 공개 된 악곡을 “완전 무료”로 즐길 수 있습니다.장르는, POP이나록, 힙합 등. 좋아하는 음악을 캐시(다운로드) 할 수 있으므로, 전파가 약한 곳에서도 재생할 수 있습니다.
백그라운드에서 재생할 수 있기 때문에, 다른 앱을 보면서 음악을듣는 것도할 수 있습니다.
그리고, 셔플 재생, 반복 재생에도 대응! 좋아하는 노래를 플레이 목록에정리하자!

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Music Storm-무료로 음악 무제한 다운로드 ＆ 무제한 플레이
Music Storm는 인터넷에서 공개된 노래를 “완전 무료”로 즐길 수 있습니다. 장르는 POP이나 록, 힙합 등. 좋아하는 음악을 캐시(다운로드) 할 수 있으므로, 전파가 약한 곳에서도 재생할 수 있습니다.
백그라운드에서 재생할 수 있기 때문에, 다른 앱을 보면서 음악을 듣는 것도 할 수 있습니다.
그리고, 셔플 재생, 반복 재생도 지원! 좋아하는 노래를 플레이리스트에 정리하자!

元の翻訳
The cute gothic style like the second line of Baby, The Stars Shine Bright.
The collaboration with the anime “Kuroshitsuji”.
The official website of TV anime cartoon “Kuroshitsuji”
The official website of TV anime cartoon “Kuroshitsuji”| TV anime cartoon “Kuroshitsuji”
Broadcasting will begin at 24:00 on January 2nd 2014 (Thu) on TOKYO MX!!
Although it is called gothic brand, the taste differs relatively depending on each brand.
The day will come soon when the Japanese gothic brand will expand overseas.

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The cute and cool gothic style clothes seems like the second line of Baby, The Stars Shine Bright↵

The collaboration with the anime (Japanese cartoon) “Kuroshitsuji”↵

The official website of TV anime “Kuroshitsuji”
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The official website of TV anime “Kuroshitsuji”| TV anime “Kuroshitsuji”
Broadcasting will begin at 12 midnight on January 2, 2014 (Thu) on TOKYO MX!!
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Although it is called gothic brand, the taste differs considerably from brand to brand..
The day will come soon when the Japanese gothic brand will expand overseas.

元の翻訳
al62802
Also known as “Mana-Sama (You majesty Mana)”. She is very fond of Gothic And Lolita. This leads her to establish the fashion brand “Moi-même-Moitié” and to design and produce for the brand.
The brand represents Mana-Sama’s world image.
Since it has the men’s size, there are also a lot of male buyers.
ATELIER BOZ
The brand pursues the Classic European and Gothic fashion of the good old days.
The style makes the typical prince look with a jacket and half-pants.

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al62802
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Popular as "Mana-Sama". She is very fond of Gothic And Lolita. This led her to establish the fashion brand “Moi-même-Moitié” and to design and produce for the brand.
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The brand represents Mana-Sama’s world image.
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Since there are men’s sizes as well, male buyers are also abundant.
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ATELIER BOZ
The brand pursues the Classic European and Gothic fashion of the good old days.
Jacket and the half-pant create typical Prince charming style with royalty.

元の翻訳
Plaid and leopard designed punk style!
I like light sneaker type shoes, and once I find cute and thick-soled shoes, I cannot help but buy ones.

When you wear casually, you should choose thick-soled sneakers!
You can match prettily the unique color combination of unique shocking pink jumpsuit with yellow socks!

The existence of Kyary Pamyu Pamyu herself is the symbol of cuteness.

She is never lazy about fashion when she wears casually, which makes her represent the Japanese fashion icon.

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Plaid and leopard designed punk style!
I like light sneaker type shoes, and when I find cute and thick-soled shoes, I cannot help but buy ons.

For casual wear, you should choose thick-soled sneakers!
You can match the unique color combination of unique shocking pink jumpsuit with yellow socks and make it work!

The existence of Kyary Pamyu Pamyu herself is the symbol of cuteness.

She is never lazy about fashion when she wears casually, which makes her represent the Japanese fashion icon.

元の翻訳
It has been 8 business days since I ordered the item above, but I have not gotten refund yet.

Also, as for the following order, the coupon code became error and was not applied. You should pay me back the 20% of the price of the item.

The email from your company says as following.


I wrote a review, too.
Please tell me the code of 20%-off coupon which is applied when I write a review.

I understand the New Year’s holidays cause the delay of the delivery.
I have no problem!
I would like to know the estimated arrival date of the item.
Please let me know when the right tracking number.

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It has been 8 business days since I ordered the item above, but I have not gotten a refund yet.

Also, as for the following order, the coupon code became error and was not applied. You should pay me back the 20% of the price of the item.

The email from your company says as following.


I wrote a review, too.
Please tell me the code of 20%-off coupon which is applied when I write a review.

I understand the New Year’s holidays cause the delay of the delivery.
I have no problem!
I would like to know the estimated delivery date of the item.
Please let me know when you confirm the right tracking number.

元の翻訳
I am sorry for my late reply: I have already finished the work.

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I am sorry for my late reply, but I have already finished the work.

元の翻訳
偽物の商品を売ることは重大な違反となります。意図的に、あるいは知ったうえで偽物の商品を販売する人は全て、個人売買なら2,000,000ドルの罰金、会社売買なら5,000,000ドルの罰金、また、1984年施行・商標偽造行為により１０年以内の懲役となります。加えて、行為を行った人は、商標権者への被害相当額の賠償が課せられます。

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偽物の商品を売ることは重大な違反となります。意図的に、あるいは知ったうえで偽物の商品を販売する人は全て、1984年施行・商標偽造法により、個人なら2,000,000ドルまで、企業なら5,000,000ドルまでの罰金、また、１０年以内の懲役となります。加えて、行為を行った人は、商標権者への被害相当額の民事賠償が課せられます。

元の翻訳
このドル札は備品で、しわも折り目も汚れもない新品です。その紙幣はまだ他人の手に渡ったことのないものです。つまり、私がその紙幣が印刷されて米財務省からビニールで封がされてから振れた最初の人間ということです。あなたの質問の回答になっていれば幸いです。

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このドル札は美品で、しわも折り目も汚れもない新品です。その紙幣はまだ他人の手に渡ったことのないものです。つまり、私がその紙幣が印刷されて米財務省からビニールで封がされてから触れた最初の人間ということです。あなたの質問の回答になっていれば幸いです。

元の翻訳
This is K bass made in K company. It is the Signature Model of the late Taiji Sawada, the former member of X-Japan, LOUDNESS.

There is no problem about the condition of electrical connection and a bend of the neck part, and 95% of the fret is remaining.
There is one scratch at the top of the body. But the painting coating is shiny and metal part is also fine. Though it is used, it is in very good condition.

It is very rare item that the manufacturer has already discontinued.
Currently we can deal only one used item, but it is impossible to restock one it is sold out.
Be sure to purchase as soon as possible!

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This is K bass made by K company. It is the Signature Model of the late Taiji Sawada, the former member of X-Japan, and then, LOUDNESS.

There is no concern on the electrical system, warp of the neck, and 95% of the frets are still remained.
There is a dent at the top of the body, but the coating is shiny and metal part is also fine. Though it is used, it is still in a very good condition.

It is very rare item that the manufacturer had already discontinued the production.
Currently we can deal only one used item, but it is impossible to obtain it if it is sold out.
Be sure to purchase on ahead!

元の翻訳
I got contacted at Buyer-Seller Messages, saying “I would like to cancel the item”.
Are there no problems if I follow a procedure in the order like Order Details⇒Refund order⇒Cancel order⇒Buyers Cancel?
When I deal with it, will my account be degraded?
What is the best way that I should deal with the matter, in order not have my account degraded?
Is it better way that the buyer cancels the order from the purchasing record?

Have a good day!

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I got contacted at Buyer-Seller Messages, saying “I would like to cancel the item”. [dangling modifier]
Is there any problem if I follow a procedure in the order like [awkward] Order Details⇒Refund order⇒Cancel order⇒Buyers Cancel?
When I deal with it [not clear], will my account be degraded?
What is the best way to deal with the matter, in order not have my account degraded?
Is it better if the buyer cancels the order from the purchasing record?

Have a good day!

元の翻訳
E3955
上記の商品について、関税の関係で配送時に￡15.32の追加料金の請求を受けました。私がこの商品を購入した時は、商品広告の値段表示に出ていた「全て込み」だと思っていました。関税に関してのことは全く書かれていませんでしたし、このことは私の購入の決定の判断材料になっていたと思います。
この課税料金に対してはそちらの責任で解決するよう手配するか、私自身が対応してもよいのですが、その料金を工面して頂きたいと思います。必要であれば、喜んで課税に関する証明書類をそちらに提出します。

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E3955
上記の商品について、関税の関係で配送時に￡15.32の追加料金の請求を受けました。私がこの商品を購入した時は、商品広告の値段表示に出ていた「全て込み」だと思っていました。関税に関してのことは全く書かれていませんでしたし、このことは私の購入の決定の判断材料になっていたと思います。
この課税料金に対してはそちらの責任で解決するよう手配するか、私自身が対応できるように、その料金を工面して頂きたいと思います。必要であれば、喜んで課税に関する証明書類をそちらに提出します。

元の翻訳
この品物に対する領収書を発行していただきたいと思います。

こちらのフォームを利用して領収書を提出ください。

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私はあなたが請求したID 00-527-9043番の品物に関する領収書を添付します。
こちらが、あなたの請求の手続きを進める追加情報になります。
氏名: ナカムラ　ケンイチ
スイート番号: 106-537
商品ID: 00-527-9043

私はこの領収書を電子フォーマットで添付しました。御都合の良い時にこの領収書をご確認ください。

添付ファイルはこちら(添付ファイル形式はjpeg, jpg, .tif, .bmp, .pdf, .gifです)
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この品物に対する領収書を発行していただきたいと思います。

こちらのフォームを利用して領収書を提出ください。

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私はあなたが請求したID 00-527-9043番の品物に関する領収書を添付します。
こちらが、あなたの請求の手続きを進める追加情報になります。
氏名: ナカムラ　ケンイチ
スイート番号: 106-537
商品ID: 00-527-9043

私はこの領収書を電子フォーマットで添付しました。御都合がつき次第この領収書をご確認ください。

ここにファイルを添付してください。(添付ファイル形式はjpeg, jpg, .tif, .bmp, .pdf, .gifです)
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元の翻訳
I tracked the hone; I received the order on December 19th and after the item left Vancouver for Japan on December 30th, it has not arrived at customhouse in Japan yet, and the information has not updated. Though I made an inquiry to the post office in Japan, they cannot track the horn as long as it has not arrived at Japan. They say they would like you to find where the horn is, by contacting to Canada Post. I heard the phone number is ★. If it is still missing, Canada Post will make compensation to you.

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I tracked the horn; I received the order on December 19th and after the item left Vancouver for Japan on December 30th, it has not arrived at customhouse in Japan yet, and the information has not been updated. Though I made an inquiry to the post office in Japan, they cannot track the horn as long as it has not arrived at Japan. They said they would like you to find where the horn is, by contacting to Canada Post. I heard the phone number is ★. If it is still missing, Canada Post will make compensation to you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for choosing it for your daughter.
I also gave birth to a baby last summer.
Sincerely I hope your daughter will safely give birth to a pretty child.
You also have 2 cats, don’t you?
I’m sure they are cool as their names.
May you have healthy and happy days from now on too!
Thank you for everything, too.

As my informal gratitude, I will attach a small Maneki-Neko welcoming cat.
I think that will be OK, but please let me know if they are broken while delivery.

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Thank you for choosing it as a present for your daughter.
I also gave birth to a baby last summer.
I sincerely wish your daughter will safely give birth to a pretty baby.
You also have 2 cats, don’t you?
I’m sure they are as cool as their names.
May the coming days be healthy and happy for your family !
I am really thankful for everything.

I am sending you a small Maneki-Neko "Welcoming cat" as a token of gratitude.
I hope it will be fine but in case if of a damage during transportation, please let me know.

元の翻訳
中国でクラウドファンドを受ける: スマート給水器、スマートフォンのボタン、アダルトグッズ

Kickstarterと類似した中国サイトDemohourの最近のファンドを受けて、当社は中国で上昇しているクラウドファンディングシーンの注目を浴びている。この傾向の観点から、今週当社では新しい試みを開始する。国内のクラウドファンディングサイトの上位に集まった、当社人気プロジェクトのレギュラーリストである。フィードバックと当社がいくつのクールなプロジェクトを見つけられるかによるが、毎週あるいは隔週での更新となる。そのため開始するにあたり、最初の上位５点を挙げる。

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中国のクラウドファンドによって生まれた製品: スマート給水器、スマートフォンのボタン、アダルトグッズ

Kickstarterと類似した中国サイトDemohourの最近のファンドを受けて、当社は中国で成長しているクラウドファンディング界に注目している。この傾向を受けて、今週当社では新しい試みを開始する。国内のクラウドファンディングサイトの上位に集まった、当社人気プロジェクトのレギュラーリストである。フィードバックと当社がいくつのクールなプロジェクトを見つけられるかによるが、毎週あるいは隔週での更新となる。そのため開始するにあたり、最初の上位５点を挙げる。

元の翻訳
このデバイスを使用するのに幾つか方法がある。１つの方法はデバイスをサウンド反応に設定することである。例えば、片方のパートナーのうめき声がもう片方のデバイスが振動するトリガーとすることである。フリーハンドで、スマートフォンを振るとその通りにデバイスが反応する。ユーザーの中には少し気持ち悪く感じる者もいるかもしれないが、あなたが別のデバイスユーザーに接続できるようにすることはもう社会に浸透している。こうしたバレイタイン恋人のような人がいない人は、常時「シングルプレーヤーモード」にしていればよい。当社は以前クラウドファンディングを通して、IndieGoGoのVibeaseのような、別のハイテクな性具の成功例を見た。Linkubeは1月7日までにDreamoreで5,833中国元(964米ドル)の売り上げを上げた。(高い売り上げではないが、当製品の目標は達成した!)

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このデバイスを使用方法がいくつかある。１つ目は、デバイスを音に反応するように設定することである。例えば、パートナーのうめき声をトリガーに、恋人のデバイスが振動しはじめたりする。もしくは、手が動かせるなら、スマートフォンを振るだけど、それに合わせてデバイスが振動する。ユーザーの中には少し気持ち悪く感じる者もいるかもしれないが、ソーシャルネットワーク機能を通じて、そばに居ない別のユーザーのデバイスにアクセスすることもできてします。また、バレンタインにプレゼントを贈り合うような恋人がいない人のために、「シングルプレーヤーモード」まで備えている。当社はこれまでもクラウドファンディングを通して、IndieGoGoのVibeaseのような、さまざまなハイテクな性具の成功例を見てきた。Linkubeは1月7日までにDreamoreで5,833中国元(964米ドル)の売り上げを上げた。(高い売り上げではないが、当社の売り上げ目標は達成した!)

元の翻訳
I received 3 items written above, one of which didn’t have a lens cap. Please refund a part of that.

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I received the 3 items above, one of which didn’t have a lens cap. Please issue a partial refund for that.

元の翻訳
Xxx is a Japanese firm which provides system development and IT service.
This time, we are considering for making a nice logo on auguring new company.

The logo is supposed to be upper left part of the website.
http://xxx.xxx.

The meaning of the name of the company is “xxx” and “yyy” in Japanese.
I hope the logo would be simple and stylish.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Xxx is a Japanese firm which provides system development and IT service.
This time, we are considering for making a nice logo on auguring new company.

The logo will be placed on the upper left part of the website.
http://xxx.xxx.

The meaning of the name of the company is “xxx” and “yyy” in Japanese.
I hope the logo would be simple and stylish.
Thank you for your cooperation.